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hotshh! .vs. G-Ballz
rules are:
10 lines 40 mins to drop after check (im installing some shit) no hate/crew vote no dickriding no biting *checkin in* damn I got 135 credits! |
This Is Hot Shh! *checking In*
Im Ready But I Dont Really Know How This Works |
damn kid you couldn't be hotshh! If I pushed ya in a fire after you keep quiet~
you could only be fire if if you exercised and tried to burn calories on a diet~ you originally from the bronx but now live in the fuckin' place Rhode Island~ blah! only if you you screamed out "I-Landed-On-A-Road" thanks to to G.B.~ you couldn't be a rapper if you was a wannabe "Em" & your visions "see" me~ only way you can flow is if you were flowing in the bottom of any damn sea~ your minds completely blank you ain't see nothing..........just like your sig!~ you stuck at the bottom and can't elevate.......by the fuckin' hole u dig~ I could beat you with my eyes closed...and with no hands to even type~ your rhymez make me sleepy......................as if they were a exhaust pipe!~ facts for the people who don't understand: "I-Landed-On-A-Road" is a wordplay on were he lives Rhode Island..... "Em" & your visions "see": that would be another wordplay on the word emcee |
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in the second line I meant to say flamez instead of fire my bad |
ok LETS GO
VERSE U WACK.... WHAT IS THAT FREESTLING? U WILING/ YOU MAD CAUSE YA BABY MOTHER GOT PREGNANT IN RHODE ISLAND(NOT MY BABY) AN IS YOU CRAZY,I'LL DAMAGE YA, DONT NOBODY REALLY GIVE A FUCK BOUT CANADA! THEY CALL ME HOTSH, CAUSE I SPIT HOTSHIT AND ONLY THING G BALLZ SPIT IS HOT DICK////,U DETECTIVE UNDERCOVER U BE SNITCHIN TO THE FEDS// THEY CALL HIM G BALLZ AKA SUPER HEAD!!!!!! HOW MANY BUMS YOU ATE TO BE 14-5/ COME TO THE BRONX YOU WONT LEAVE ALIVE YOU BETTER BACKDOWN,THIS IS A CRACKDOWN, U AINT GOTTA WATCH UPN TO SEE A SMACKDOWN// U A BUM, AND FUC THE HARDWOOD CLASSICS WE BALLERS FUC CANADA GO STRETCH FOR THEM GYMNASTICS// JUST CALL ME THE GREat, B BALLZ CANT EQUATE, AN DA DAY I GET ATE, U NIGGAS CATCH A STOMACHACHE THE END IF ITS MORE THAN 10 THATS OK CAUSE WE DONT FOLLOW RULES WHERE IM FROM P.S. G BALLZ KISS THESE BALLS |
At 8:00 I Am Out So Talk Ya Shit Now, To My Face And Not When I Go
Ill Find Out Who Won Wheni Come Back And That Was All Keystyle But We Can Do Written Nexttime |
iight this was apretty tight battle but i gotta give this one to my man g-ballz..lol
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G-Ballzdamn kid you couldn't be hotshh! If I pushed ya in a fire after you keep quiet~ lol.. ight nice punchlines you could only be fire if if you exercised and tried to burn calories on a diet~ lol..very humorous you originally from the bronx but now live in the fuckin' place Rhode Island~ decent blah! only if you you screamed out "I-Landed-On-A-Road" thanks to to G.B.~ Okay you couldn't be a rapper if you was a wannabe "Em" & your visions "see" me~ lol... only way you can flow is if you were flowing in the bottom of any damn sea~ IIght.decent your minds completely blank you ain't see nothing..........just like your sig!~ IIGHT. you stuck at the bottom and can't elevate.......by the fuckin' hole u dig~ tight shyt right there I could beat you with my eyes closed...and with no hands to even type~ lol.... your rhymez make me sleepy......................as if they were a exhaust pipe!~ Hahah damn damn son your verse was fukin funny as hell had some nice personals and some nice punchlines... Hotshh! U WACK.... WHAT IS THAT FREESTLING? U WILING/ YOU MAD CAUSE YA BABY MOTHER GOT PREGNANT IN RHODE ISLAND(NOT MY BABY) No that shyt aint even rhyme AN IS YOU CRAZY,I'LL DAMAGE YA, DONT NOBODY REALLY GIVE A FUCK BOUT CANADA! THEY CALL ME HOTSH, CAUSE I SPIT HOTSHIT no you said the same shyt over again.. wack AND ONLY THING G BALLZ SPIT IS HOT DICK////,U DETECTIVE UNDERCOVER U BE SNITCHIN TO THE FEDS// wack THEY CALL HIM G BALLZ AKA SUPER HEAD!!!!!! wacker HOW MANY BUMS YOU ATE TO BE 14-5/ COME TO THE BRONX YOU WONT LEAVE ALIVE YOU BETTER BACKDOWN,THIS IS A CRACKDOWN, U AINT GOTTA WATCH UPN TO SEE A SMACKDOWN// U A BUM, AND FUC THE HARDWOOD CLASSICS you god your structure is horrible WE BALLERS FUC CANADA GO STRETCH FOR THEM GYMNASTICS// JUST CALL ME THE GREat, B BALLZ CANT EQUATE, AN DA DAY I GET ATE, U NIGGAS CATCH A STOMACHACHE No not a good punchline damn son you really need to go to tutorial ..and learn what a punchlines and personal is peace Vote-G-ballz please return the favor in the battle in my sig against orijional thank you |
