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emasraW 07-04-04 10:18 AM

emasraW vs HellRazor
 
Bring it rudeboy!

HellRaZoR 07-04-04 10:25 AM

house rulme dawg
u start spittin
20mins startin now
peace dawg

emasraW 07-04-04 10:42 AM

Im surprised u got the guts to clash me/
Did some1 tell u a lie and say u can trash me?/
Ull never win however way u attack me/
Ur 20 years old and still suffer from acne!/
I dnt care bout u and the crew u back/
U call ur country belgium, i call it Euro Trash/

Half way thru and Im almost done/
Just admit it uve already lost son/
Do u know for acne ppl use cream not cum/
The best advice is not always from ur mum/
No need to be shocked or stunned/
Check the talent/
Ive killed u and i aint evn swore once/

HellRaZoR 07-04-04 11:34 AM

im a killa & im here to trash yo head /
ima smash it agenst a wall till u muthafuckin dead /
get ready to get yo ass kicked in this shit /
not givin a fuck bout the fagget im battlin with /
reach for dem desert E'z , i bet u be screamin for yo mommy /
im bout to kill ,got my nutz on yo chin,what would u do , i am the enemy /
what could u do if we if i start shootin on you /
better start runnin 'cuz im spittin the truth /
2 all my enemy's im here to fuck y'al up with 1 shot /
droppin new flowz drive by with my crew pullin out my glock /
i am crayze runnin shit on the streetz /
bein a gangsta outta hell with sum new beatz /

HellRaZoR 07-04-04 12:03 PM

vote for this shit
honest votes needed
dont take it 2 long i aint got all day
pz

HellRaZoR 07-17-04 03:22 PM

vote for this stuff in here

marx 07-17-04 03:27 PM

I Like Hellrazazors Style

Vote:hellrazor


Yo Vote Marx
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Marx Vs Lyondreds

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

$$ Money $$ 07-17-04 04:47 PM

flow-emasraW
punches-tie
personals-hellrazor
vocab-none
multiz-emasraW
metaphors-none
enjoyment-hellrazor
opener -emasraW
closer-both bad,but hellrazor's was better
best line-hellrazor

vote~hellrazor~

return the favor plz
Money vs Lyondreds

$$ Money $$ 07-17-04 04:49 PM

^^^^
sorry,forgot about the rules

My vote goes to hellrazor because he had the best line,and like marx said,god style
It was a very close battle
But in the end hellrazor's verse was better
emasraW was pretty good to
good job to both

vote-hellrazor

HellRaZoR 07-17-04 06:19 PM

still need sum votes for this 1
peace dawgz

fluidmoon 07-17-04 06:20 PM

ok:
hellrazor- ur verse was good here, ur punches were hard and ur disses were raw,
ya flow is good too, it kinda reminded me of a story or song, overall this was tight, and u do have a certain style
emasraw:some of your lines didn't rhyme and u used me on the end too many times, but overall decent verse, just didn't come as hard as hellrazor.
VOTE:HELLRAZOR

HellRaZoR 07-18-04 07:22 AM

ppl vote honest votes needed

Mc DeaTh. 07-18-04 07:29 AM

emashraW- your rhymes are bunk, they dont rhyme
i really wasent feelin the verse that good
Hallrazor- ur verse was good and better then Ema's because the punches were good n the flow was alot better then emashraw's

v/Hellrazor

Mc DeaTh. 07-18-04 07:30 AM

yo both return the favour n please return a vote, the battles are in my sig

Hustler17 07-18-04 07:37 AM

definitly emasraW

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Mc DeaTh. 07-18-04 07:40 AM

hustler u cant vote because u have to explain ur vote or it is DQed

GrEnAdE 07-18-04 08:11 AM

gid damn emaras took this easy.......it woz ok but he had punches against hellrazor

hell-had no punches
it flowed i give u that
but fukin hell,...rappin bout guns
self glorification
weak as fuck...u gotta diss ur opponent

i said b4 u wud beat ENERGY,,,i take it back
he cnt rhyme but at least he attempts a punch
seriously wack,,,,elevate

La Cosa Nostra 07-18-04 09:23 AM

alrite.. this was one sided... ema.. you need to add a bit of content in your rhymes, those lines were real short bro.. im guessin the 20 year old thing was a personal, but unless youve seen him you dont know if he suffers from acne, so theres no real truth behind your words.. the euro trash line was pretty good (prolly your best line) but it didnt rhyme with back so that sort of killed it.. umm quick... mom jokes are played as shit.. and saying u didnt need to swear really means nothing... u should really elevate a lot before you keep battling.

ok, hellrazor, first bar wasnt that bad.. 2nd bar your talkin about get ready.. should kinda already be right into the disses, but whatever, 3rd bar was pretty weak, no punchline at all. 4th bar, again no punchline, 5th bar, again no punchline, and no real diss at all, your sposed to be battling him not dissing all ya enemies at once lol.. and the closer was pretty weak, self glorification... also, its not really cool to say your a gangsta on the streets when your at home on the computer.. but whatever, its your style bro.. run with it..

im gonna give this vote to hellrazor, cuz the other guys rhymes were really weak.......but u both need to elevate... a lot...

HellRaZoR 07-19-04 06:33 AM

need sum votes for this 1 agen
2 DQ'd
honest votes

Justify 07-21-04 12:49 AM

Didnt really like either that well..some stretched lines on both but overall i think Razor took this for harder punches...return the favor...link in my sig


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