Sporadic Vs Fuse
 

go ahead and do your thing. stop wastin time........

This herb reFUSE's to spit first so he can feed on my lyrical creation
coz he lacks in interlect,
...and an active battle imagination
Your static just not going anywhere, while my elevation is persistant
your talent is like ur avatar character,
...fake and nonexistant
can tell hes a herb by his basic rhymes the name emcee u abuse
shock him with lyrical voltage
...call me a electric surge the way this fuse
taking dignity, strangle your pride for pleasure like your penis when u jerk it
your rhymes are like a current
...whens theres no complete circuit!
Got you SHOCKED got you squeezed like bacteria when your zit popping
squeezing ass cheeks together
...is the only good shit u be droppin!

i'll hit you up its just i'm off work so i'll give it to you tommorow.//
-k-

i forgot about our battle but if possible i can hit you up soon

i will vote when the other guys posts his verse but can u hit this up and the favor will be return
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133541

if you dont drop b4 7 2nite then im cliaming this as a no show..hurry the fuck up

how can u forget!!! its on ur active battle list!!! fuck sake

your lyrics are O.K. i didnt know you had it in you.//
your name speaks for itself not to continue//
Your a hoe nigga, ya'll all the same.//
i can tell you love me by how many times you used my name.//
in all your bars your lackin.//
your name is also a rock band so stop rappin.//
you say you got me shocked so i guess i'm energized.//
by the time you done readin i'll have you teary eyed.//
I'm ya daddy so best belive i'ma spank you.//
Your mom gave me head advice so tell her thank you.//

Faget

ok lol lets start getting some votes up in this bitch...riggghhtttt

uppss.....................cum on 53 views and no fucking votes cantn be serious

in all aspects u both were weak n i couldnt decide on which 1 had the better punches seen as i wasnt feelin any of em i am gon go wid the verse i felt the most (if any) n the 1 i cud enjoy readin most

v - fuse

p.s - sporadic that kinda structure is hella wack n is dam anoying n will loose u votes. i cud read fuse verse easier

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Spor: Nice style/structure (similar to mine). The wordplay with his name helped the punches and personals along, they all connected well and hti hard. Vocab was impressive too.

Energy: Definitely need to work on your style and structure. When its that messed up it doesnt help the punches, which were already weak in my opinion.

v/Sporadic

Spor: Nice style/structure (similar to mine). GET A GRIP STANK THAT STRUCTURES PATHETIC
BOTH WERE KIND OF WEAK DROPS BUT LET ME BREAK IT DOWN.
flow...fuse
structure fuse.
punclines spor
personals fuse
both could of came better... but fuse gave that lil more
plus like this line

your lyrics are O.K. i didnt know you had it in you.//
your name speaks for itself not to continue//
my vote goes to fuse

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you cant rap, watch your back, ill kill you wit my nine, and you think youll be living ha ha ha your mine, ill take your life cuz your the one to tell everyone, i really want to die thats kool wit me cuz ill take you by surprise

u both cant be serious.!!! are u reading the same drop that i was..wack ass faggots..lets get some REAL votes!!

aight well hers my vote

Spor: u gots ta work on ur structure but ur vocab is pretty good... some ok personals in there... not too many multis 6/10

Fuse:aight verse wit a weak vocab n missin some personals but otherwise it was an ok verse 7/10

v/fuse

fav line:you say you got me shocked so i guess i'm energized.
by the time you done readin i'll have you teary eyed

whas this follow the leader..are u lot reading the same drop that i did!!..if fuse wins im taking this to the admin coz this is really fucking pathetic

justice is done...upps..if you dont understand the wordplay in my verse then i will explain

Ok
 

IMA BREAK IT DOWN.........



