e-dubz vs mixtape
 

iight a punch battle, 4 lines
no hate crew or d/r votes, no feedin
u need 100 posts to vote on this
imma drop now, since u offline drop tomoro mornin
goodluck

its like beatin my dick for ‘glory’ another ‘win’ im cummin to collect
battlin me is a subliminal message..... that your gunnin fo respect
my fans are namin me a ‘bug’ killer.... the way i take out the ‘pest’
treatin this nigga like a ‘vampire’ i put a lyrical ‘stake’ thru yo chest

Ayo E-Dubz "im dope as hell" then not even 1 percent of BEST in your rhymes...
What ya hope to sell? must think im blind in the ear and deff in the eyes...
You a mild threat, play this never be,like chemistry and disect your dialect...
De-mented,ugly,fatal,devestating when this child rep,tried to test the wild vet...

E-Dubz
its like beatin my dick for ‘glory’ another ‘win’ im cummin to collect
battlin me is a subliminal message..... that your gunnin fo respect
seem'd a lil self hype. no punch at Mix. 5/10
my fans are namin me a ‘bug’ killer.... the way i take out the ‘pest’
treatin this nigga like a ‘vampire’ i put a lyrical ‘stake’ thru yo chest
I always see these "lyrical weapons"....no personals 4/10
Your flo was on Key. I was feelin that, just the punches. The one. Wasn't even direct...It could have been used on me. No hate. Jus tryna help. Be more personal
9/20
Mixtape
Ayo E-Dubz "im dope as hell" then not even 1 percent of BEST in your rhymes...
What ya hope to sell? must think im blind in the ear and deff in the eyes...
This was OK. nothing special 5/10
You a mild threat, play this never be,like chemistry and disect your dialect...
De-mented,ugly,fatal,devestating when this child rep,tried to test the wild vet...
sik multi's. all in correct context.nice. good punch. 7/10
Not very personal either but what made your's a little different was your last bar. you had very nice flo with a good use of multi's. Again use personal punches. It'll help. Nice Job.
12/20

Vote/mixtape

Nice from both of you tho.
Please hit up my Punch Battle wit DON in my sig wit an honest vote. Thanks.

^u dont got 100 posts..cant u read, anyway uppin

e-dubz:

its like beatin my dick for ‘glory’ another ‘win’ im cummin to collect
battlin me is a subliminal message..... that your gunnin fo respect
good flow good structure good punch good wordplay 8.5/10
my fans are namin me a ‘bug’ killer.... the way i take out the ‘pest’
treatin this nigga like a ‘vampire’ i put a lyrical ‘stake’ thru yo chest
first line played..second line was also played but good 7.6/10

mixtape:

Ayo E-Dubz "im dope as hell" then not even 1 percent of BEST in your rhymes...
What ya hope to sell? must think im blind in the ear and deff in the eyes...
i wasnt feelin this line that much 1st line you glorified yourself its not good to do that with only 4 lines... 6.8/10
You a mild threat, play this never be,like chemistry and disect your dialect...
De-mented,ugly,fatal,devestating when this child rep,tried to test the wild vet...
good flow..good adjectives lol....umm this was better ..some confusing but i could understand it 8.5/10

vote: e-dubz


no hate i have mad respect for you both

mixtape you would of got this if you didnt glorify yourself in the first line and if the second line hit harder

and e-dubz your last line was played but you still won this because of

consistancy

i second this.. he pretty much said what i want to say..

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Dayum both of those was some hot punchlines...and I was feelin edubz...until I seen the last line of Mixtape...had maad multis in it...It was really hot and ended his shit off nicely. I thought Mixtape was tryin to throw some personals in there too...so that was an added bonus.

no hate...both of these shits was hot and it came right down to the end to give ti to mixtape.

uppin fo votes..

vote mix tape for the hardest punch in one line
v/mix

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e-dubz
its like beatin my dick for ‘glory’ another ‘win’ im cummin to collect
lol...decent
battlin me is a subliminal message..... that your gunnin fo respect
Good ..but as stated played
my fans are namin me a ‘bug’ killer.... the way i take out the ‘pest’
naw wasnt feelin that
treatin this nigga like a ‘vampire’ i put a lyrical ‘stake’ thru yo chest
iight nice flow... decent punclines
overall:10/20

Vote=mixtape
no hate
Ayo E-Dubz "im dope as hell" then not even 1 percent of BEST in your rhymes...
decent
What ya hope to sell? must think im blind in the ear and deff in the eyes...
Lol..nice flow..
You a mild threat, play this never be,like chemistry and disect your dialect...
damn nice punchlines
De-mented,ugly,fatal,devestating when this child rep,tried to test the wild vet...
[b]lol...decent punchlines
overall :11.5/10

close battle...e-dubz you had a nice flow and consistency, but mixtape just came with the punches he brought his "A" game to this one.. best punch wasYou a mild threat, play this never be,like chemistry and disect your dialect...De-mented,ugly,fatal,devestating when this child rep,tried to test the wild vet..i was def feelin that...sorry dubz i was just feelin the flow.

vote mixtape.

