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Tag: Kingz & Mad Dog vs Poeticjustice & calamity
verses due within an hour of this thread goin up
10-12 lines to diss both member no hate no d/r |
Aight checkin in lets get this shit motivated.....
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here....gud luk guys................................
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ch3ck1n 1n........................................
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ch-ch-check!
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what tag team is first
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jus drop wen ur done
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This tag battles gonn be 1 sided...me n Kingz gonn cause a catastrophe/
Sum'll say its PoEtIc JuStiCe...when we decease that bitch and Calamity/ I tell ya its an injustice how sum cat has a name like his life... ...mostly up and down/ Well the up's were when he was on his knees... ...rest of the time he was flat on the ground/ And hoops had a change of name now he's a Calamity like Jane*/ But it wont change ur style, forcin words like ur name'll hurt... ...so try not to strain/ U guys are a pain claimin u hott headed... ...when u tagged 4 twice the beating/ How the hell can u fags be excited... ...most of the time u calmy seated/ PoEtIc JuStIcE battlin aint ur best thing dawg stick to the topicals/ Only way ur poems be heart warming... ...is if they were produced in the tropicals/ Calamity and PJ i enjoyed this battle but it should be a handicap/ Coz without ur crutches and wheelchairs... ...u aint nothing but keystylin crap/ * Calamity Jane a musical |
they couldnt eat us with high merits,if i slapped them with birds of prey..
and i think the whole site agrees, when i say that these "words are gay".. get a new routine,almost everything you say is played in songs.. how in hell did you lose to HIM,guess them lines you played was wrong.. d2r is overated,being wacks an overstatement,poetics only one respected.. funny thing is.you guys couldnt be deadly-ill even if i broke ya neck-kid.. dry on the mic, never heard them better than horrible,like silent audibles.. ya'll still stuck with text?i would have thought you'd moved to audio.. the fact is,my wackest lines is what they max is,deductable like taxes.. these two are like runnin retards,please point them to where the track-is.. |
they couldnt eat us with high merits,if i slapped them with birds of prey..
and i think the whole site agrees, when i say that these "words are gay".. get a new routine,almost everything you say is played in songs.. how in hell did you lose to HIM,guess them lines you played was wrong.. d2r is overated,being wacks an overstatement,poetics only one respected.. funny thing is.you guys couldnt be deadly-ill even if i broke ya neck-kid.. dry on the mic, never heard them better than horrible,like silent audibles.. ya'll still stuck with text?i would have thought you'd moved to audio.. the fact is,my wackest lines is what they max is,deductable like taxes.. these two are like runnin retards,please point them to where the track-is.. ^correction to the structure above..sorry |
they couldnt eat us with high merits,if i slapped them with birds of prey..
and i think the whole site agrees, when i say that these "words are gay".. get a new routine,almost everything you say is played in songs.. how in hell did you lose to HIM,guess them lines you played was wrong.. d2r is overated,being wacks an overstatement,poetics only one respected.. funny thing is.you guys couldnt be deadly-ill even if i broke ya neck-kid.. dry on the mic, never heard them better than horrible,like silent audibles.. ya'll still stuck with text?i would have thought you'd moved to audio.. the fact is,my wackest lines is what they max is,deductable like taxes.. these two are like runnin retards,please point them to where the track-is.. lol forgot the hyperlinks.. bleh.. last post |
ok
mad dog...u aint a pedigree...background from the DARK KNIGHTS...
leader of our crew?...i think stevie wonder mustve bin judging that nite.. u clearly below all our level..u cnt reach..we all on a higher shelf he aint only gettin dissed by me..heres him gettin ripped by TONYSELF done wit this joker,u rb`s biggest clown,a sad story of "lost but never-found" this aint the place to drop "shit"..maybe u should go back to the dog-pound how bout u kingz?..the only royalty ever to serve under a crew... should call u a queen..coz u seem to like mad-dog on top of u... hang on.... ima pull a little harder on this choke artists chain... hve him chokin more times than an afghan when he givin false names.. took all ya nine lives,stamped u,hit u rite back..now u a certified wack-cat you cnt stand tall...ur structures less solid than an M.FI. flat-pack... |
Calamity
Don’t have a ‘cow…girl’…jus let me explain… …ur a woman wanting to be a man… your named after calamity jane! Im here to regin…drench yo chances…ur here to lose …yeh, your from a mic stand… which you don’t know how to use! got back to hardwood...ya heard me? ...your a reject... like a real 'throwback' jersey Hardwood will get capped…broken off at the stifle …dog, the only respect you get… is in your title! PJ You a slag…d2r is the only thing you got to brag … you cudnt fight yo way out of a box… and I doubt a wet paper bag! (avatar) yeh we cool…cos you’re a destined 2 rhymer …you cudnt even get on a label… if you were a clothing designer! I will merk you like Mark Antony was by Augustus …cos even judge… cudnt do you poems justice! your over dog...and i aint even begun ...3 strikes and you out!... cos i hit harder than a home run! |
Aight lets gt these votes in NOW uppin
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aight... shit this was a good fuckin battle... ... shit this is hard for me to vote on lol... i think all of yall came at eachother pretty hard with wordplay, punches and personals but imma go with poetic and calamity... their flow just kept goin and goin and it kinda rolled off the tounge... obveously no hate to maddog and kingz lol... good battle for all of yall, this one was really hard to judge so i went with the one that was easyer to read because yall tied on most everything including the biggest part of battles and thats punches.... haha... shit... nice battle...