SPORADIC
This herb reFUSE's to spit first so he can feed on my lyrical creation
coz he lacks in interlect,
...and an active battle imagination
OK....PUNCH...OK WORDPLAY 7/10
Your static just not going anywhere, while my elevation is persistant
your talent is like ur avatar character,
...fake and nonexistant
BETA WORDPLAY..DECENT PUNCH 8/10
can tell hes a herb by his basic rhymes the name emcee u abuse
shock him with lyrical voltage
...call me a electric surge the way this fuse
2ND LINE OK...6/10
taking dignity, strangle your pride for pleasure like your penis when u jerk it
your rhymes are like a current
...whens theres no complete circuit!
HAHA...GUD PUNCH...WUDVE BIN FIRE IF U HAD BETA SET-UP...8/10
Got you SHOCKED got you squeezed like bacteria when your zit popping
squeezing ass cheeks together
...is the only good shit u be droppin!
SHIT LINES R PLAYED BUT IT WOZ ORIGINAL...6/10


FUSE

your lyrics are O.K. i didnt know you had it in you.//
your name speaks for itself not to continue//
2ND LINE OK...BUT THA FIRST U JUS GVE HIM PROPS 5/10
Your a hoe nigga, ya'll all the same.//
i can tell you love me by how many times you used my name.//
BLAH...NOTHIN THERE...PLAYED PUNCH 3/10
in all your bars your lackin.//
your name is also a rock band so stop rappin.//
WACK...VERY BASIC...3/10
you say you got me shocked so i guess i'm energized.//
by the time you done readin i'll have you teary eyed.//
BETA WORDPLAY..STILL WEAK PUNCH 6/10
I'm ya daddy so best belive i'ma spank you.//
Your mom gave me head advice so tell her thank you.//
PLAYED TO FUCK....NO ORIGINALITY 3/10

FUSE 20/50....played lines,hardly any wordplay...only thing decent woz flow,apart from that it looked like it had bin wrote in 1 minute....ELEVATE#

SPORADIC 35/50...good wordplay flippin off his name,although u did go on a bit 2 much on his name,u shudve done sumert else as well.
sum gud punches...id say set them up beta n theyll hit harder.....overall fairly solid,nice structure/flow.......decent drop

vote-sporadic

I FEEL YA 2 SPARADIC COS FUSE WAS LAME,U WON THIS EASY...N ANY DECENT MC WUD TELL YA THA SAME...

~Sporadic~

This herb reFUSE's to spit first so he can feed on my lyrical creation
coz he lacks in interlect,
...and an active battle imagination
^Ha ha great personal, good open^

Your static just not going anywhere, while my elevation is persistant
your talent is like ur avatar character,
...fake and nonexistant
^Nice hard hitting punch^

can tell hes a herb by his basic rhymes the name emcee u abuse
shock him with lyrical voltage
...call me a electric surge the way this fuse
^Nice bar^

taking dignity, strangle your pride for pleasure like your penis when u jerk it
your rhymes are like a current
...whens theres no complete circuit!
^Best bar so far haha nice punch^

Got you SHOCKED got you squeezed like bacteria when your zit popping
squeezing ass cheeks together
...is the only good shit u be droppin!
^Lol dark close^

~Fuse~

your lyrics are O.K. i didnt know you had it in you.//
your name speaks for itself not to continue//
^Poor opener, poor punch^

Your a hoe nigga, ya'll all the same.//
i can tell you love me by how many times you used my name.//
^Poor bar man losing this battle already^

in all your bars your lackin.//
your name is also a rock band so stop rappin.//
^Again punchs are not hitting at all&

you say you got me shocked so i guess i'm energized.//
by the time you done readin i'll have you teary eyed.//
^Nice bar best so far^

I'm ya daddy so best belive i'ma spank you.//
Your mom gave me head advice so tell her thank you.//
^Nice close^

~Sporadic~ merked this kid easy, don't think the other
people who voted looked at the battle. Sporadic creativity
was on top as well as his wordplay, punchs and flow droped
a good verse man,,..

