poetic justice vs mic-wrecker
 

rules as agreed
10 lines
blind spit
verses due 15 mins after u ck in

this is ma chk in

lets go//////

grt to chkin man.i gotta go soon......................

ok
 

this guy jumps crews like he a racehorse..gave him tha boot...
only reason he the "general"..cos he likes fuckin his troops...
ima smack this wack middleweight..im tha champ sugar~ray~tonight...
only way u gonna win this fight...is try and wreck~the~mic...or bite...
u drop your shit...n i jus eat..like a chicken u suck..cluck,cluck..
u a college student,still dumb as fuck..walk around goin yup yup
bitch u a herb..u breathe backwards...n need watering alot...
here..ive jus pissed on u...now ive left u destined to rot.....

15mins........................or d/q...............
u agreed to this so drop

listen pussy u comin at a soldier, you aint got no clue who u dealin wit//
i culd slap you wit a dictionairy an u still wuldnt no how hard my words hit//

u a monstrosity to us real MC'z sweatin out pre-school shit in ya linez// cant even get a decent punline off an YOU supposed to be DESTINED TO RHYME??//

wen i started that crew there was a meaning behind it, but it went to waste wit chu//i feel sorry fa ya leaders, how they gonna get u ta try n fit n my shoes//

u a waste of god givin talent, better yet a useless set of skin and bones//
elevate ya rhymes bitch then i may let yu put some pine sol to my throne//

this homo nigga keeps his ass lubed up lovin the penetratin//
but he proves that his tongue is bitch look at his mouth verbally menstratin'

punches:mic
opener:neither
flow:mic
struc.:poetic
vote: mic

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uppin.............................................

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135662

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Fuck Off Mic 2 Weeks Late

Fukin Wanker

Im Closin This Shit

i spit its watever just up 4 votes an call it da day stop bitchin u cant beat me

uppin 4 votes niggaz....................................

whoaaaaaaaaaa i like i like mic that ending was offical and you hit hard with your punches throughout your verse and you had good disses and personals poet you had better struture and flow but who the fuck cares???this nigga murdered you lyrically here and he gets my vote.






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UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!this bitch was mudered

this guy jumps crews like he a racehorse..gave him tha boot...
only reason he the "general"..cos he likes fuckin his troops...

^^ Not so sure that punch sets up correctly...do generals really "fuck" their troops?...iono...not really effective in my opinion

decent

ima smack this wack middleweight..im tha champ sugar~ray~tonight...
only way u gonna win this fight...is try and wreck~the~mic...or bite...

^^ Blah...not feeling it...and the bite the mic line is not creatively done at all

bitch u a herb..u breathe backwards...n need watering alot...
here..ive jus pissed on u...now ive left u destined to rot.....

^^ Lackluster closer...where is the dope wordplay to set up the punch?...it rather fizzled out


listen pussy u comin at a soldier, you aint got no clue who u dealin wit//
i culd slap you wit a dictionairy an u still wuldnt no how hard my words hit//

^^^ More creative than the other cat...but it still didn't hit that hard

wen i started that crew there was a meaning behind it, but it went to waste wit chu//i feel sorry fa ya leaders, how they gonna get u ta try n fit n my shoes//

^^^ Flow is off here...


this homo nigga keeps his ass lubed up lovin the penetratin//
but he proves that his tongue is bitch look at his mouth verbally menstratin'

^^ Hard closer...but it lacked creativity...where's the meta? the wordplay...

Vote: Wrecker...barely...but had better punches...and more creativity

2-0 me sorry buddy uppin close this shit out today!!!!

I gotta give Mic this battle...his multies and Punches were on..but they did not hit alot..but they were enough.....poetic i did nto really like ur verse....ur opener was really weak and it just started to pull togehter when it was over....mic wrecker struc was a little off lol..**Told him about it**.....but...ya mic wrecker won this by a long shot i think....Just my vote.....No d.r.....Just Honest!!

Vote.....Mic ....Wrecker

vote for pj cuz of better punches structure and flow. both verses was str8 and i liked both of them a lot but this definatly goes to pj. yall both could use a lil bit of elevatin tho. fav lines frum both:
pj-ima smack this wack middleweight..im tha champ sugar~ray~tonight...
only way u gonna win this fight...is try and wreck~the~mic...or bite...
mw-listen pussy u comin at a soldier, you aint got no clue who u dealin wit//
i culd slap you wit a dictionairy an u still wuldnt no how hard my words hit//
ok hit up the links in the sig with honest votes.one

Mic Good Destine To Rhyme Bar And Good Closer You Had Harder Punches And Disses Poet Good Punch With Only Way You Win Is If You Wreck The Mic But Your Shit Got Super Whacked In The End.poet Had Better Struture Flows Was Even But Mic Wins With Harder Punches And Disses And He Had Better Vocab By Far

the punches of mic was hitting harder, and the structure was pretty standard,
he finished the way he started, the pace was there

poetic justis, the structure I didnt really get, but you had 2 veses in there that was aiight, but overall im gonna have to give this to mic

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