QBsmasher vs illiance
 

10-15 lines

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30 mins....please check in

fuck it, ill spit first

Wassup man checkin in, i dont give a fuck who goes first i'll post when im done.

peace

Ill rap thru you, and hit TRIGGA MATRIX in waiting
In just one sitting, Ill murder two emcees ratings
I Took aim, didnt think hed stand up for his name
So I did him like pussy lips, FUCK YA, till ya came
Pick which pitch to throw, consistent like menstral flow
Someone called the DEP, my spits bad on the environment
His rhymes are taxed, like fifty percent of his retirement
My tactical placement, is bein broadcast from my basement
Theyre gonna use illiance as Willian Hung's replacement
I spit photons, radioactive when I gain a proton
You love the kids? What are you Jimmy Neutron?
Im "in the zone", and these "spears" are "toxic"
From poison darts to sling shots that how i rock it
Tryin to get to the throne, climbin the ladder shown
But you wont be able to "pass me" like a bladder stone

(DEP) = Department of Environmental Protection

Aight...

Ill the rhyme-soldier Vs Q, that's fine - hold it...
The only way you "beatin'" me is with fake titties an I'm blindfolded!
My flows like I'm submerged you've already sunk with your punk rhymes,
Drowned this runt guy who can't come up for air-or even with a punch-line,
Got you feelin' "negative" already I should'a "filmed" that,
You got amnesia from that punch screamin'-"Where my skills at!!??"
Fool you never had 'em, this battle's now a Biblical war,
Causin' premature death-I've strangled you with umbilical cord,
I figure you poor by the way you can't pay attention,
I'm 19-but with your mom against the wall i feel I'm pickin' up my pension,
Haha it's a bad mistake like rolled tobacco this fags a disgrace,
Talkin' 'bout your mom-like a ethic joke it's jus' bad-taste,
Just like you even thinking bout steppin' up to me,
This text-emcee will eventually find out what the effects will be,
Now vexed you'll see it's like puttin your pinky in a lyrikal socket,
Now this win's jus' like your mom's cell number - in my pocket...

Peeze.

word good shit man....all in the hands of the people now :-)

Yeah man your verse was nice yo good luck.

peace

QB
Ill rap thru you, and hit TRIGGA MATRIX in waiting
In just one sitting, Ill murder two emcees ratings
kinda off topic. good comeback tho. 6/10
I Took aim, didnt think hed stand up for his name
So I did him like pussy lips, FUCK YA, till ya came
Ok. pretty played tho. the whole Cumin thing. 4/10
Pick which pitch to throw, consistent like menstral flow
Someone called the DEP, my spits bad on the environment
His rhymes are taxed, like fifty percent of his retirement
Flo lost me for a sec. Ok metiphore/punch 5/10
My tactical placement, is bein broadcast from my basement
Theyre gonna use illiance as Willian Hung's replacement
Lol. pretty nice. liked it. 6/10
I spit photons, radioactive when I gain a proton
You love the kids? What are you Jimmy Neutron?
kinda fruity. 4/10
Im "in the zone", and these "spears" are "toxic"
From poison darts to sling shots that how i rock it
all self hype. 1/10
Tryin to get to the throne, climbin the ladder shown
But you wont be able to "pass me" like a bladder stone
Last line was killer. 7/10
Pretty good with the exception of a line or two. Your vocab was OK. what impressed me was your wordplay on the last line. That was huge. Nice Work.
33/70