~Fuse~ Only thing you really had was flow and two ok
punch's very basic verse man need to get elevating your
shit. wasn't to bad but Sporadic won this in ever department.

Vote ~ Sporadic

this is over a week old..upping to get this finished so i can get outta this stupid ass front line herb shit

upp again..i promise to return the favour for any of your battles...

upping this theard..want to get this done..since ive been robbed by sin the bastard

Upping i will vote on ur battles..and i have voted on pplz battles now come on close this shit

mmmmmmmm yeah great....oh yeah upping this theard again!!

cum on i promise to return the vote to ur battles..if its well explained of course

let me analyis it
 

Sporadic

This herb reFUSE's to spit first so he can feed on my lyrical creation
coz he lacks in interlect,
...and an active battle imagination
ok nothing great 5/10

Your static just not going anywhere, while my elevation is persistant
your talent is like ur avatar character,
...fake and nonexistant
nice imagination 7/10

can tell hes a herb by his basic rhymes the name emcee u abuse
shock him with lyrical voltage
...call me a electric surge the way this fuse
good personal 7/10

taking dignity, strangle your pride for pleasure like your penis when u jerk it
your rhymes are like a current
...whens theres no complete circuit!
nice but no conection between the lines 6/10

Got you SHOCKED got you squeezed like bacteria when your zit popping
squeezing ass cheeks together
...is the only good shit u be droppin!
ok aint great 6/10

31/50
6.2/10 nice overall good imagination used the name well flow was ok good punches

Fuse

your lyrics are O.K. i didnt know you had it in you.//
your name speaks for itself not to continue//
ok 5/10

Your a hoe nigga, ya'll all the same.//
i can tell you love me by how many times you used my name.//
wack didnt feel it 4/10

in all your bars your lackin.//
your name is also a rock band so stop rappin
hummm??? 4/10

you say you got me shocked so i guess i'm energized.//
by the time you done readin i'll have you teary eyed.//
nice punch 7/10

I'm ya daddy so best belive i'ma spank you.//
Your mom gave me head advice so tell her thank you.//
gay didnt feel it at all 4/10

24/50
4.8/10
flow was wack had some punches aint that hard though like on personal thats about it

have to give my vote to sporadic for the use of imagination and coming harder
with respect for both of you

hit my battles if u feel bored for retern of favor

peace

Vote sporadic, his shit was plain and simple better,

Could have been a better battle.

Fuse sounded like he was reading a nursery ryhme or somthing, to basic and not enough to win the battle

Sporadic

This herb reFUSE's to spit first so he can feed on my lyrical creation
coz he lacks in interlect,
...and an active battle imagination
ok nothing great 6/10

Your static just not going anywhere, while my elevation is persistant
your talent is like ur avatar character,
...fake and nonexistant
nice imagination 6/10

can tell hes a herb by his basic rhymes the name emcee u abuse
shock him with lyrical voltage
...call me a electric surge the way this fuse
good personal 8/10

taking dignity, strangle your pride for pleasure like your penis when u jerk it
your rhymes are like a current
...whens theres no complete circuit!
nice but no conection between the lines 5/10

Got you SHOCKED got you squeezed like bacteria when your zit popping
squeezing ass cheeks together
...is the only good shit u be droppin!
ok aint great 6/10

31/50


Fuse

your lyrics are O.K. i didnt know you had it in you.//
your name speaks for itself not to continue//
ok 4/10

Your a hoe nigga, ya'll all the same.//
i can tell you love me by how many times you used my name.//
wack didnt feel it 3/10

in all your bars your lackin.//
your name is also a rock band so stop rappin
hummm??? 3/10

you say you got me shocked so i guess i'm energized.//
by the time you done readin i'll have you teary eyed.//
nice punch 7/10

I'm ya daddy so best belive i'ma spank you.//
Your mom gave me head advice so tell her thank you.//
gay didnt feel it at all 4/10


21 out of 50


that is my break down it didnt all fit for some reason