Orijinal -VS- Murkz
 

5-10 Lines. You spit first. No D/R. No Crew. No Bitin'. No hatin. 30 minutes to drop your verse.

..You got 30 minutes to drop your verse..after check-in.

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Check-in, yo u the original,nigga u cant be serious ima wrap this battle up enough to make u delirious,nigga u aint a match 4 me how ima rip u is gonna be a catastrafy,nigga dont get above of ya head,cuz as far as im cocerned the original is already daed

Checkin In...
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Hah, this guy wanna battle me, I don't need to drop personals 'cuz we live in the same town/
I can crack all I want him in real life, but right now, let's talk about his structure, looks like he dropped a sentence filled wit nouns/
His name is funny to me, cuz' right now, I'm murkin' a dude when that's his name/
He kept botherin' me on a program, I "killed" him, and know what was a coincidence he talkin to me on "AIM"/
I only need to drop 6 lines 'cuz this guy only dropped a big-ass sentence/
This guy couldn't be "half of me" even if my rhymes was on clearance/

Check-in


Yo,this dude think he funny,hah,i aint have no structure/
but now i got to rip him like peewee kirk at the Rucker,
Dog my name i s murkz, and iim harder than pavement/
Some body call the og's cuz thie original needs a replacment,
dog im new to this game but I never lose/
im still gone be hot in da winter like a cup a stew,
So next verse dog dont say u murked me/
just think bout the name u got change it to the no g

That verse don't count, you can only drop one verse unless there was a special rule of dropping 2 or more verses so that ^^ verse up there don't count.

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Murkz
seein as orijinal said only ur first verse counts ill go off of that...structure is wack...seperate ur damn lines man...there was no flow, which makes that wack...no metas...no wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Orijinal
dont put the /s at the end of u r lines...its newbish...structure was wack...most of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off cause of the stretchness....no metas...wordplay is decent...some of ur punches connected...personals r pretty good...

Overall
neither had metas...both had a wack structure...Orijinal had the better flow, cause at least he had one...he had more, and better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...Orijinal gets my vote...

VOTE - ORIJINAL

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murkz
your seccond verse didnt count but why couldnt you drop some shit like that in your first battle that shit would have be him
orijinal
yo your lines are like two words to long so its kinda of dragging sometimes but you got the better of him you should have dropped a seccond verse to show him whats up

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Orijinal got murked in this one. He came wit ultra stretched lines that would make a fat person feel good about there looks. He had lil to no punches. terrible flow. Id give his verse a 2 out of 10.

Murkz lines had a lot better structure. this should be a ko if Orijinal doesnt cheat himself into getting votes In my opinion. Murkz wasnt too good wit vocab but his punches connected a lot easier and smoother than Orij. His verse gets a 5 out of 10.

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murkz,
honestly you gotta work on your game in general, your first verse was whack, your 2nd was aiight.

Ori,
your shit was decent, not really any multies, wordplay, or anythin special-then again compared to his verse yours was dope, it was def. better then murkz.

vote: Orijinal

murks you played your self with that no struture no punch horrible no flow verse and it gotta count 2 bad cuz your second verse well any verse would've been better.
orignal your punches and disses lacked your personals were ok and your struture and flow was good so you win.
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orijinal was harder and his flow was nice and structure

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i vote for orginal he had a batter stucture and his punchs hit the roofs man peace

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