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dawgfatha_13 V/S illiance
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no d/r,crew,unexplained,or hate votes 5-10 lines must have 200 posts to vote(in other words no herb votes) you spit first due within 24 hours or noshow is declared first to 5 or 3-0 knockout Win by KO |
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5-10 lines??? This ain't no nursery rhyme board.
It's time to decide who can actually rhyme dude, You about to get fucked like your who crew's "behind" you, Break your spine through, need more than lines to defeat me, With a style so stretched I'm surprised you can't "reach" me, Lines finished your styles diminished smile with a grimace,, You need 24 hours while I've just dropped in five minutes! I've got this battle "locked down" with a key to your ass, 5-10 lines? Fuckin retard get back to remedial class, Dawgfatha the distressed emcee trys his best to impress, please- This ain't a classroom-you need more than a pen and paper to test me. Peeze. |
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ayo,
I've got thought seisures,like Harry Benson* Cept mine can get typed,better watch out and feel the tension My punches feel like Muhamed Ali's Rapping ''quality'' superior to Taleb Quali's Trying to be ''brave'' like Atlanta** But I decide if you get happiness,like a kid wit his ''santa'' So decide to back down before its too late Cause I'll ''beat'' you worse than you do to your dick when you masterbate Stop being lonely for chrissakes find a hoe Before you turn insane just like Edgar Allan Poe please *-Harry Benson is the Michael Chricton character in the book:The Terminal Man(good book) **-Atlanta Braves the baseball team |
Illiance
It's time to decide who can actually rhyme dude, You about to get fucked like your who crew's "behind" you, pretty nice. 6/10 Break your spine through, need more than lines to defeat me, With a style so stretched I'm surprised you can't "reach" me, Ok. metiphore so-so. 5/10 Lines finished your styles diminished smile with a grimace,, You need 24 hours while I've just dropped in five minutes! was OK. but it aint tru. 4/10 I've got this battle "locked down" with a key to your ass, 5-10 lines? Fuckin retard get back to remedial class, dont get the first half. second? OK. 4/10 Dawgfatha the distressed emcee trys his best to impress, please- This ain't a classroom-you need more than a pen and paper to test me. nice flo. 6/10 You had nice flo wit nice multi's an some ok metiphores thru-out. But honestly you lacked punches. Just work on throwin sum in wit all your multi's. 25/50 Dawgfatha ayo, I've got thought seisures,like Harry Benson* Cept mine can get typed,better watch out and feel the tension no punch. u talk bout ur seizures 2/10 My punches feel like Muhamed Ali's Rapping ''quality'' superior to Taleb Quali's talk bout urself again. 1/10 Trying to be ''brave'' like Atlanta** But I decide if you get happiness,like a kid wit his ''santa'' atlanta braves..i ge it but NO. santa? NO. 2/10 So decide to back down before its too late Cause I'll ''beat'' you worse than you do to your dick when you masterbate Most played line in the world. Beat-Masterbate. 1/10 Stop being lonely for chrissakes find a hoe Before you turn insane just like Edgar Allan Poe This isn't school. And I feel like I'm there. Readin this. 2/10 [size=1]You had the right idea in your style and ryhme scheme. But everything else lacked. You need to talk about your opponent, not yourself. Use personal's and direct punches. It will help your verse alot.[/size[ 8/50 Vote/Illiance Drop an honest vote on the Battle's in my sig. Thanks. |
aight will do, u actually gonna vote on the poll?
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I would If I could. your main man set this at 200 posts tho. So i can't. Sorry.
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^^if you knew anything about the ''seisures'' im talking about youd know theyre extremely violent and in the book he kills people 5 times his size and shit but w/e.
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you don't kill people with a seizure. It's an medical condition inflicted on your own body. And what book are you refering too?
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aight...
to me illiance took this due to his punches... he had way more "fake" personals, and quite a bit harder punches.. the flow was even.. goes to illiance for this line: Dawgfatha the distressed emcee trys his best to impress, please- This ain't a classroom-you need more than a pen and paper to test me. ^felt that bar right there.. that was a pretty good closer.. v/Illiance No hate. Return an HONEST vote thie battle below plz - Much appreciated http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132933 |
illiance: hmmm.....I don't need to break this battle down completely cuz
it was to me one-sided for real.....no hate tho.........well you had ok punches nothin' too ill to make me stop and read it again....flow was ok & syllable count wasn't together well but it was decent.....vocab was no there well its not important anwayz....creativity/originality was decent nuthin' too special aswell........ dawgfatha_13: well this wasn't a very good drop in my opinion..... punches weren't hardhitting as it should be of course....flow was lacking & syllable was worser the bars length wasn't that well done ya feel me......... vocab was ok but that category isn't important at all...........creativity/originality was low not really there much..... vote: illiance do a honest vote on my shit links in the sig Etcetera vs. me link... |
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c'mon lets get this goddman battle closed.........
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up-to the-up to the uppin............................vote bitches then leave a link.
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illiance def came harder with the punches. I counted and dawgfather only threw 3 punches, the rest of his verse was all about self hype. I dont think the seizures was too bad a rhyme I seen you guys arguing about it up there. They can be inflicted on someone, by massive trauma to the head and so forth. Although if we talk about Epileptic Seizures, then its totally different, and it is a direct result of a disorder in the brain. BACK TO THE BATTLE LOL
Was pretty tight, i think i was feelin illiances flow a lil more. Nice metas, and he was throwin some personals about the lines and shit. v/illiance |
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flo-Illiance punches-Illiance vocab-Illiacne no comp dawgfatha could have came a lot harder to get this win get personal with your punches i was just like you a first but getting personal is the key Illiance come hard got personal and got the win what more can i say dawgfatha was no comp |
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punches - illiance
flow - illiance structure - illiance meataz - illiance word play - illiance vote - illiance elevation needed dawgfatha drop a fair vote on these links...thanx http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133335 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133370 |
iliance takes this cos he actually had punches
ova guy plahttp://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133875yed lines n self-glorification.....elevate vote-iliance return tha fav |
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this was a hella 1 sided battle no doubt illiance took this battle...
illiance won this in all catagories....structure,flow,wordplay,metaz,punche s,creativity... dawgfatha u need ta elevate n some times its betta ta start at the bottom wid peeps wid skill like ur self v - ill drop a vote on this link http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134062 |
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