LethalNJection Vs datruth29
 

10-12 lines
due in 30 mintues
blind spit

good luck

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After I slay him, he'll turn around and be my fuckin Groupie/
This dude is 10-0, but got all of his wins battling Newbies/
You're too weak, you're styles' dirty like a Bum in a Small Park/
Shit, you have no bite, your like stripped wood, Nothin but All Bark/
I can freestyle a fuckin album and Make It A CLassic/
Far as parties, you couldn't rock a house if you "Made It From Granet"/
In battles I usually Project Sound, But I'll just eat you with the Text Style/
KnockOut's, won't be a next round, flame, I stay with heat like Reptiles/
I take care of you "cats" one by one, like vertranarians/
This dude knows it, so he avoids the "beef", like vegitarians/
Coz you cofuse peeps on what the hell you be Yappin ABout/
You just need to "SHUT YOUR TRAP" like you were Catchin A Mouse/

^SLANDER:

doesn't count as part of the battle, don't be scared hun.....

yes i know that doesnt count as my verse its an explenation...

It doesn't matter, I owned you anyways.. lmao, that verse you wrote was >>>>>

lethal took dis one easily..nice spit, good flow and great personals and punches.. datruth iight spit but u need elevation on ur punches and personals they just werent hittin hard at all man..no hate but lethal got dis one

return the favor and vote on da battle in my sig

HIs punches were not hot?... what r you talkin about

well thankz but i really dont think he had better punchlines but w/e

uppin ........please

LMFAO!!!
What is there to say about this battle? Well...Datruth sucks...he bit off of Eminem...(I saw that) which pisses me the fuck off....but his verse in this battle only had a decent structure. No hate dawg, but you need to elevate...
Lethal took this easy wit mad punches and personals...flow was on, and structure was damn near perfect.

Vote- Lethal.

No Hate.

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C'mon dog, i'vr read yo rhymes Limited Edition, how can someone weaker and younger than TELL ME TO elevate...

and if you say that I stole Eminems rhyme then you didn't read it...... I said Eric Sermon's name aNd ya'll are so childish and are on Eminem's dick so hard that I can't say Eric Sermon's name at all... What If Eminem rhymed Rock with Sock.. Can I rhyme Rock with Lock, or would that be stealing? get a life....'

And I still down see what punches you are talking about...

his rhyme sequence first line and down...

TIMES/
RHYMES/
Bark/ (HE TRIES TO STEAL MY OWN PUNCHLINE)
Dark/
Viagra/
niagra/
Brain/
Pains/
machine/
spleen/
sun/
guns/

Lmao, dr suess rhymes man....

punchlines...
"i'm as vicious as a dog with no bark"
VICIOUS DOGs DON"T BARK, THEY BITE, plus you took my punch...

"he's harder than Ron Jeremy on Viagra"
Gay

Then he wants be to blow him, and says I fell dow niagra falls?
Was that even a punchline?

he says that my rhyme is so whack i'm having chest pain..
Senseless, someone explain that...

then he's a surgeon coz he rips my spleen...
is this really that creative?

then he burns me like the sun, then talks about how big my dick is...
Gay again

And you give him a vote because........................

DICKRIDING...

uPPIN FOR SOME HONEST VOTES.. NOT BASED ON ONE WHACK ASS PERSONAL...

K, DaTRuth - I've learnt from battlin' you before you've got some of the sickest punches I've read on this site whcih is pretty good for a flyweight, you had a nice verse right there. A decent combination of personals and punches which set up a massive challenge for Lethal, my fav. line was the opener about battlin newbies and the vegetarian bars, nice stuff.

