Louis Vuittion \/s Orijinal
 

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check in then the 30 minute time limit as you designated will be initiated no dr's no additional rules created...u ready boy? lol..j/p on freestyle... on the real.... follow

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Ayo, you done? I'll drop mines right after you drop yours. I ain't gonna feed-off. If I feed off I'm DQ'd. 'Cuz I'm done, I just don't want you to break the time limit, 'cuz if you do u DQ'd. 10 more minutes to go.

I got myself into battlin’ a dude that’s name of a lower-class of Gucci fabric/
His rhymes is fake like Chinatown sellin ‘Louis Vuitton’ bags made in plastic/
This guy tellin me if I’m ready, but I’m ready to kill this dude in a instant/
If I live 200 miles away from him, I don’t care I’ll kill him mentally in a distance/
In my hips I’m bring the whole 9 from glocks, mags and hot oozies/
This guy brings his whole designer shit from burberry to fake louis’s/
This guy wanna battle, but I don’t know maybe he’s tryin sell bags to me too/
One dolla! One dolla! he says.. Rappers of Designer Brands is his new rap crew/
He names himself after a designer handbag, thinkin’ he a fashion individual/
Keep this in mind, stick to bootleggin’, I’ll stick to bein’ ‘Orijinal’/

Aight man..I droped mines. Whatever, if you don't have your verse by 1:20, you out.
Holla at chea boy.

yea i was done 2 minutes late, my fault got caught up

I'm calm but I don't know about orijinal cuz I got my gat to his frame
I've done destructive shit that'll spin the fitted on this niggas brain
Why aint your kind rare, bitches a reason I keep various lead
Damn its the same flicks, same production leavin Orijinal niggas in the ER dead
have this nigga in medical condition man your flows need serious attention
"Thats Orijinal!" I find your rhymes need devine intervention
Y U step in2 the flames without a fire proof vest is the question
Orijinal against his own master scorched...damn I taught the wrong lesson...

i worked wit the wrong style for you got dam

ill drop a vote in this battle if u drop a vote in mine first http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1386757

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Ori
I got myself into battlin’ a dude that’s name of a lower-class of Gucci fabric/
His rhymes is fake like Chinatown sellin ‘Louis Vuitton’ bags made in plastic/
loui isn't low-class gucci.plastic bags? NO 2/10
This guy tellin me if I’m ready, but I’m ready to kill this dude in a instant/
If I live 200 miles away from him, I don’t care I’ll kill him mentally in a distance/
personal. weak punch. 4/10
In my hips I’m bring the whole 9 from glocks, mags and hot oozies/
This guy brings his whole designer shit from burberry to fake louis’s/
oozie's...lousi's NO. 2/10
This guy wanna battle, but I don’t know maybe he’s tryin sell bags to me too/
One dolla! One dolla! he says.. Rappers of Designer Brands is his new rap crew/
your still on the bag's.....1/10
He names himself after a designer handbag, thinkin’ he a fashion individual/
Keep this in mind, stick to bootleggin’, I’ll stick to bein’ ‘Orijinal’/
STILL.....1/10
No offense. But all you did was hit on one obviouse personal the whole battle. Line after Line. I mean, use it once. maybe. But move on. An hit wit something less-obviouse. No hate. Just tryna help.
10/50

Loui
I'm calm but I don't know about orijinal cuz I got my gat to his frame
I've done destructive shit that'll spin the fitted on this niggas brain
Ok punch. Lak'd Flo. 5/10
Why aint your kind rare, bitches a reason I keep various lead
Damn its the same flicks, same production leavin Orijinal niggas in the ER dead
didn't like this one at all. word'd weird. 2/10
have this nigga in medical condition man your flows need serious attention
"Thats Orijinal!" I find your rhymes need devine intervention
Ok punch. personal. kinda-not really 4/10
Y U step in2 the flames without a fire proof vest is the question
Orijinal against his own master scorched...damn I taught the wrong lesson...
pretty creative. no spark. but not bad. 5/10
You kept it simple. You had plenty of punches. Which is good. Only help I can hand is that you need to spice up your verse wit sum clever use' of personal's and wordplay. Have that an you'll have alot of win's.
16/40

Vote/Louis

Please hit up the battles in my sig wit honest vote's. thanks.

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Wow That Deffinetly Doesn't Sound Honest At All. Orijinal's Text Had So Much More Structure And Harder Rhymes. Louis Spit Deffinetly Basic Rhymes Man Wtih Like No Flow.

Vote = Orijinal

-eB

Aight kinda weak battle here.....
Louis- your verse was nice but i didnt like it that much...your punches seemed pretty good but some didnt seem to hit hard to me...you had an aight flow...your structure was decent...so overall you did well in dis battle...but still elevate....
Orijinal- your verse was nice but i liked it better..plus your punches were good too...some of dem hit hard then his punches...and you had a good flow to go wit your verse and your structure was also decent...but overall you get my vote for better verse and better punches but not by much....

v/orijinal
I will poll my vote when you hit up my battle in my SIG Honest Vote....

aight hmm..

Original.. ya flow was aight.. had some decent punches in there.. i would like to see you focus on ya flow tho.. it wasent the best, but it worked i guess.. lines were a little streched.. structure was aight <-- streching didnt help it...


vitton:flow was good.. but you lacked hard hittin punches.. you had a name play, and gunplay.. but it didnt hit hard foreal at all..

i would say orijinal won this dueto his punches..
v/orig

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134057
^jot up that battle with a Honest vote.. thanks

Honestly I think you both could've came harder. Louis, you had average structure and flow.. fair punches.. probably could've hit harder.. I think O's barrage of personals made his punches stronger than yours.. O also had decent structure and flow.. I'ma go with Orij.. much respect to both of ya tho..

vote/Orijinal


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structure - orijional
flow - orijional
punches - orijional
metaz - orijional
wordplay- orijional
creativity- orijional
opener - louis ( orijinal was good but it wasnt lies)
closer - orijinal

v - orijinal

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134062