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EyeDentdy vs. JaeBurnz354
Ok it will be
10 Lines No dickriding No recycaling No crew votes Must post 1 hour someone spits You go first EyeDentdy |
wait, wat? did I except this, I honestly dont remember. and 10 lines? thats kinda stupid but I'll check in, why do we need an hour for 10 lines? owell, I'll spit than homie, good luck. No beef iieght.
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My punchlined know karati, metaphore'll make U backflip/
even after Ur surgery, J still dont amount to all the pussy I get/ D-Block dont like U, U being hood is all fake/ this niggas from Jers?, but he was raised in Melros place/ and its good U wanna elivate, but an hour, now thats rediculouse/ It gives U enough time to search Ur rymes up on the internet/ U dont want beef, my shit is "lean quisine" in under 30 seconds/ U wanna be a vet, U still aint even a probable battle contestent/ cuz my verse is like dilivery, under 30 minutes and its still hot/ the only way U'll get famouse, is if I get U to end Up on the back of a milk box/ Ur turn homie. |
and no feeding, that'd be fucked up feel me. Uppin for votes yo.
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Nigga beating you is well into my ability.
This dude gone get locked up on a case of mistaken Eyedentdy/ Tryin to be suttin he not. Nigga don't think bout gettin shot so you can sell like Pac/ I guess the bronx was too hard since you moved to L.A. Maybe cause you's a fat nigga, stick to singin Jazy Phae/ The only way you will claim a gang is by getting a fake ruff ryder chain. What the fuck is going on in the brain, cause I'll disconnect ya spinal cord from the rest of ya frame/ When you in a battle with me you at my mercy. My flow sick, just lookin at it got you feelin all tospy turvey/ Yo I hear some of ya rhymes befo homey I hope u not recycaling. |
no, which ones? let mr know and I'll check and write another verse if Its true. U probably think that my flow is the same or something. I was spitin from the dome though but its Nice to know I gotta fan, and also, My stuff says Im in FLA, thats Florida not L.A. but ok. tight verse kid. lets get them votes in.
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Iv gotten personals from lost to misstaken EyeDentdy, be lil more creative homie, I aint hatin or nothin cuz net beef is just dumb shit but Im just sayin, I heard that line in atleast 3 out 5 of my battles. I'm got have change my name "LoSt ChiLd" or some shit just to give niggaz more obvouse things to talk about.LoL, yo get tem votes in.
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EyeDentdy
get rid of / at the end of ur lines...its gay...structure is ok...some of ur lines were stretched though...flow was ok, it fell off a lil though...no metas...wordplay was pretty simple, but decent...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals.. JaeBurnz354 like i told eyedentdy, get rid of the / at the end of ur lines...structure was wack...u had lines short as hell, then switched to lines stretched as hell...flow fell off BAD cause of ur wack structure...a few metas...wordplay was simple, and wack...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals... Overall JaeBurnz354 had more metas...both had a few connecting punches...and neither had good personals...EyeDentdy had the better structure, as well as the more stable flow...he also had better wordplay...so basing off of that...EyeDentdy came with the better overall verse so he gets my vote... VOTE - EYEDENTDY Please return the favor with an honest vote in the link in my sig...thanx guys... |
[QUOTE=JaeBurnz354]
I guess the bronx was too hard since you moved to L.A. QUOTE] ACTUALLY, SOUTH CENTRAL L.A IS A MORE DANGEROUS PLACE TO LIVE... Also it does say that he is in Florida, so that didn't make sense.. The punchlines were lacking in both departments to me.. I did like Eyednty's line about delivery on the last bar though... eyednty's stucture and flow was also a lil bit better.... Jae's verse seemed like it was wrote by someone younger than me, so I wasn't feeling it.. vote/eyednty |
uppin 4 votes.................Vote...................uppin 4 votes
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I think Eyedentdy had a better flow and structure a few streched lines though. Jaeburnz was decent when ya said it out loud but it wasnt amazing.