Lethal your verse was cool but I just got the feelin' it was pre-written as it lacked personals, an the ending talking about 9milli's that was cool, but i dont think DaTruth actually said anything about 'em. Ah well your verse was aight but not good enough to beat DaTruth.

vote - datruth

peace

Truth's was just gay everything about it Elevate on the real

Lethal: You just merked him no need to explain

Structure: Lethal
Flow: Lethal
Punches: Lethal
Personals: lethal
Vote: Lethal

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damn datruth you get fucking mad dick riders on you dont you

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First of all that should be DQ, that wasn't an explaination you dickrider...

and I don't know why ya'll use that same word and tell me to "elevate"..
these zombies are dickriding to the core.. I know hip hop, you people are young and don't know anything...

explain fully......

and the people that tell me to elevate suck... fuck this site, vote against me, dickriders...

young ass kids with no life, and LethalNjection is a nerd.. so i'm not trippin..

peace, uppin

man shut the fuk up.. you stupid little bitch...you the young One!!

and you should just get the fuk out of this site..

ill drop a vote int hsi battle if u drop a vote in miens first http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133281

uppin for votes on this

and please vote and then ill return the favor not the other way around

lol.... loser uppin

Keep it real...lethal won this battle..he had better overal verse...wortdplay was ok...punches were veryg ood..personal!!it hit mad hard!!!word nice vers ethat all i can say about ti...datruth ya mad wack loil...you got mad d/r vots if you ask me....ya verse was ok..but...uit was nothing on lethal verse iight

uppin... honest votes please

Why the fuck's everybody hatin' on Truth? He didn't even bite Eminem in the first place.. It was a completely different concept.. How many times have people mentioned Pac or Biggie in a song? Are they biting eachother? Fuck no.. Just because he said Eric Sermon doesn't mean he bit the rhyme.. Little kids need to learn how to read between the lines.. I know nothing about him being banned for voting for himself.. If that's true, then that's pretty fuckin' wack.. Aside from that, ya'll are hatin' on the guy for no reason.. He's got skills, and just because people notice them, doesn't mean he's bein' dickridden.. If his votes are automatically assumed to be dickrides, who the hell is to say that Lethal's aren't? Seems like this whole battle is full of hate votes, so I'm not gonna bother voting on this garbage.. But I do feel that Truth had a stronger verse.. I'm just gettin' tired of all the schoolgirl beef that this site has been producing lately.. Shit's a joke.

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^Thanx Cuz, you are a real nigga...

lol...

i aint got nothing against eithe rone of these emcees.. but my vote is easily for datruth...


...God... has 1 or 2 decent line sin there... but datruth was hittin him in almost everybar.. there was maybe one where he self glorified, but thats its...

ima break down these verses so ya'll wont be tempted to think im ryding..
...God...
Lol..The truth hurts when you already got banned 2 times....*
shyt this fag doent learn he gotcought bitten eminem Rhymes
^Not that hard of a personal..when you use a link, the link gotta be a rhyme first.. link is just to aid and explain.. you cant just make the link your rhyme.. gotta work it perfectly for it to hit ahrd or atleast decent...this was an okkkk bar..
this dudes rhymes about as vicious as a dog without a bark...
ur chances of winnin are like a blind man seein in dark...
^iv seen both of those lines... played
im guaranteein sparks, my verse harder than ron jeremy on viagra...
this faggot always BLOW-ME (below me) the way he's fallin down niagra...
first line is decent...second lines wordplay is gay...what does niagra have to do with a battle lol..
im stallin so i can grab ya, put ya temples back in ya brain...
stick his tonsils in his stomach, his rhymes so whack he's havin chest pains...
^no
im the best mane, they say im a one man wreckin machine...
they should call me da lyrical surgeon the way i tear apart ya spleen...
^no punch
my heart is mean, i flame this dude like my face was the sun...
only 9 milli u got is ur dick, so dont even talk about guns...
^played...
thoughts:this entire verse was played.. iv seen every last line in there somewhere else.. now when i say played, i mean he didnt flip it original.. you gotta flip played concepts and make them yours.. flow was good.. structure was good.. but it kinda defeats the purpose when the punches are original.


datruth
After I slay him, he'll turn around and be my fuckin Groupie/
This dude is 10-0, but got all of his wins battling Newbies/
^lol.. i checked his record, and they are lol..you should have put a link to make it easier on the reader you understand that..
You're too weak, you're styles' dirty like a Bum in a Small Park/
Shit, you have no bite, your like stripped wood, Nothin but All Bark/
^nice meta
I can freestyle a fuckin album and Make It A CLassic/
Far as parties, you couldn't rock a house if you "Made It From Granet"/
^lol that was sick
In battles I usually Project Sound, But I'll just eat you with the Text Style/
KnockOut's, won't be a next round, flame, I stay with heat like Reptiles/
^eh.. didnt liek this .. it sounded good and there was a meta there, but it was a glorification meta. bleh on those
I take care of you "cats" one by one, like vertranarians/
This dude knows it, so he avoids the "beef", like vegitarians/
^lil bit played.. but it was flipped in a diff way that i heard it.. Decent bar
Coz you cofuse peeps on what the hell you be Yappin ABout/
You just need to "SHUT YOUR TRAP" like you were Catchin A Mouse/
^Good meta
thoughts:fix your structure.. i hate those // - /'s things.. flow was good.. this was a pretty good verse.. except for that one bar or two...


