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SPuL™ 07-05-04 10:57 PM

BluePrint v.s A.I.-SPuL v.s Hypnotic
 
rules we agreed on:

2 minute max of spittin'. Can let the beat run longer if want. I'm gonna let it run till 2:30, but I'm spittin' from :20 to 1:50

house rules on votin'

I'll drop ASAP

good luck.

Sir Cedrych 07-07-04 06:46 PM

mmkay check in damn............................................

Key... 07-09-04 07:19 PM

When dis due?

Sir Cedrych 07-10-04 12:30 PM

the verses will be due on the 13th of june

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SPuL™ 07-10-04 12:52 PM

July 13th?

the god of rap 07-15-04 12:49 PM

psychotic hypnotic product gotta take an antibiotic
aint nobody hotta um..so ona yata yata
god i talk alotta humm diddly atta atta
oochie walla walla um dadidliada but u gotta gotta

DaDemorcrate 07-15-04 03:16 PM

.................................................. ..did ya'll battle or not?

Key... 07-15-04 09:42 PM

They still didnt drop.

Sir Cedrych 07-16-04 07:57 AM

we both agreed to drop on today as in friday so therefore im droppin today

SPuL™ 07-16-04 10:45 AM

^yup. Here's my verse.

www.soundclick.com/spul

Yea, only had 5 mins to spit it, but it's still ok. :)

Lyrics:

You copy sayings from a singer... a fuckin' hoe
I'll knock you out so fast, you will have to go "Whoa!"
Dissin' my flow... man, don't even blow
Cuz on AOL you go... "man, good job on flow"
Tryin' to find flaws in my verse... lay off the crack
Hey, Bush... no bombs in my Iraq!!!
Skills you lack, so you left because you're wack
Went to hit the sack, next day, this bitch is back
Yea, I listened to yo audio... no punches flyin'
Cuz you're only used to makin' a punch, if it's Hawaiian
Man, I ain't fuckin' lyin', yo flow is always dyin'
Except in 3 minutes... when you're fuckin' cryin'
I'ma tie you up like cattle, even though it's my first battle
Like Pedro in Game 7, man, you're fuckin' rattled
Your closers all suck, like yo mom wit yo dick
But you couldn't close it up, even if you was a stitch
I could merk you, bitch, in audio or text
Man, you're such a pest, I thought you fuckin' left?
But soon I'll make you jet, like a motherfuckin' lexus
Have yo ass goin', from Michigan down to Texas
You don't wann mess this, cuz I'm so Reckless
Have yo ass chokin', like yo neck, from yo necklace
Yo rhymes aren't where you left it, where the fuck you kept it?
Then again yo rhymes suck, it's like you hexed it
But dude, you're not alone... you got a crew
People who can't rap, and suck at everything they do
Rhymes are never tru, get ready to feel blue
Cuz you're gonna fuckin' cry, after it's 0-5 you
Have a fucked up name Hypnotic, yo rhymes, I jus stepped on it
Flow like solid magma, I guess yo flows plutonic
Yo rhymes suck dick, Jacko must be yo mother
Can't believe the sperm that made you, beat 1 million others
We kno that you stink, but it's yo beef that is smelly
Cuz you got more fuckin' beef, than Fat Joe, in his belly
Yo ego is so large, it looks like it got a tumor
You are livin' proof, that God has a sense of humor


Yea, also, when you go to my SC, please check out Shady Gangsta beat and vote it hot. :cool: lol need to move up the charts.

The Jett 07-16-04 11:12 AM

^I expected more from a fellow bostonian.....
it's alright. you'll elevate quick jus like u did in text.

Lotta Boston people on this site isn't there?
-I'll drop a vote when Hypnotic drops-

Just drop a vote on my Battle when Soulless drops.pc-1

Key... 07-16-04 12:47 PM

Bostonian..lol

Sir Cedrych 07-16-04 01:16 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/h...attlezmusic.htm

vs. spul

lol at spul posting his lyrics
u shouldnt post ur lyrics, we should get them in ur audio
if not then blah...

The Jett 07-16-04 01:43 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by DeadlyVision
Bostonian..lol
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yeh bostonian...dunno why that's lol. but any ways-

Spul. The beat was OK. It's just throwin on the pretty played side of thing's. The fact its used so many time's kinda kill's the creativity because you really can't flow to it any differant than any one else has already. Your lyrics where good. the delivery is what lacked. The volume was a tad too low. Work on the audio aspect a lil more and you'll be ok.
5/10
Hypnotic. That wouldn't be a beat I would have used but it worked well for you. You fit it nice'ly. Your style,flow,and delivery were good also. Your lyrics were equally as good as Spul's. The only differance was you covered the audio aspect much better. Nice drop. Hope to battle you some time.
7/10

No Hate. Vote Hypnotic

Drop a vote on my Battle wit Soulless when he drops tonight. -1

SPuL™ 07-16-04 02:18 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Hypnotic
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/h...attlezmusic.htm

vs. spul

lol at spul posting his lyrics
u shouldnt post ur lyrics, we should get them in ur audio
if not then blah...

yea, I asked you on AIM if I could post it, and you said "k". But whatever, uppin'.