VOTE- poetic and calamity |
uppin this for them fuckin votes cmon participate!
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Im not tryin to hate or be disrespectful, but are crew votez allowed? If not, then is BigPappa76 & Poetic in the same crew, cuz they both got the "Destined 2 Rhyme" in they sigz so I was jsut curious, no disrespect
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yes crew votes are allowed... poetic, kingz, and mad dog are all the same crew lol.. im the oddball here*sniff*..
UPIN and leave links |
Calamity and Pj-
you guys had a nice verse....prob the best ive seen from justice ( then again ive never seen you in a battle) calmity wasnt feelin your verse dogg..flow was good punches werent strong just average...but you had a decent personal in ther get a new routine,almost everything you say is played in songs.. how in hell did you lose to HIM,guess them lines you played was wrong.. Pj you had some nice punches and personals and your flow was good overall:7.5/10 Mad Dog & Kingz- Mad dog..i saw you used a new structure and i dont think it effected your flow like Big P said i think it made it a little more complex which is a good thing you had some nice punches and personals aswell and that camity jane line was funny....Kingz you had a solid battle verse it was filled with nice personals and punches....flow wasnt bad You a slag…d2r is the only thing you got to brag … you cudnt fight yo way out of a box… and I doubt a wet paper bag! (avatar) LOOOL nice line overall: 8/10 Vote: Mad Dog & Kingz |
punchlines - tie
personals - tie opener - tie closer - calam + poetic flow - calam + poetic v - poetic + calamity their flow moved me and i felt their shit more than i felt kingz n m.d drop a vote on this shit http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133957 |
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aight, if i can even vote, my vote goes to mad dog and kingz, i was feelin there shit more, i think yall came harder than them other catz. i was feelin they shit too, but calamity's verse wasn't really that good, so i had to go with mad dog and kingz. he had good flow but his shit just wasnt poppin for me. good battle
now yall hit my shit up if yall can http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...845#post1396845 |
uppin..............leave links and i will hit them up
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^aight.. uppin.. leave links and we.... will hit em back..
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uppin.. leave your link, and we will hit you back lol.. 4 way battle thats like atleast two gurantted decisionz on ya battle.. capatalize!
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uppin.. leave your link, and we will hit you back lol.. 4 way battle thats like atleast two gurantted decisionz on ya battle.. capatalize!