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uppin this shit

this was good... i really didnt understand alot of mixtapes verse... and e-dubz just came harder i liked his verse a little more soo im gonna go with e

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Both: In a 2 bar punch battle, you really gotta hit hard and get personal.. and both your verses werent hitting as hard as they should.

Mixtape: I wasnt feelin your wordplay, or flow.. lines were stretched in the first bar.. which def isnt good in a 4 line battle.. but your closer was nice, flowed well, hit pretty hard.

E-dubz: better wordplay and opener, but what brought you down was the lack of a complex rhyme scheme, and that "lyrical stake" stuff is VERY played... like.. every battle i vote for pretty much someones killin someone with a lyrical sumthin.. it just doesnt hit hard enough..

so it comes down to e's opener vs mixtapes closer.... so i reckon mixtape took it..

v/ mixtape

yo. return the favour.. need votes on the battles in my sig

its like beatin my dick for ‘glory’ another ‘win’ im cummin to collect
battlin me is a subliminal message..... that your gunnin fo respect
Ummm...I'll give line a 2/5

my fans are namin me a ‘bug’ killer.... the way i take out the ‘pest’
treatin this nigga like a ‘vampire’ i put a lyrical ‘stake’ thru yo chest
Nice line....4/5

Total= 6/10
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Ayo E-Dubz "im dope as hell" then not even 1 percent of BEST in your rhymes...
What ya hope to sell? must think im blind in the ear and deff in the eyes...
Couldn't really get the flow on that......1/5

You a mild threat, play this never be,like chemistry and disect your dialect...
De-mented,ugly,fatal,devestating when this child rep,tried to test the wild vet...
Ummm....2.5/5

Total= [b]3.5/10
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Ok I wasn't feeling Mixtape drop too much for the fact his flow wasn't that good & his punches wasn't that great.E-Dubz had a good flow & nice punches.He was overall better compared to Mixtape.<<>>Vote=E-Dubz

I'll poll when somebody hit my battle up (2nd link)

Ayo E-Dubz "im dope as hell" then not even 1 percent of BEST in your rhymes...
What ya hope to sell? must think im blind in the ear and deff in the eyes...
^^pretty good line..liked uit...8/10
You a mild threat, play this never be,like chemistry and disect your dialect...
De-mented,ugly,fatal,devestating when this child rep,tried to test the wild vet...
^^Nice closer....nice creativity....8/10

E-Dubs
its like beatin my dick for ‘glory’ another ‘win’ im cummin to collect
battlin me is a subliminal message..... that your gunnin fo respect
Nice shit i liked this shit....8/10
my fans are namin me a ‘bug’ killer.... the way i take out the ‘pest’
treatin this nigga like a ‘vampire’ i put a lyrical ‘stake’ thru yo chest
Urmm..ok..line..seen shit like this before..nice..tho....7.10

Winner..Mixtape ...i think he was mroe creativity...iight...

e dubz:
its like beatin my dick for ‘glory’ another ‘win’ im cummin to collect
battlin me is a subliminal message..... that your gunnin fo respect
^^that was weak and was hardly a punch at all 4/10
my fans are namin me a ‘bug’ killer.... the way i take out the ‘pest’
treatin this nigga like a ‘vampire’ i put a lyrical ‘stake’ thru yo chest
^^good meta's decent punch 6/10

overall : 10/20 (50%)

mixtape:

Ayo E-Dubz "im dope as hell" then not even 1 percent of BEST in your rhymes...
What ya hope to sell? must think im blind in the ear and deff in the eyes...
^^decent punch ok meta 6/10
You a mild threat, play this never be,like emistry and disect your dialect...
De-mented,ugly,fatal,devestating when this child rep,tried to test the wild vet...
^^lol that was kinda weak but funny so decent punch 5/10

overall : 11/20 (55%)

vote: mixtape

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