DON <VS> Vets
 

ok this is the real battle there wasnt a poll on the last one

aight this is a handicap battle 5 vets against me
rules:no bullshit we kno this regular house rules
my verse can be 20-30 lines having to do with all 4 members of this battle this will include my introduction
each of you can have 4 lines nothing else no intros and bullshit to make it better just a raw 4 lines that could have your 2 line or 1 line intro and your punch
it will be due tonite by 2 in the morning
good luck this should be good

check......

check....

chek i made a mistake its 4 on 1 it said 5 on 1 in the rules

I'm done my two bars...now Deleon get at me on aim....same with DV....and restricted i lost your two bars so u need to give me em'......ill post it all so it aint sloppy.....holla at me......

Aight its been decided....the spits will be dropped tommorow due to DV not checking in yet and deleon and DV's spits havent been sent to me...all spits due tommorow......until then one......

checkity check.........................................

Alright Well WTF....Where Is DeLeon...This Shit Was Due Yestereday...

C'mon Ya'll.....Where Is Don At? LMAO

~R~

I pm'ed L.I mine and Dv's verse a while ago i was at a party last night...sorry
lol

rofl.. what if ya'll lose hahha.. that would be so homo :p

What is Lose?

Well I Tried A New Style...

But I KNow Our Shit Hot So Fuck It

Yo LI...When You DRopping OUr Bars?

~R~

To win this kid needs couple good ghostwriters....lol

thisll be my las big one i wont be on here as much i got other plans i got wat i needed from a rapboard jus some easy practice

vets? no wonder this site is fallin under...
the newbs jus admire u leavin em vexed...
this aint rap bitches i dont hear a sound this is text...
wit ur sigs and avys u all high mighty and valiant...
so now lemme get on wit it...text vets dont mean your talent...

Re$tricted:
the idea of a sex change now thats got yopur mind conflicted...
low asteem and dick...shit leaves his girls felopians restricted...
Deleon:
here we got the mexican floated to america...settle the new world...
twice is too much bitch...your bitings for girls...
you dumb no fake personal here...i can easily tell it...
peep his first battle wit L.I....he asked how to spell it...
Deadly:
Deadlys the best outa this bunch...a real queen in a beehive...
jus sad..wen people first heard your voice it was when xbox went live...
go ahead i kno ull win this...but inside you still a fuckin loser...
neva commited crimes...no files on record you like a new computer...
Lyrically insane:
tell em wat u told me...u got prewrites saved so you dont seem overrate...
and he dont fill in location...cause you not hard if it reads Mansion Estate...
he puts up away messages...sayin hes ballin so it may seem...
jus stop you fuckin fake...you didnt even make the freshman team...

now one of you i kno and the rest i dont...
but jus put up your dreams...will u make it?...no you wont...

thats it?thats the verse form the vets?hahaha lets get some votes

We win......i never have battled L.I. just a fake personal....votes

jus let them vote no fake personal d i said how ur dumb simple let them vote and show how they all worship u i dont

^^ Deleon it isnt a fake personal..

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133382

Thats the thread.. lol

He Said The First Time Hoe! Lol

Blah!! Let the votin begin.

And Don u already gave up when u said i'll prolly win..lol

i ignored that first part.. cause i didnt like it..
lmao... the break..
DONS VERSE:

Re$tricted:
the idea of a sex change now thats got yopur mind conflicted...
low asteem and dick...shit leaves his girls felopians restricted...
^5/10.. didnt understand it.. maybe oyu needed a link ?
Deleon:
here we got the mexican floated to america...settle the new world...
twice is too much bitch...your bitings for girls...
you dumb no fake personal here...i can easily tell it...
peep his first battle wit L.I....he asked how to spell it...
^lol.. that was decent..7/10
Deadly:
Deadlys the best outa this bunch...a real queen in a beehive...
jus sad..wen people first heard your voice it was when xbox went live...
go ahead i kno ull win this...but inside you still a fuckin loser...
neva commited crimes...no files on record you like a new computer...
^flow was off a lil bit.. 3/4 lines were aight..3rd line was wack tho..6/10
Lyrically insane:
tell em wat u told me...u got prewrites saved so you dont seem overrate...
and he dont fill in location...cause you not hard if it reads Mansion Estate...
he puts up away messages...sayin hes ballin so it may seem...
jus stop you fuckin fake...you didnt even make the freshman team...
^stretched..and it was iiiiite 6/10
now one of you i kno and the rest i dont...
but jus put up your dreams...will u make it?...no you wont...
^no....