The punches I thought, JaeBurnz was comin harder with. I had heard a few of the ones that Eye was usin before. I thought Jae was a lil more consistent with the punches though, and they were connecting harder. The metas Jae was hittin a lot harder with, Eye aint use too many good ones. I thought Jae was more consistent from start to finish with this battle, although he needs to work on his structure and flow some. v/Jaeburnz354 |
yo lyrical flowz if i had better shit then eyedentdy and u gave me it cuz it was a lil cloer then why u give him the vote it made no sense
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uh, it aint that seriouse. U wrote an ok verse, I just wanna know which lines I recycled like I said, I'll rewrite my verse if its true. I aint lookin to start net beef no mo so just holler at me about this.
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yo why everything i say you got something bad to say word up you kinda wildin but anyway nah i just hate when people say you did this and that and they feelin you and you win their vote but they don't give you the poll i hate it.Yah sayin
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I feel U kid, but we dont control da polls or the niggaz that vote so watever right. I aint hatin it was a str8 battle. Uppin for Votes.
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word up i feel you lol word but yea uppin 4 votes.
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Damn does anybody vote U........P......P.....I.......N
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we need more votes in this, I cant finish destroying every Gunit101 in RB if U guyz dont help me close battles, vote honestly and we'll do the same in Ur battles.
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Dis shit is old as fuck already I dont even rap wit this style no more, just vote please so we can move on to the next battle.
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Yo, uppin for votes in here man. c'mon, thats bull shit.
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Yo, we needs to uppen them votes, I cant feed my 2 pax rapper if U guys dont vote on battles. let a link and we'll vote honestly.
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uuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnn nnnnnnnnnnn for vvvvvvvvvoooooooooooottttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeessssss ssssss. please.
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wat the fuck?! uppin for these votes, I think Jae rusted away in his chair waiting for niggaz to help us close this. its one of my longest lasting shit ever. I just wanna get my dick sucked and my balls licked you know. sorry, I was thinking out laud. Anyways, just vote on this.
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Denty Won By His Structure
And Burnz Came Hot But My Vote Going To Have Be For Eyedenty |
Oh Yeah I Need
Yall 2 Return Da Favor In Da Battles Slugga Vs Marx Slugga Vs Deliquint |
U should leave 2 things kid, a link, and better explanaition in your votes. nobody feels like going out and searching for the battle. just post a link and I'll vote honestly or put it in Ur sig like a lot of people do.
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eyedentdy was cool in the beginnin, but then fell off near the end
same thing for jjaeburns, he fell off at the end open:jaeburns closing:neither punches:jaeburns metas:eyedentdy rhymes: jaeburns v/jaeburns more winning categories |
I was feeling bit and peices of both works, but JaeBurnz354 did more for me. Good battle. V/Jae
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finally some one voted, dont dq that vote, I just wanna close this shit.
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DAT BATLLE WAS ALRITE
BOTH U GUYS HAD A FEW PUNCHES BUT I FELT EYEDENTDY CAME A LIL HARDER V/EYEDENTDY VOTE 4 DEEZ BATTLES AMAYZE VS FORGOTTEN FLOW http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031 KOOL COL-B http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136465 MURDA-GRAM http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136506 2HARD2LOSE http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487 THANX |
thanx, for the votes, we just need a few more close this one. its greatly appreciated if U could leave more feed back on our verses.
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Punches- Eyedentdy
Flow- Jae Burnz Metaz- Tie Wordplay- Eyedentdy Originality- Niether Structure- Tie Final Vote---Eyedentdy |
ok this was kinda one sided good battle tho but really eye took this one eye u had harder punches good complexity and wordplay you had nice personals and jus an overall better verse ya punches hit alot harder and were on point burnz you had a nice drop 2 but u need 2 elevate and get a better structure cuz it looked stretched out in places and you need 2 get better wordplay and jus up ya talents alot more take the time u was givin 2 drop and put some hot shit 2gether my vote~~~~~~~~Eye~~~~~~~~~~~ |
eye: u had a good flow with some soiled punches that went fairly well and was preety creative and nicely done all around tight verse...
Jae Burnz : u came aight with a decent flow u'r punches wasnt as hard hitting which really hurts and ya creativeness was decent but if u would of came a little more harder it would of went either way but nice battle.. vote: eye |
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