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kingz & mad dog:
This tag battles gonn be 1 sided...me n Kingz gonn cause a catastrophe/ Sum'll say its PoEtIc JuStiCe...when we decease that bitch and Calamity/ ^^hott opener good personal 7/10 I tell ya its an injustice how sum cat has a name like his life... ...mostly up and down/ Well the up's were when he was on his knees... ...rest of the time he was flat on the ground/ ^^good meta decent punch 6/10 And hoops had a change of name now he's a Calamity like Jane*/ But it wont change ur style, forcin words like ur name'll hurt... ...so try not to strain/ ^^1st line hott 2nd really weak 5/10 U guys are a pain claimin u hott headed... ...when u tagged 4 twice the beating/ How the hell can u fags be excited... ...most of the time u calmy seated/ ^^LMAO hott punch 9/10 PoEtIc JuStIcE battlin aint ur best thing dawg stick to the topicals/ Only way ur poems be heart warming... ...is if they were produced in the tropicals/ ^^good personal and punch 6/10 Calamity and PJ i enjoyed this battle but it should be a handicap/ Coz without ur crutches and wheelchairs... ...u aint nothing but keystylin crap/ ^^ehhh decent closer not too hott 4/10 overall : 37/60 kings: Don’t have a ‘cow…girl’…jus let me explain… …ur a woman wanting to be a man… your named after calamity jane! ^^would have been hott if mad dog didnt use it 2/10 Im here to regin…drench yo chances…ur here to lose …yeh, your from a mic stand… which you don’t know how to use! ^^lol funny punch 6/10 got back to hardwood...ya heard me? ...your a reject... like a real 'throwback' jersey ^^weakest thing you have ever wrote 1/10 Hardwood will get capped…broken off at the stifle …dog, the only respect you get… is in your title! ^^lol that was hott tho 7/10 PJ You a slag…d2r is the only thing you got to brag … you cudnt fight yo way out of a box… and I doubt a wet paper bag! (avatar) ^^that was a good prsonal and hott 8/10 yeh we cool…cos you’re a destined 2 rhymer …you cudnt even get on a label… if you were a clothing designer! ^^more fire 8/10 I will merk you like Mark Antony was by Augustus …cos even judge… cudnt do you poems justice! ^^decent punch 6/10 your over dog...and i aint even begun ...3 strikes and you out!... cos i hit harder than a home run! ^^good meta bad closer 5/10 overall : 43/80 team overall : 80/140 (57%) poeticjustice & calamity: calamity: they couldnt eat us with high merits,if i slapped them with birds of prey.. and i think the whole site agrees, when i say that these "words are gay".. ^^hott personal good punch fire opener 9/10 get a new routine,almost everything you say is played in songs.. how in hell did you lose to HIM,guess them lines you played was wrong.. ^^another hott personal staying consistent 8/10 d2r is overated,being wacks an overstatement,poetics only one respected.. funny thing is.you guys couldnt be deadly-ill even if i broke ya neck-kid.. ^^hott shyt 7/10 dry on the mic, never heard them better than horrible,like silent audibles.. ya'll still stuck with text?i would have thought you'd moved to audio.. ^^still staying consistent good bar 6/10 the fact is,my wackest lines is what they max is,deductable like taxes.. these two are like runnin retards,please point them to where the track-is.. ^^hottest bar of the battle 10/10 overall : 41/60 poeticjustice: mad dog...u aint a pedigree...background from the DARK KNIGHTS... leader of our crew?...i think stevie wonder mustve bin judging that nite.. ^^lmao hott bar good meta 8/10 u clearly below all our level..u cnt reach..we all on a higher shelf he aint only gettin dissed by me..heres him gettin ripped by TONYSELF ^^good personal nice bar 7/10 done wit this joker,u rb`s biggest clown,a sad story of "lost but never-found" this aint the place to drop "shit"..maybe u should go back to the dog-pound ^^good meta and name play 7/10 how bout u kingz?..the only royalty ever to serve under a crew... should call u a queen..coz u seem to like mad-dog on top of u... ^^this was your hottest bar just fire without a doubt 10/10 hang on.... ima pull a little harder on this choke artists chain... hve him chokin more times than an afghan when he givin false names.. ^^lol good punch feeling this 8/10 took all ya nine lives,stamped u,hit u rite back..now u a certified wack-cat you cnt stand tall...ur structures less solid than an M.FI. flat-pack... ^^decent closer coulda been hotter 5/10 overall : 45/60 team overall : 86/120 (72%) vote: poeticjustice and calamity str8 fire from you two structure was perfect flow was consistent hott personals and punches hott verses all the way through...as for kings and mad dog i think this is the weakest i have ever seen both of you...your verses werent that hott i expected more from you 2 upset win for PJ and calamity hott battle tho ~!1!~ |
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uppin this and yes i did poll but that was on behalf of mistah_tate as he couldnt poll but if he does, i'll get my poll removed :thumbup:
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he coulnt poll because, he didnt meet requirements..... lol so you cant poll his vote..
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uppin this shit
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uppin for this battle.. leave ya links and we will hit it back with some votes.. ^take that vote
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uppin
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comeo n.. we only need a few more votes.. leave some links so we can get some battles closed
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ay.. drop some votes in here.. and we will hit em back yo..
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uppino n this battle.. 3-1.. drop some links and we will retrurn looks on your battles..
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uppin this battle.. dont sleep.. drop some votes and some links, and we can close some battles..
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calmity and poeticjustice's verse was pretty good, they didn't screw up like the other did on structure(i think it was mad dog), they have way better punches and personals, so yeah, they have good flow as well
Kingz and mad dog came aight, but not as good, mad dog and kingz both have a couple of weird punches, mad dog's structure was a little screwed i vote for calmity and pj for good punches and structure |
^Good look.. uppin for one more vote.. leave links..
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