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BZ No Mercy vs femcee
no crew, no hate, no d/r, no essays, no line limit ( within reason )
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iight, let me break it down you to you like this, you aint no Jason Kidd, there will be no assists, but if you persist, I might make ya parents reminisce about why you don't fuck around with someone that you never thought preexists. I slap you in the face, throw your ass on the ground, knock you on the floor like Ben Wallace show you how to rebound, next time you might wanna think about coming around. Think your an emcee, I'll murder ya ass like a banshee, you flying around in a tornado just another piece of debris, hear your momma in the background saying "oh did he?" you're just another bitch, stay in the kitchen and fix me my iced tea, or there might be another killing spree. I laugh at people that aren't strong, why I play my theme song, everyone in the arena knew all along, this just isn't a place where fake mutha fuckas belong. Fake? fake, you feel that earth quake, you're about to look like chopped steak, why I just brush my shoulders off, to make sure there's no flakes. Now I must end this thing, I see you flying off that box spring, you might wanna bring some next time, you think about fuckin wit the king.
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I haven't seen what Femcee had to say yet but i didn't like BZ verse at all.
U need to work on the structure becuz it was a little hard to follow homie. |
[b]this aint no hood hop so keep things clean with no mistakes...
...hows this kid lovin 50 but turnin round to dis banks /1 either you down with all g-unit or be through it... ...and if you dont be through it, im goin'a see to it /2 you think your ideal emcee? you just head phony... ...you couldnt comprehend music industry if you read sony /3 your no gangstar, your even to prude to get into hell... ...you want a mic for Xmas, but dude your gettin a dell /4 people wouldnt feel you if you packed advise in sermons... ...youd be committing suicide if you pled to sacrifice a virgin /5[b] |
Well, I have to say that BZ took this one, although his shit was a lil too hard to follow and i didn't care for it, his punches were a lil harder. Femcee your punches were weak they weren't hard hitting at all girl since we have to vote one I will say BZ.
vote=BZ |
bullshit
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damn, need credits...
aight: BZ punches: didnt hit once personals: truthfully none at all creativity: mediocre word play: goin no where structure: try bars, lines or some thing metas: they appeared alot femcee: punches: decent personals: had a few with the first line (links) ceativity:you have a good sense of relation word play: things went ok structure: you had some at least, unlike BZ metas: second bar had some, (g-unit lines) comment: those other two voters have to be dick riders cause femcee obviuosly took this away, no doubt. vote: femcee return the favor, about to battle liyrical flow |
finally a real vote, thankz but you didnt poll it
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i dont have 20 posts yet sorry, but when i get them ill poll it for sure...
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Nigga i'm not a dick rider don't even go there i don't give a fuck about none of these muthafuckas on here i'm just callin it how i see it in my damn eyes. We all have our own muthafuckin opinions on this muthafuckin site.
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And what the fuck difference is a "REAL" vote if all the shit is garbage? LMAO!
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oh your a girl dick rider eh? do you like anal or straight chu cha? (delete fp)
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I like it up the ass just like u nigga, remember that night I fucked u in the ass with my dildo?
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wake up. wake up.
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LoL I dont even know what to say... It looked like there was more than one battle here.
BZ - You need to work on your strucrure...it makes it hard to follow ya shit and things. I read over it a few times though, and I could pick it up (I copy pasted it and broke it down myself actually) BZ did have a lot of multi rhymes in there, and when i broke it down it really did have a nice flow to it. A few punchlines in there also, like the tornado debris. BZ you aint really have any personals though...and actually a few metas. Femcee you had a good structure, flow was decent. Femcee where were the punches? You were comparing him to 50 cent and banks...2 proven emcees? why? Femcee you didnt use any multis, and your opening meta kinda went in his favor. I think you underestimated him...even though he didnt have much structure his verse really wasnt bad. v/BZ No Mercy |
No Mercy's Shit Was Better But Just Like U Im Not That Impressed But U
Beat Her, Ima Look Out For Both Of You |
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Bz structure was off i couldnt follow it and most of your verse was selfglorification
you need to diss not kill personals wins battles you had some metas and you have potential just eleavte femcee you won this because you had punches the opener was ill the dell line had me rollin but you had punches so i say you take this one v/femcee |
uPPiN.............................................
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im givin this to..........femcee
she came wit some better punches..structure was easy to follow...metas was ight but good bz..i wasnt feelin it he talkin like he the lead mc of a colt...good metas and wordplay though but for a text battle he lacked some personals.. |
WEEL I THOUGHT DAT FEMCEE
WON BCUZ BZS FLOW WAS KINDA OFF AT TIMES MOST OF DA TIME I DIDN'T KNO WUT U WERE TALKIN BOUT V/FEMCEE VOTE 4 DEEZ BATTLES PLEASE AMAYZE VS FORGOTTEN FLOW http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031 KOOL COL-B http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136465 MURDA-GRAM http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136506 2HARD2LOSE http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487 THANX |
dont change ur font size to make it NOT STRETCHED. (femcee)
dont change color cus it bothers my eyes. Im not voting because of this.-1 |
FEMCEE IM SORRY GURL BUT YOU WAS OFF THE HOOK, I LIKE THAT VERSE
(YOU WANT A MIC FOR XMAS BUT DDUDE YOUR GETTING A DELL) EVEN THOUGH FEMCEES WAS SHORT IT HIT DIRECTLY WHERE IT NEEDED TO BE LANDED BZ YOUR THE STRUCTURE WASNT HITTING, I MEAN I COULDNT UNDERSTAND IT IF I READ IT OVER 5 TIMES, AND THATS WASTIN MY TIME, BUT KEEP UP THE FLOWWIN YOU GOT GOOD LYRICS JUST STRUCTURE A LITTLE BETTER PLAYA........ IL VOTE JUST LET ME GET MY 20 POSTS IN, IS DAT KOO AND UHH OH YEAH !!! REMEMBER SHARE THE FAVORE IN MY BATTLE AGAINST MARVOULOUSJ I WILL VOTE FOR YOUR UPCOMING BATTLES AS FAIR DEAL MONSOON VS marvolousj TELL ME HONESTLY WHAT YOU THINK 1 |
yeh.im gona have to vote BZ...even though i duidnt like ur verse at all........
structure and flow sucked.no hate femcee-well u had beta structure,,,,,but your punches were really weak.u had gud wordplay and concepts,but your punches were really weak.. vote.BZ RETURN THA FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1433412 |
Aight this battle was really not too hot...
BZ No Mercy: had punches, no structure whutsoever, but he had multis and it did flow ^Fix ya structure aight, that's all.. Femcee: had sum punches but they didn't hit hard, betta structure overall and it did flow easier due to the structure.. ^enhance ya punches or at least the intensity aight.. this verse fell off: either you down with all g-unit or be through it... ...and if you dont be through it, im goin'a see to it /2 ^Femcee but the rest was str8.. i would dissect y'all shit but because of different structures i won't this time.. Femcee you did a good job but BZ No Mercy came harder overall... My Vote/ BZ No Mercy ~wun~ |
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