insane16 vs deadly rhymez 01
 

rulez

no crew votes
no hate votes
no feeding off my verse

i spit first

10-15 lines min and max

i spit 20 minutes after check in iight`1`

Check in now iight holla back 1

Yo i dont kno why ur doing this b
the only way ur insane is battleing me
man ya flowz punches rhymez are shit
its D.T.A.Y.T.S. stands fo Dont Take A Year To Spit
Im killin u fast i wont try for a fact
ur ass not on track the fact was that ur Whack
i kno im a killah u cant stand the flow and rhymez
ill rob u and if we battle a Million damn i won a Million times
Stop Tryin to win u suck homie u kno it
u cant get a WIN if u had a baseball glove and i have to throw it


done holla back

U cangt catch a WIN if u had a baseball glove and i have to throw it **

i put it wronge my bad

fake faget rockin corny crew like Ill Intention/
ur rhymes are stuck in the air like brain suspension/
i throw fake thugs into a unknown demension/
where ur left wit time to think like a 5 o clock detention/
nothin but simple lines from a crippled mind/
try to live wit peace at mind maybe i can bestow u wit a peace of mine/
ima warrior i swing swords that crush bones/
and i tear ya lines and leave u kids broke wit no homes/
my shit jus keep comin like an aresol spit/
u couldnt compete wit me lil midget wit an inadequate dick/
u can keep reppin jersey until the games all ova/
here a present from an irish white boy...good luck here a 4 leaf clova.....

uppin for some voters on this shyt.....................

uppin for votezz upppin nigggazzzzzzzzzzz C'Mon YO!!!

this was a close one, ok it wasnt really that close, but my vote goes to insane, the last 2 lines really kilt it, i was definately feelin that. wordplay and flow were good and i liked the combos.

the other dude, i cant really read his name, he came aight but he didnt come as hard as insane. rhymes were average.

uppin for some more voters........................................

Vote=Insane16

Deadly came with some very weak shit.You can't win no battle with that there.You could came a lot better on the punches and had better structure and flow.Insane had better punches,which won him the battle.Need to work on ya structure though.But Deadly just came hella weak and lost for having lack of good punches.


I'll poll when somebody hits up one of my battles,after all,I did take the time 2 read this shit!

AIGHT THIS BATTLE WAS OK...
DEADLY:you need 2 extend your vocab,your structure was wierd,your punches werent 2 great,it jus seemed like you dint care bout this battle...
INSANE 16:you came with better structure,flow,vocab,n punches,my only thing i dint like was some of your lines were stretched n dint fit into the overall flow of your verse.
VOTE/INSANE 16
PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR:"HONEST VOTES "
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130025
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134245
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134418

uppin for some more voters to end dis shyt............

ayo mane deadly rhymes came with flow and some punches but nothin special...up tha game decent verse though mane

insane came with that killah vocab and then quick and stick punches nice flow he cam nice wit it...
Vote Insane16
up the personals fellas

insane dropped harder punches and Personals than DR but neither had a nice enough flow for my liking..Dr that was a pretty weak drop from you i have seen you drop alot better than that..
pz.

uppin to finish it off......................................

someone battle me i need to get serious and start killin all you rookies

infared u r a rookie....upin for the finisher.............

Flow - insane: Neither of you impressed me much in the flow category.. Deadly, your lines/bars were too short, and didn't match up which resulted in choppiness.. insane, your structure was a bit better, and flow was a bit closer to where it should have been, but still quite choppy in certain areas..

Punches - insane: No offense, but somebody teach Deadly how to throw a punch before I do.. I don't think a single bar in your entire verse actually "hit" how it was supposed too.. Insane, not too shabby.. a few of them could have definately been fixed up, but at least you threw some..

Personals - insane: Deadly had none. insane, yours were weak and played, but at least you had one or two.. you played on his crew name, and you played on where he's from.. good enough to take this category I guess..

Multis - haha..

Complexity - insane: As I stated above, deadly, your verse was just too "lost" .. check out my vote layout, and what I've stated and see if you can improve a bit on those aspects.. insane, you've got potential.. keep workin' at it n' practicing the basic.. you'll be hittin heavy in no time..

much respect to the both of you.. keep it up..

VOTE - Insane


one~


n' please return the favor with an honest vote.. link in sig..

Thanks