Fuse vrs.. verbal violence
 

aight rules changed
10-18 lines 18 max
i will drop first
no hater favor or d/r votes i know when its favord
u got 1 hour to drop after me
good luck~one~

ok do you want me to start now or???????????????????

sorry i didnt read the post rules go ahead an do you thing

checkin in now

ayo i lit the fuse,i dispite any new b wit imaginary crews//
light him up like 4r'th of july, his fuse ran out and well all know why//
let me break it down to make him cry,he actin tuff but he aint a guy//
my verbal explosion leaves him hollow like the tin man inside//

he tried but failed,punding him like a railroad spike with a thumb tack nail//
i leave the murder scene with a clueless trail//
fuse actid so tuff but aint live to tell the tail,another unsolved mistory waitin to be bailed//stretched) off a lil but its all good
numerous blows he took so much that his head had to explode//

he fatter than irv gotti or more like joes crack on that bet show//
he droppin his rhyme through his one mice but he aint go no flow//
its fuses funeral yall invited, he about to meet all other rappers ive beat and get reunited//stretched again
super metephors that steady rock//

i get more pussy than a tampon he get more cock than a jock//
my flame scorcher that bring da jason horror and mock//
pull back my fist let it untwist watch my shit as it eternally splits//
bustin lips came so hard didnt know he was hit//

as i drop this finisher thas a trip all my flows spit lyrically ignit//
verticlly puzzeld furious dalerious as i drop it hot he like george alwayz curios//(curios george)

aight dawg u can drop your now aight~one~.........

My turn...


I pull my on weight like i was a freakin OX.//
Verbal Violence aint nothin without his voice box.//
Your heart skips a beat when it saw the name FUSE.//
The only reason they call you Verbal Violence is cause you get Verbaly abused.//
The docters say sadly nothin can cure me.//
You say you a killa but come from mussori.//
Mr. Captain killa i'll make you black out.//
Suppose to be hardcore but see alittle blood and you passout.//
and yeah its Fuse Funeral but hears a suprise.//
Ya'll all come but wont see fuse inside.//
I dont even know why i battle these wussys.//
Check your history tampons only get one pussy.//
And for you to beat me theres a sight blind people wanna see.//
Like i was the president everone and you voted for me.//
truthfully your an ameature to me.//why am i writin you know you cant even read.//
I kill dis kid and body i will get rid.//
You better pray next time i wont rip you like i just did.//

be easy

My be what you meant was bars and i wrote lines i didnt catch it until i reread yours.


cool.//

uppin fa votes pleasssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeee

well 1st of all verbal violence broke his 10-18, 18 lines max rule

but ignoring dat i thought that fuse had tha better flow n the better punch lines although verbal violence had the better structure n metaz fuse won this in my opinion

drop a vote on these links plz.............

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133335

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133370

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133487

thank you

uppin fa mo votes..........................

uppin fo votes aight peeps~one~...................

verbal
you had an ok verse but some of it was talkin about
you was goin to kill him so it was filler and selfglorification
but the punches you did have they were decent
structure was off and the flow was off because of it
you have potential elevate

fuse
nice drop you came harder in the punches category
and personals but i wasnt feelin your structure at all
your flow was off because of the stretched lines
work on that but you had some creativity and wordplay
keep elevating

vote/fuse for harder punches
honest vote

ayo, verbal, a lot of yo lines had way 2 many syllables, especially the starter.. ye and sum lines didnt rhyme, at times u wus biggin yoself more then dissin him, but u wasnt bad dog......

fuse, tha verbally abused line was hot, there was anutha line that i liked 2 but i cant rememba which one, you still had sum problems in yo verse but not as many as verbal, thats why u won this.

vote-fuse

ay one of yall should return tha favor 2, my battles is gittin slept on like a mutha fucka, cept fo tha lyricist one thats goin aiight, but can u please vote on either tha killa one or tha lyriclesolja 1? aiight thanx.

uppin this........................................

my vote dont count yet but i think fuse won this one nice punches and flow

uppin fa votes........................................

uppin fa votes

i give it to fuse he merked dat cat

dis be coo uppin fa mo votes hit a nigga up please

yall i voted for fuse he had way better flow and allaround he was better i geuss

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