Mistah_Tate vs. HMP
 

agreed upon rules.....



aight i'm checked

in....due in 45 minutes, key

you greet your feature as you gaze into my eyes, like i was jeepers creepers...
...taxasion hits wen you cant sweep 4 meters so your bomb cheats the theaters /1

this dont resolve but indebts us all, my imnitude is through...
...his throat is palmed, like CLUE, murder in this room is true /2

casualties multiply like asains with math mid terms...
like bath with germs, its a competitive remedy but wrath wins firm /3

limbs are prelimbed from structure, yet you reason to plead...
...its him who he wins, as he self defeats cuz its your season to bleed /4

blood is like paint on a canvas in this drastic place...
...i remove my plastic face, give a glimps as i race with a tanastic pace /5

call your self jake the rookie, cuz todays your training day...
...if theres such a thing as satanic eras, im paving ways /6

you gameless faget, duck and hide when its time to toss dykes in crews...
...for you the mic is through, oh and /7

yo...mistah tate has entered building

you looked for a battle and now you got it, you cant go back on it/
but fo sho you gone regret it/
i gotta demon inside of me and u bout to feed it/
everyboy say H M P to the H O M O, yo name had a hidden message now its decoded/
i leave fags like you on the ground with they faces eroded/
i dont like yo kind, tie you by yo ankles and drag u 50 miles to show u that i dont respect yo kind/
gotta style so bright it'll leave yo punk ass blind/
even if you had double the skillz u couldnt live up to half of mine/
u ridin the short yellow bus in the mornin, i'm on 18s/
i whip ass all by my lonely, u need a team/
now hold still retard while i vent my steam/
my flow to fast for yo 1 1/2 brain cells/
u was hopeless from the start, your motha donated u to stem cell/
they musta not stuck the needle deep enough, well heres anotha/
its got enough heat for u and yo brotha from anotha motha/
sorry i filled u in late, but u aint my only child/
u the only one i dont claim cuz yo style is too mild/
u get put down so much, niggas think u gotta syndrome/
and yo bones so soft its real easy fo me to break em, shake em and grind em/
turn em to powder and snort em up like coke/
keep yo eyes closed while i get high off yo bone marrow/
i'll pop u in yo jaw so hard you'll be mutterin worse than banks/
and take a bath lil nigga, cuz u and yo flow stank/
i'm gettin drunk of a hennessy, u still sippin koolaide/
i graduated to pimp and u still in the ho-grade/
i'm pretty sho the damage i did 2 yo self-esteem gone need a bandaid/
now that father has taught u a lesson, its time to take yo ass to bed/
here, i made u a new blanket out the skin i scraped off yo fohead/

aight lets get some votes yall, u vote for me and i'll return the favor

aiyo, vote on these for me....
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Mistah_Tate took this battle with the better punches, wordplay and verse structure....

VOTE ON MY BATTLES - I TOOK TIME TO READ THIS

uppin for a real vote

i appreciate yo vote dawg, and i'm gonna return the favor, more votes yall!

mistah tate took this battle by beating his opponent hmp in every catagory when battleing, he had betta flow, structure,wordplay,punches.... he jsut had a overall better verse

vote - mistah tate

now drop a vote on this link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133335

ima give this to hms.....
your closer was dope as fuck

hms just straight up ate mistah..

aight need some more votes and opinions from people who can actually vote...

upppin

come on yall vote, it aint that hard, i'll return the favor if you gotta battle goin on

Opener - Ouch.. Neither
Closer - HMP
Structure - HMP
Flow - HMP
Punches - Tate
Metas - HMP
Wordplay - Tate
Personals - N/A

OVERALL - HMP

Not bad, though both could've came better. HMP took this one by tryin' a bit harder.

i already dropped a vote but drop a vote on this link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133957

hit this up
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133833

my vote goes to hmp i thought he was better over all with punches that landed and flow he had a nice flow tate i didnt reqally understand its like he used words without knowin what he was sayin
v/hmp
return tha favor

aight, i appreciate the constructive criticism, lookin for more votes tho, 2 more and i got this

Straight up hmp had this shit in every category

HMP
structure is good...flow is on target...u had tight metas...wordplay was decent...a few of ur punches connected...at times it seemed as if all u were doin was droppin metas...like ur opener...that shit didnt connect at all...no good personals...quotes r played, and u didnt even use that quote in a way itd connect him...

mistah_tate
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...structure sucked...it seemed like ur lines were goin everywhere...flow fell off cause of the structure...u had a few metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
HMP had the better structure...the more stable flow...and more metas...neither had good personals...mistah_tate had better better wordplay and more connecting punches...and despite HMP having taken 3 of the categories, to mistah_tate's 2...mistah_tate gets my vote...and heres y...structure is not very important in battles...and metas just add to the flow...and to me, wordplay and punches r more important categories to have then structure, flow, and metas...so in that sense...mistah_tate gets my vote...close battle though...

VOTE - MISTAH_TATE

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...

Mistah_tate did not have good stucture, who ever said that..
mistah basically won because he had more content... he had some disses that some would call personals and a few punchlines

HPM, you did have better stucture and flow, but I judge text and not audio, so he won because of what he wrote.. he insulted you in every other line therefore running with the victory because you held back...