"Vets" verse ..

...1st Off to diss this wanna-be...The original rookie of the month...DeLeon!!...

How long can your wackness last, Pity ain’t enough to get u props..
You got to HAVE respect for us to diss-respect your drops..
I just landed an ill blow, something you cant do, now get off your back
Your verse aint shit to us its cause we just 'Brush' it off like 'Plaque'
^decent 7/10

...Up to tell yall how it goes...My boi...R Rated...aka...Restricted!!...

Stunna Number 1...Shut This Don Bish-Up With My Magic Wand..
Thought You Was Hot..Poof With Proof and Now Your Gone..Yep!
I'm Dropping Hot Like Summer..You Drop 20 Below Freezing..
Punches Got Ya Chest Collasping..Breath Be LiL Like Weezy..Yep!
^eh.. ok 6/10
...You know who it is...the one...the only...L.I.!!...

He got his hopes up just like those of hang gliders…
This kid gets more losses than Banks does dickriders…
Should give him a shovel the way losses are all he digs…
Yah skills are poorly put together just like your sig…
^nice personal. 7-8/10

Ladies And Gent's..Please welcome Deadly Vision to the mic!!...

Ok kid let's end the quarreling now, we should bury-the-hatchet..
I should get out of the business of embarrassing- Italian faggots..
U Vs Vets?.. this aint a match cuz every thing that you spawn is basic...
plus ya styles more debated then war in islamic place's...
^liked the flow.. good punch..solid..8/10

overall vets out did you don.. i saw a nice one here or there form you.. but wasent nearly as consitant as theres.. i dont know how you expected to win this......... not tryna hate or nuffin.really.. i dont know why you did that lol..

hit this up with a honest one(s) :p
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133731 (me vs metascriptz.. 1-1, other dude forgot to poll lol..)

.....Uppin.....

Hey im the only one reppin a different crew...LOOL..
dont matter...lol we all fam

nah hoops i didnt wana win jus wanted to show they aint nuthin on text on a rapboard cause this was my last battle for w while i wont be on here as much im goin on to bigger and better things this was jus a first step my ma's friend anthony decarolis does shows up in south phili and this dj friend a his is letin me use his studio for a lil bit so ill be in and outa there until i finish it uppin.....

well since u want this over with DON

DON
you had good flow punches you had som sick sick sick punchlines
you had some weak flow also..they really out did u obviously here
was 5 of them and 1 of you but..u held ur own nice spit
7/10

vetz
you all had sivck punchlines and tight flow but in my oppinion this
battle was stupid.but whatever..i could beat all of you j/p.. u guyz
had thatstrucutre down perfect..thank li for that one..lol
overall 9/10
just nice job allaround

-S-

up.....

Fasho Up Dis Shit....Quit Sleeping Hoes..

~R~

up for u stupid fucks........

uppin stop sleepin...

wtf... im assuming i can vote becuase its deleon on the poll. anyway don sucked lumpy cock, so he loses. vets were pretty decent, LI came solid but really all of them killed don. wtf, i couldnt even tell when you actually started to throw punches don. seriously, they were almost non-existent.

uppin

Jitjitsu.......................................

Haha...Yea I Will Actually...

Uppin Dis Bitch...One More Vote

~R~

Uppin...Needs One More Vote..

Sumone Please Close This Shit


~R~