Illiance
Ill the rhyme-soldier Vs Q, that's fine - hold it...
The only way you "beatin'" me is with fake titties an I'm blindfolded!
Eh. ok meti4.not feelin it. 4/10
My flows like I'm submerged you've already sunk with your punk rhymes,
Drowned this runt guy who can't come up for air-or even with a punch-line,
kinda used the same line twice. 2/10
Got you feelin' "negative" already I should'a "filmed" that,
You got amnesia from that punch screamin'-"Where my skills at!!??"
Ok. first word play was kinda stale. second line i liked. 5/10
Fool you never had 'em, this battle's now a Biblical war,
Causin' premature death-I've strangled you with umbilical cord,
Really nice.Closer material. 7/10
I figure you poor by the way you can't pay attention,
I'm 19-but with your mom against the wall i feel I'm pickin' up my pension,
OK played wordplay. 4/10
Haha it's a bad mistake like rolled tobacco this fags a disgrace,
Talkin' 'bout your mom-like a ethic joke it's jus' bad-taste,
Really nice. clever shit. 8/10
Just like you even thinking bout steppin' up to me,
This text-emcee will eventually find out what the effects will be,
Filler. 2/10
Now vexed you'll see it's like puttin your pinky in a lyrikal socket,
Now this win's jus' like your mom's cell number - in my pocket...
Dumb closer. not aimed at QB 2/10
You had a OK verse wit 2 really nice bars. and a few good ones. Mixed wit 1 or 2 bad ones. Not bad overall, your few good ones helped you a lot. Keep up the good work.
34/70

Vote/Illiance

best match up I've voted on so far. both came good.

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votes?

votes? c'mon this is the baest battle ur likely to see on this board...haha

yea this one was kinda closed
qb came good with good vocab ok structure and decent flow
had some nice punches "william hungs replacement" kinda funny
good creativity keep elevatin

illiance
flow was a little off cause of one or two stretched lines
but you had some decent and witty punches you had good wordplay
and good vocab keep it up

this was a close battle overall but i think illiance took this because
he was more witty dont get me wrong Qb was witty too but ill
had harder punches

honest vote
v/illiance
make sure you return the favor

both vesres were hot

punches=both
structure=ill
personal=both
wordplay=Qb

close battle v/Qb

Yo yo yo!
I was feelin both peoples shit
This was one of the closeset battles Ive ever seen
Illiance had the great punches I mean wow especially that "mamas cellphone in yo pocket"

punches-Illiance
Flow-tie
structure-QB
overall-close
That was some funny ass shit

QB I was feelin yo shit to but yo punches wasnt as good as da other youngin
Great try but Im gon have to go wit QB cause his structure was tight and so was his flow

v/ QB

Could yall try and vote on my stuff
Help a brother out I need some votes
Sorry
dont know how to leave links
But this is the battle on Front Lines

Black Pantha vs. HellRazor

This was a good battle right here. Both MCs had punches that were hittin hard. However, QB, you had some lines that were talking about you. And on the other side, ill, you were talkin about his mom a lot. Cuz these battles are only ten lines, you cant really waste lines on talkin about yourself, or your opponents mom..etc. I learned that the hard way in this one battle I got KO'd. Both MCs had great verses, but QB was really focusin on ill. On the other hand, Ill started talkin about QBs mom. He also had that effects will be line that I wasnt really feelin either. Them lines just take up space...Sooo, Imma have ta give QB tha vote...

Vote - QB

holy shit guyz, this was a tough one. I had to go back and read em twice. Unfortuantly I cant vote on the poll yet cuz I dont have twenty posts but I gotta say QbSmasher took it, and the reason why is because all of disses were directed DIRECTLY towards his opponent, not his mom, or his girlfriend, or his crew, and illance's wasn't so....

but they were both hot though!

Word its all good...when you get up to 20 you can come back and poll if ya want.

QBsmasher
structure is good...flow is on lock...u had some metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

illiance
structure is nice...flow is on target...u had some metas...wordplay was tight...only a few of ur punches connected, most of them were either played (moms number in ur pocket, etc. etc.) or just not connecting...no good personals...

Overall
illiance had better wordplay...both had a good structure...as well as a solid flow...both had some metas...neither had good personals...QBsmasher had more connecting punches...and seein as punches r more important then wordplay...QBsmasher gets my vote in a pretty close battle...

VOTE - QBSMASHER

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...