XêN†R!K vs. Miss. Lyricist
 

House rules
10-20 lines

I set it up, so you spit first brah. Doesn't matter when, I've got all day.

fuckif ,you wo;udn't mind spittin first that'd be gangsta cuz i need like 24hours ims pretty blazed ur rules are str8

Oh hex nah... You're a noob. I don't wanna take advantage of you, I'm gonna shut this thing down.

fuck that this may be my fisrt text battle but that aint shit battle me ill submit mine before midnight tonight

haha Miss. Lyricist don't start thinkin' you too good for newb's, you have to be blessed to test 'em.

...hehe just stirrin' it up...

Shut the fuck up, illiance. :D

Alright I'll battle you. We'll both drop before midnight tonight.

oh joy~

but mak e ,sure you dont hold anything back when you spit yours this afternoon cuz whe n i coem with mien im comin ite str8

Okay, okay. This shit's full of freepost.

X-Man is some fresh meat that’s ready to battle
But he still suckin his pacey and shakin his rattle
The noob can’t chew solids, let alone swallow my verse
I think the baby needs to burp cause he’s about to burst
But he thinks he’s a big boy because he be takin his calcium
Though you have a small head, it’s a thick ass cranium
But sooner or later, someone will discover your horrific body
They must’ve wrestled a gator, and IDed you by dentals shawty
The mortician will be certain that something went amiss
I beat your face so much, they’ll be wonder if you had a lift
But don’t get mad if you lose and your record’s no longer even
Remember that cliché? “Everything happens for a reason”
But I’m the captain of this boat, and you’d be good for the fish
I’ll send you overboard and tell the crew “Let him drift”

so fkd i shoudlnt'; agreed to do any battle over this weekend wow

captian of this boat? ya positions been revoked
napkins in ya coat- lips glisten come deepthroat
the only fish driften is that smell from ya snatch
doll its either that or jus ya rotten cabbage patch
id reward ya more if ya werent a crack whore
none ya customers payments in cash anymore
sick of sacks when i should get money stacks
so ima clean you out as if you drank sum xlax
like a practice round you arent worth the effort
hittin mad hotties when im gray like hue heffner

Damn brah, that would've been tight if you had fed offa me.

Uppin for votes.

Miss.
X-Man is some fresh meat that’s ready to battle
But he still suckin his pacey and shakin his rattle
personal wit a weak baby meti4. 4/10
The noob can’t chew solids, let alone swallow my verse
I think the baby needs to burp cause he’s about to burst
still on the baby stuff. 4/10
But he thinks he’s a big boy because he be takin his calcium
Though you have a small head, it’s a thick ass cranium
weak punch. 3/10
But sooner or later, someone will discover your horrific body
They must’ve wrestled a gator, and IDed you by dentals shawty
OK. 4/10
The mortician will be certain that something went amiss
I beat your face so much, they’ll be wonder if you had a lift
doesn't make much sense. A face lift helps. U do his make Up? 2/10
But don’t get mad if you lose and your record’s no longer even
Remember that cliché? “Everything happens for a reason”
played personal. second line was ok. 5/10
But I’m the captain of this boat, and you’d be good for the fish
I’ll send you overboard and tell the crew “Let him drift”
Ok closer. no real hard punch tho. 4/10
Slightly less than mediocre, No offense. Your punches aren't really that hard and you seem to tell more of a story than a battle. I think it's because you drag one thought for 4 or 6 lines at a time. Work on gettin it done in 2 lines the most. Also multi's never hurt, just dont get carried away like some people do.
26/7037%

Xentrik
captian of this boat? ya positions been revoked
napkins in ya coat- lips glisten come deepthroat
you fed. The whole boat deal. 1/10
the only fish driften is that smell from ya snatch
doll its either that or jus ya rotten cabbage patch
Feed again. 1/10
id reward ya more if ya werent a crack whore
none ya customers payments in cash anymore
kinda funny. simple tho. 4/10
sick of sacks when i should get money stacks
so ima clean you out as if you drank sum xlax
good punch. good meti4. 6/10
like a practice round you arent worth the effort
hittin mad hotties when im gray like hue heffner
Didn't flo. dumb meti4. 2/10
I understand your situation an your probly alot better than this straight. So I don't really have any advice for you other than to not feed off people's verse's. It will just lose the battle for you. Unless you have idiot's voting. That's all, don't smoke an battle. Lol.
14/5028%

Vote/Miss. Lyricist

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i would vote but miss lyricist is in the same crew as me...........but we all know who won cough*miss lyricist *cough

I just didn't feel like I had to come very hard, Malefic, but I appreciate your opinion and will take it in consideration dawg.

hahahahhahahahahhahahahah its funny when you go back and read what you wrote..

uppin for more votes

I just felt like I didn't need to come very hard.

Uppin this shit.

X had a tight structure, it was strange though cause some of the shit didnt flow...like the last line. I think i kinda agree...Miss that you do run a thought out 4 to 6 lines, its straight in most cases though, I suppose it can get monotinous though. X your punchlines werent hittin at all, the X-lax line was pretty tight though. Miss Lyricist just had way more punches than you, opened and closed her battle much better. You should had a diff closer the hugh thing just didnt make sense.

v/ Miss Lyricist

alot of it didnt mane any cents i ts all good though she got teh victory

maybe down the line we can battle again :)

Uppin this fucktard... this sleeping fucktard

yea miss L definatly got this.. even if he didnt feed, i doubt that would change my mind.. X, i see you had nice ideas for punches, but you wasted them on horrible wording of the punches.. like they didnt hit at all because the wording was so bad.. structue was good.. flow was alil bit missed because of the wording.. Miss, yea you didnt come to hard on this oone, but i know thats due to you didnt feel you had to, So this win goes to Miss L without a doubt..

v/Miss L

just when you get a chance to, if you could take a lok at my topical battle with trase.. pretty good battle


http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133427

Uppin....

Uppin...

why? u like the freepost or something? this battle is over u won.. wtf?

I need one more vote for it to be official, bitch. Don't you know that you have to have 5 votes to win? God damn.

im really glad im not in tomorrows souljahs.. i think id murder you

Whatever the fuck.

ONE MORE FUCKING VOTE TO WIN. THEN WE CAN LET THIS MOFO REST IN PIECES.

Miss Lyricist won this. She kinda did sttay on that baby thing for a while. And those punches were kinda weak. But X's verse was wack. Miss lyricists verse was a lot better. She didnt win cuz she was better, she won cuz X was worse.

Vote - Miss Lyricist

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