Vote: Datruth

^all dick ryder up ther5e afraid to vote Originally...

no beef to god tho, cause he cool people.. just didnt bring it this battle

okay ummm wow dis battle is crazee lol alot of fukkin talkin 2 me when a nigga bite's off sombody they shouldn't be allowed back on dis site and datz da worst u can do as a rapper 4 real but let me vote yo

opener-lethal it was a personal
structure-lethal
punchlines-truth hands down
creativity-truth
wordplay-nun
multis-nun
personals-lethal
finisher-truth
enjoyed-umm 2 me battlin is personal and lethal's verse was very personal so there 4 he gets my vote truth ur punchlines was hott but datz all u had dunn nahmean im not a hater i like da see niggaz do good so dont think i am bein wun good battle tho

my vote-lethal

PLEEZ RETURN DA FAVOR BOTH OF YA'LL DA LINK IS IN MY SIG

lmaoooo niggaz put me on they black list so i cant vote hey i dont give a flyin fukk i know it was lethal's dumb ass stupid ass nigga

wELL WHATEVER, I DIDN'T BITE SHIT.. UPPIN FOR HONEST VOTES

lmaooo my abdd i take dat back yo lethal didn't black list me u did after u saw i wasn't gon vote 4 u wow dude ur da worst..

DaTruth29
After I slay him, he'll turn around and be my fuckin Groupie/
This dude is 10-0, but got all of his wins battling Newbies/
Played out record personal
You're too weak, you're styles' dirty like a Bum in a Small Park/
Shit, you have no bite, your like stripped wood, Nothin but All Bark/
Not bad wordplay
I can freestyle a fuckin album and Make It A CLassic/
Far as parties, you couldn't rock a house if you "Made It From Granet"/
Ooo
In battles I usually Project Sound, But I'll just eat you with the Text Style/
KnockOut's, won't be a next round, flame, I stay with heat like Reptiles/
No...
I take care of you "cats" one by one, like vertranarians/
This dude knows it, so he avoids the "beef", like vegitarians/
P.L.A.Y.E.D
Coz you cofuse peeps on what the hell you be Yappin ABout/
You just need to "SHUT YOUR TRAP" like you were Catchin A Mouse/
Ok, wasn't worded well enough for full impact

Okish bars, some played lines, some I liked.

God
Lol..The truth hurts when you already got banned 2 times....*
shyt this fag doent learn he gotcought bitten eminem Rhymes
Ok
this dudes rhymes about as vicious as a dog without a bark...
ur chances of winnin are like a blind man seein in dark...
LOL That was dumb
im guaranteein sparks, my verse harder than ron jeremy on viagra...
this faggot always BLOW-ME (below me) the way he's fallin down niagra...
played, and below me has three syllables, not two
im stallin so i can grab ya, put ya temples back in ya brain...
stick his tonsils in his stomach, his rhymes so whack he's havin chest pains...
umm no
im the best mane, they say im a one man wreckin machine...
they should call me da lyrical surgeon the way i tear apart ya spleen...
no times 2
my heart is mean, i flame this dude like my face was the sun...
only 9 milli u got is ur dick, so dont even talk about guns...
played

Waaay too many played lines, you think only newbies drop a vote, but they don't.

V/DaTruth;cause Truth is he had less played lines

Follow my links & do you thing

^^your da truth your a fukin cheater ...

why you black list all the people who voted for me you pussy

honestly i have to vote for datruth his flow was alot better then lethals. I mean lethal half your fukn verse didnt make sense didnt flow at all and you were scrounging for words to ryme. all in all my VOTE is for DATRUTH