MC AK vs. Miss. Lyricist
 

ayo, i forgot 2 put the dot in ya name that fuicked me up twice.

10-15 lines, no crew/hate/whak votes

u no the rest.

checkin in, start tha clock........................

Check. 30 mins..

miss L, you compell me 2 !break yo ass down!
lyrically RIP you out cha brothel.. dont want !hoes like u around!
pack ya bags, get outta town.. i want chu outta sight..
pimp say ya bad for bidness, you got a voice like 'big syke'
transvestite, "ay look" its 'chick wit a dick' on tha mic
i elevated now, i aint bout 2 loose 'twice 2 a dyke'
you speakin spanish tryin 2 be latino.. but cha 'black'
this bitch's extortin j-lo, like ja-rule did 2 'tupac'
100% whak, for real girl, ya words r a fuken mess
afta i win this battle, i bet she'll blame it on PMS :cussing:
"oh tha stress" she says, her tampons are too 'stuck up'
this chicks gettin nervous, ran outta credit wit lady luck
your lines is fucked up, they should come with warning signs
"git ready for shitty flows n weak ass punchlines" :help:
iight im out.. peace bitch, ajust ya balls, lets hear ya whak rhymes........
(*adjusts balls n throws mic at lil lyricist*) :thefinger

if you relly need em, heres sum explenations.......
line 6 - she beat me last time we battled (my first text battle)
4th bar - she keeps speakin spanish, but i seen her pic, she aint latino.
n uhh.. the lady luck thing is cuz her stats is 4-0, pure luck lol (joke)

aiight fo real, holla back wit sum votes peep.....

no show.......wuts the deal.. D'Q for real man. this shit was sposed 2 be over in 30 minutes, its bin like an hour now.

Ayo, I'm sorry man! I had my hair done and it took longer than I expected.

The dude could throw a good line if he were Bush and going fishin
He keeps on wastin my time by throwing punches yet keeps on missin
His ammunition consists of pebbles because he ran out of paper clips
I’m gonna bust this rebel and leave him sore with stapled lips
He battled with his reflection and the dumb fuck lost to himself
He gambled with one dollar and he lost his entire wealth
I’ll treat you like my backpack and zip your bitch ass up
You’re so small in comparison, I’ll roll you over with a Tonka trunk
The blood’s cut off from yah dick so stop wearing the tighty whities
You’re speaking complete nonsense, like Baxter on Bruce Almighty
Hope my lessons aren’t in vain cause I’m going through the motions
The only way you’d be slick mayne is if I lathered you with lotion

ay miss lady bitch! wuts happenin????????

officially 4 hours late, i shud win this shit by default

I'm soooooo sorry! My sister took forever doing my hair.

And it was about two hours late.

Strcuture: tie

Flow: tie
Punches: miss
Personals: miss
Votes: Miss

mis L ..got this easy yo.
ak you got slaughtered son
i think you underestimated her
better luck next time
miss L good flow punches was all money shots..ak had a couple but they didint hold up...

vote.......miss L

return the fav
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132947
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133225

no beef,

I think MC AK took this one. Both of U have elivated a lot. Miss just needs to stop using simple jokes. Mc's verse would've probably been a lot better if he battled like he was doing just another nigga in, its fun to spit on a female but sometimes it gets overused and dumb. U both did great in this battle, Usually I dont be feelin Miss's verse but she did good. Mc Ak just so happend to have more complex lines than U this time. Here my summery....

Punches:MC AK
Flow:Mc...but U lost it at the end so I'll give it to Miss.
Metaphores:Mc AK

thats it.
V/MC AK.

vote on one of my battles in return. Honestly

ay lethal lunatic dog, u said that lyricist won wit personals, i think u need 2 check that verse again.. none of them rhymes even came close to bein personal.

MC AK, stop hatin. Give props when props are due.

