Darklight vs. JaeBurnz354
 

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Verses must be in by tomorrow Night at 10.

Checkin' in... Good luck, JaeBurnz354

Aight you up first DarkLight and yea good luck to you....

yo he never spit so i mean do i win be default yea let me know

No, you didn't spit either. You said verses must be due at ten. Where's your's? We'll just both spit tommorow.

Yea verses were done by 10 yesterday well yours but u neva spit but w/e ight but u goin first

Aight you spit 1st ba word up make sure you come hard

Yo, I need to drop tommorow.

Ok let me rip this kat named dark light.
The only way your shit will be burnin is if u get hit in a spark fight/
Fuck a darklight i'l hit you with the banger and have you seeing the white light.
You think u slice but u not as buttery as the fingers that bart bites/
Jae Burnz on fire so fly andd illusive.
If ya body on the news thats the only time ya face will be on sumthin exclusive/
You have a one hit line fuck a record like that mya and praz song.
You aint from the hood you only herd shootin in nas song/
Line 9 and I can tell you thinkin how can you beat me.
You like darklight, you better buy nightvision goggles cause that the only way u gone see me/
I would like to let you have a chance but that's too risky.
The only thing that will see pussy is ya fist be(meanin you'll never get pussy unless u fistin a chick)

Now are u gone spit since i went first?

Aight, check it...
Here I go, comin' at ya hard, sendin' another nigga to the graveyard
It won't be hard, cause in this poker game I'm holdin' all the top cards
I came here to power drop, Dark is here to merk ur ass, ready or not
You're strugglin' to rise from the dirt as I spit fire at u from the skytop
Try as you might, you'll just never elevate to DarkLight's line of sight
But I'm willin' to battle your ass despite your serious lack of a real fight
Style Change
I smack wack niggas around, I'm gonna knock ya on your crown
Lyrically strangle u and say u drowned, but nobody'll miss RB's Clown
Have ya limpin' with torn ligaments, leave all wack ass MC's spent
Takin' me is just ur imagination's fig-a-ment, I'll split u like Doublemint
Too bad it ends this way, now ur win streak won't last longer than a day
Spittin' in this thread's been child play, but one day you'll find da way
Later

Later

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structure - jae
flow - jae
personals - neida
metaz - neida
punchlines jae

vote jae

drop a vote on this link, make it fair n explained

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133370

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Structure? Oh my fuckin' God. No one can honestly say he has better structure. Fuckin' D/R's yo.

^^^Yo why you beefing over the vote he voted fair i don't even know him so how he dick ridin but yea uppin

You honestly gonna tell me you have better strucutre in this battle?

I don't care bout structure no more i do me but i think i won nd u think u won but this is based on the voters opion duke

this was an alright battle,
JB-i was feeling your verse more but your structure was way off,stretched lines made it not flow very good but your punches were better than darklight's,vocab was around the same..
Darklight:lost's of multi's but i did'nt feel any of your punches,structure n flow were good but you needed harder punches,overall JB'S was the better verse.

VOTE/JaeBURNS
please return the favour:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130025 skforty7
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134245 gunit
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134328 stank

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Punchs:Dark
Flow: Rae
Personals: None
Structure: Rae

Winner = Rae

my name is Jae Burnz man not Jae Burnz but it's ight did u vote??

dam newbs dont know what the fuck their talkin about

structure - God
flow - God
personals - neither
metaz - neither
punchlines God

anyway god took this because his punches hit harder..
jae you punches didnt connect..or they were played or weak..

v/god

v/darklight..........my bad.......................

LOL.. mc.cM said flow and structure beat the fact that I had better punches... Votin' sucks here.

LOL

WOW

you fucks r sad...

structure - DL
flow - i didnt like it on both sides
personals - none
metaz - none
punchlines - DL

Jae i felt you didnt realli hit hard wit ur punches kinda simple, darklight took it with the punches and structure(flow was a lil more on point too)

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Damn darklight u complain alot about voting well i guess if u would of came real hard wuld of been no contest so dont blam votin.Elevate dag man u beef alot.

I can rip you with my hands tied behind my back. I'll tell my mother to type.

I'm beefin' at the half assed votes here. I just don't understand how someone could possibly say ur structure was better. That's ridiculous. A lot of the votes here suck, it's a proven fact.

hmm w/e i smell sum1 hating but w/e man word up...

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Uppin.. This is bullshit.