...Voke... 07-16-04 02:59 PM

Ok, this was a hot battle. Pretty close shit.

SPuL, good job for yo first audio battle. Your quality wasn't as good as Hypnotics, but yo flow was very good. And you had some funny and tight punchlines too. The beat was ok, but it is pretty much played i have that beat too. But overall, you had a tight verse.

Hypnotic, yea, you came pretty hard on this too. Your quality was very very good. Your flow was good too. The beat was ok. But it wasn't the best you could have chosen. You didn't have that many punchlines that hit hard.


overall, I think SPuL took this. In battles, quality doesn't matter, well it does, but punchlines matter more. And SPuL kept on hittinb' wit punches and personals. Hypnotic did too, but most weren't that hard hittin'. So overall, I think SPuL edged him out. No hate.

v/SPuL

Restricted 07-16-04 03:17 PM

Check It..

Spul: 4.5/10
Man You Could Not Even Hear You...You Sound Like Your Real Dull and Not Into It...Your Real Low and Deep.....You Prolly Used That Pitch Shit LMAO...Posting Your Lyrics Is Sumthing Your Not Supposed To Do...But Yea.....You Did Aight..

Hypnotic: 6/10
Your Punches Were'nt That Hard...Kinda Played...But Your Flow Was Solid and Its Obvious Your More Experienced. Nice Drop....Only Flaw Is How-Low Your Voice Was Also...

Vote - Hypnotic

~R~

Sir Cedrych 07-16-04 03:26 PM

nah.....i didnt agree to posting lyrics, im not a textcee...sure i put this together quickly
i wrote it in bout 5 minutes and recorded in 15...and what punches were played?
and my quality is kinda blah.

BigTony.Self 07-17-04 09:55 AM

Ivw gotta go with hypnotic he had the more dominating mic presence
and also had better quality and i could actually understand him when he was spittin

Know-Gimix 07-17-04 11:20 AM

Ima give this one to Hypnotik-- his delivery was better, it was alot easier to listen to than Spul's-- The quality wasn't studio production on either and I think lyrically you both came decently it was just that Spul was too low, monotone not enough emotion in his delivery... Vote Hypnotik.

Sir Cedrych 07-17-04 02:11 PM

uppin............................................. ..........

SPuL™ 07-18-04 02:15 PM

yea, one more vote to close this biatch!! uppin'

Sir Cedrych 07-18-04 09:48 PM

fuck man, cmon vote ppl damn
like it takes a whole day

drop here and we'll vote on ur battles if u leave a link :)

slang 07-20-04 01:23 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by the god of rap
psychotic hypnotic product gotta take an antibiotic
aint nobody hotta um..so ona yata yata
god i talk alotta humm diddly atta atta
oochie walla walla um dadidliada but u gotta gotta

dont write eminem lyrics eminem my fave rapper and you dident even put eminem name on that

Sir Cedrych 07-21-04 02:37 PM

uppin for the 2nd or third time..............................

Hattrick 07-21-04 10:56 PM

aiight

Spul- i hear that beat everywhere man, its aiight tho- you should of put an mp3 option on your soundclick dog, but anyways, your multis were crazy, had a few tight personals, i cant really comment on your flow cuz its a really easy song to flow to. Not bad, i like your text better.

Hypnotic, Ya shit was off the chain, i liked the flow the best, pretty nice personals, not many multies its all good tho. Spuls lyrics were better, but you out-performed in the audio aspect. Tight shit.

Vote: Hypnotic

Hattrick 07-21-04 10:57 PM

dam dog nevermind, yall need 50 posts for this , if i could vote it be for hyp. Sorry for being new to tha forums :\

Sir Cedrych 07-21-04 11:44 PM

it aint no thing though, i aint trippin.............

SPuL™ 07-22-04 09:21 AM

uppin' this for one more vote...

Sir Cedrych 07-23-04 07:40 PM

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Justin Vented 07-25-04 07:55 PM

Vote Spitfury/Hypnotic
Hypnotic Straight Up Killed This Cat. His Punches Were So Much Better Than Spul, Spul You Should Stay Doing Text!!!
Spul- You Was Not The Best But You Could Have Came Harder
Hypnotic- Your Punches Were Just Overall Better
Vote Spitfury/Hypnotic


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