EyeDentdy v.s Kelo
 

1 verse each.
no max to bars
verse is due tomorrow.
no crew, dick riding, recycling, feeding, biting.
any violations on either of these and I wont hesitate to DQ U. just cuz I spit first dont mean U'll get the upper hand.
all in all, keep it tight. I'll write my verse right now. Good luck homie, no beef.
Ps. we arent the same people so dont nobody get it twiztid.
U need 60 post to vote.

Im rippin em dawg, one kilo at a time/
physical master mind, I'll slash Ur lines/ (coke lines)
Im like extacy the way I'll crack Ur spine/
strong enough to bash kilo wit pillows and knock out his rymes/
broke his jaw just for trying to "bite" me/
fuck "MY WALLET", this nigga pickpocketed my IP/
followed me thru the struggle and almost lost his life to the cauze/
went from N.Y. wit me down to the Flaw/ (Flarida)
U want beef? I'll spit fire if claim to be raw/
so U aint sprayin at all, the way U wet Ur sheets is saying it all/
U a demon?, Im shaving Ur claws/
saving U the time U couldv spent doing something possitive/
now U cut Ur wrist off of this....obviouse dominance/
Make Ur whole family evacuate the providance/
Its like Im not even spitting, in truth, Im shiting on U/
wit mental thaughts that pound U, my doggz hound and surround U/
spit so hot, my punchlines'll leave U wit sun tans/
he dont wanna battle, he want me to hear em spit so he could join the band/
but he'll remain a fan, cuz I got more memmber in my crew than Wu Tang clan/
shatter Ur pop dreams and spat on every album U sang/
twisted Ur mind like I was Using E-40 type of slang/

good luck kid, no beef.

Uppin for kilo's verse, if there is someshit U dont understand, just say so and I'll explain the best that I can. also hit Up my battles in my sig and check out my audio.

little nigga get this shit stright my name is kelo and i do this shit from state 2 state.
i was in tha east cost were it was cold as fuck. niggaz in tha hood down there got so much cook they can make a snow man. now i'm down in tha dirty fuckin with tha niggaz with gold in they mouth. u just mad cause ya dick small so tha condom slips off. u claim 2 be a pimp but i get suck by tha bitch u get personal with. u just like tha other niggaz up in hurr sayin tha same old shit. beef u don't want none u just play a small part in this rap battle(play ya party son) keep talkin mad shit. talkin about u know u gone win this 1.(u want beef) come 2 my hood u get 2 slogs in ya stomach shit fall out ya ass people fine ya body in cut up in tha dumbsta and u stink ass.
dawg how u want beef but u don't got no heat.
claim 2 be a thug but u ain't from tha streets.
think about wat tha fuck u gone say before u steep 2 me. cause i'll confu ya ass like i was jet lee.
i'm out.good battle my nigga but they know who win this 1

ya'll vote right cause my nigga spit iight but i think i got this 1.so ya'll just be fa real and vote for tha real nigga who came out on top

BostonLyricst vs kelo .....................ya'll vote fa ya boi in this battle bostonlyricst vs kelo. like i said just vote fa tha nigga ya'll think tha better man is

ok, ya'll get them votes in this shit. Im focused like a rocket scientist on this one. I switched my style and wrote to a beat this time.

The whole IP shit came from this shit started by FiyaGurl in this thread on bitch slaped

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=132957&page=1

hey dawg.u spelled a nigga name wrong.my name spell KELO not KILO.its all good if i win ain't like it goin 2 do nothin cause that ain't my name.hey but on sum real shit u did ya thing cuz.this battle was iight.but i think i got this 1.iight little nigga.were in florida u from? i be in fort lauderdale

Me too yo, Im try to get Ur name fixed, ma bad. I dont honest like Florida and Im plannin on goin back to NY in about a year or so but its ok I guess. Im not gonna be an ill rapper listenin to crunk musik all day, that shit rots Ur brain u know.

I like that 50 cent quote U did, I dont think its biting cuz it wasnt a punchline and any body knows it, right?

beef u don't want none u just play a small part in this rap battle(play ya party son)

Is that biting if 50 cent wrote it or is it kewl since its was probably Used on purpose in that way?

opener - eye
closer - eye
flow- tie
structure - eye
metaz - eye
wordplay - eye
personal - tie

vote = eye

drop a vote on this link..

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133957

iight ya'll keep them vote comin.eye shit was tight.i give my nigga his props. dawg i fill u on that florida shit its hot as fuck down hurr.i'm a nigga and i be gettin sun burn and shit.i'm about 2 go 2 NY in a few weeks but on sum real shit florida is crazy them gurlz be wild they know how 2 please a nigga.n e ways tha battle was iight ya'll people being fa real with tha vote cause eyedendy did spit flame.iight my nigga i'm out

kewl dogg, sorry it took so long to fix Ur name, them florida girls be givin Fire Head fo real son. But I still luv me thug bitch that'll take here Jewery off and start swingin befor I do.Lol. thats ma' dream chick right there.

okay.....dis battle was wun sided eye got dis kelo i couldn't understand ya shit cuzz ya structure was nasty...but umm let me break it down pause

opener-eye
structure-eye...hands down
punchlines-eye
multis-nun
creativity-eye
personals-eye
enjoyed-eye....he got dis shit eazy kelo fix ya structure then maybe u a be aight dunn...

my vote-eye

RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL DA LINK IS MY SIG...GON

EyeDentdy
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...thats newbish...structure was ok...some of ur lines were a lil stretched though...flow fell off a lil cause of the lines that were stretched...u had a few mets...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...decent personal...

Kelo
structure was wack...all of ur lines were fucked up...flow fell off cause of the wackness in ur structure...u had tight metas...wordplay was ok...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
Kelo had better metas...both had decent wordplay...EyeDentdy had the slightly better structure...the more stable flow...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...EyeDentdy gets my vote...

VOTE - EYEDENTDY

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...

dawg niggaz up in hurr be votin fa niggaz they like.u did ya then but tha battle with me and lil q. (lil q vs kelo)they be like that nigga win and my shit was hot.i killed that nigga but they was like he win.i ain't tripin but tham niggaz up in hurr be votin fa niggaz they like

I feel U, I battled Spul and riipped em wit punchlines, I had a bad flow and struct back then but I had ill ass personals and punches. all his niggaz whent crazy just cuz he said, Im not even tryin for this, Im writing it while I take a shit. and he wrote the same shit on his second verse too and they still voted for em. I aint beefin on em tho, just gotta keep movin on and try to elivate Ur way and Ur style. hell Yieah kid.

Yo, I voted in over 20 battles in under an hour and thirty minutes just droppin links like animal poop. Im still waiting on votes. Peepz aint doing they part in here man. Help us starbing MCs out yo. wit just one vote a day, 31 votes a month, and U can help an MC of Ur choice get back on his feet wit a wide selection of better schooling, better health care, better bling and ice, more J lo's.
Ur not doing anything right now, Ur not buissy right. so please, dail our toll free dial up connection, polls are standing by.

sorry I got board. also check out my battles in my sig.