I liked this line of yours:
afta i win this battle, i bet she'll blame it on PMS

No one's used that against me until now. lol

alright

miss. good god
this is what im expecting from you
good structure..good flow
punches were ok...good personals
some multi's good meta's


mc aka: your shit was stretched..it looked like a fuckin story
good punches..lacked personals
ok meta's....bad structure...bad flow

vote: miss lyricist

i aint gon poll vote until u drop a vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133197

Thanks for the votes. Uppin...

And Eye, it's summary.

This was a pretty tight battle, I had to read thru it a couple times to decide who won, ill break it down like this:

Flow: I thought MC AKs flow started off good, but then it was spuratic, it kinda came and went. Miss Lyricist had a good flow the entire verse though, it stayed constant. v/Miss

Structure: Miss lyricist was def on point with her structure, which in turn helped her flow. MC AK you aint really have bad structure, but your 2nd and last lines were streched a lil much, i mean maybe strech em a word or 2 if the syllables match, but it hurts ya flow if its anymore than that.
v/Miss

Personals: MC AK you was all over this one, talkin about the spanish and PMS, and shit...i dont need to say anything more you took this easy.
v/MC AK

Punches: MC AK had some pretty hard hittin punches, but then again so did Miss. Lyricist. I like her punches though because a lot of them are funny, and its fun to read the verse. I think MC AKs hit harder though.
v/ MC AK

Multis: This category also belonged to MC AK he came right out of the hole, throwin punches with multis. Miss Lyricist I wasnt seein any from you, just mainly AB AB rhyming (I do that a lot too though lol).
v/MC AK

Open/Close: Miss Lyricist came hard with her opener, and she exited nicely also. MC AK your opener was aight, but it wasnt as hard as hers, which was a good metaphor. Her closer was also a nice punch, not real hard. MC AK you shoulda threw a punch at the end, you just kinda fizzled out there at the end.
v/Miss on both

Overall Miss wins it just by the skin of her teeth, with the opener and closer.

v/Miss Lyricist

Yo, AK took this in punches. He came harder in my view.. an it seems to me he came hardest of Miss's battles, like peeps dunno how to battle chicks... hmm... I think Miss needs some complexity, like Meta's... both got pretty good flow. Good battle

VOTE: MC AK

Peace

ha ha ah, thanks for the spelling lesson, my bad spelling is only surpassed by my type o's. got nothing but luv but U do need to quit the whole spanish thing. Unless ur mixed or somthin I guess than its okay. wats the situation here? did I spell that right? oh shit. let me go check....I'll be right back in a few.

aiight look i aint hatin, yo verse was pretty well writtenn , but 2 people hav said ur usin personals in ya verse, can sum1 point em out 2 me or sumthin? cuz i aint seen em

and if my verse lacked personals, then why did i bother explainin why i said certain things, like the spanish thing n that.. no beef or nuttin miss, im jus curious why people is sayin sum things that aint true. na mean

Eye, you can go the fuck away now.

And for your info, my grandmother is part hispanic, so that's where I get my spanish from motherfucker.

If it was me she would have gottin ripped. Joke? But i liked wit both of you were doin. its just she had beeter rhymes than you and by reading other battles from both of you she elivated more and she got you more wit punches

its cool if she won, i don care about that, but i git tha feelin there was sum whak votes goin round.....namely tha personals......i got told that my verse lacked in personals and lyricicts had good ones, someone else came out sayin she had better personals then me. only prob is that there wus no personals in her verse....

if tha 2 voters can point em out then ill shut my mouth yo, but i dont see it happenin...... so wus sup?

Uppin this fucktard

that was the shit miss l ur fine and u know how to flow holla back u had some badass punchlines like that bruce almight shit fuk ya u know ill vote for u hey what grade r u in anewayz till then laterz.

oh i have to go, hey give me up a call on my cell phone at (210)391-7405 im latino i hope that isnt a problem call me like at 7:00 my name is chris . bye