You Right That Aint My Hottest/ I Was Trying To Battle Someone Else
But Stop Dickriding G Ballz Cause On Thursday At 6;00 Ill Be On And Looking For Another Battle . U Down? |
And If I Lose It'll Be Because Of Your One Vote So Ill Be Coming Hard
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I dont even like G-ballz<---hater!!! But he took this battle.
For the reason that...about 5 lines hotshh! said used in his other battle I read. AN DA DAY I GET ATE, U NIGGAS CATCH A STOMACHACHE THEY CALL ME HOTSH, CAUSE I SPIT HOTSHIT AND ONLY THING G BALLZ SPIT IS HOT DICK/ COME TO THE BRONX YOU WONT LEAVE ALIVE plus he aint even from the bronx!!!! At least i aint know they had a bronx in rhode island. v/G-Ballz |
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wha!!!!!! don't be accusing someone in Authenthik Intelligence of dickriding man!!!!! and how can it be a dickride vote shit my crew & his are doing a crew battle!!!! and if ya talking to me for another battle maybe because my cousins just got back in the city from ontario. |
uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!leave links!
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G-Ballz
structure was pretty good...some of ur lines were a lil stretched though...flow was decent...u had a few metas...some of ur wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...ok personals... hotshh! y do u type in all caps...that shit is mad annoying...structure was wack as hell...seperate ur damn lines man...flow was wack as hell due to the wackness of the structure...no metas...no good wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals... Overall G-Ballz had the better structure...the more stable flow...more metas...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...G-Ballz tore hotshh! a new asshole... VOTE - G-BALLZ PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx man... |
oh shit...
...i just realized were in the same crew... honest mistake...though what i said is the truth... u can get my vote deleted off the poll... but this battle was one sided as fuck... |
ill get that removed ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!
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i give this one to G-ballz.//
cause he proved his worth and i liked his rhymes more although i do feel hotshhhhh when he said that he was in another battle |
uppin leave links also people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yo word i think that this battle was a little close but g-ballz(okay lol) got it to me man. Even though he spit two words twice beside each other (if if) he had better punches to me man. He also had some good personals too.
hotshh i did like the line and the day i get ate u niggas get a stomach ace that was aight to me man but u could have done a little better dawg. If you really were in another battle man i know how the pressure is but u have to take it vote/G-ballz YO YALL DROP AN HONEST VOTE ON MY BATTLE TO MAN http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133732 ~ONE XPLICIT |
uuuuuuuppppppppppiiiinnnnnn 4 vvvvvvoooootttteeeeessssss!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I think Hot won this one for his Use punches. I aint think G tried hard enough and his word play was actually kinda stupid. His flow and structure were strechted and the remark about rhode island and gb did'nt ryme, I took points off for this. Hotshh was more consistant and did a lot better personals. his lines couldv been written better but I thouaght he did enough.
V/ Hotshh! |
uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin 4 some fuckin' votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin for godsakes.......................................... ...............................
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uuupppp uppity up for some votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uuupppppiinnnn 4 votes people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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aight g-ballz got this if he had of just left the first bar. hotshh spitt was weak as fuck n he didnt seem to connect many punches if any. g ballz had good flow, structure, wordplay and metaz. + he was the most creative and he just merked this hotshh. this battle was 2 sided frum the start
v- g ballz |
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