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Lethal Lunatic vs str8_hood(Topical Battle)
Topical: Life As A Gun
Due Date: A week from now No crew votes No D/R votes No hate votes 10 Barz Max G'Luck |
Checken in
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what the hell man. this thing is messed up. these rules and that 50 characters stuff is confusing. but anyway im checkin in
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alrite cool just drop 20 lines about the topical shit
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Life as a Gun
~Shot the best, slept to death, death to rest~ ~Shot Tupac, Biggie, run dmc, even shot the holy blessed~ ~So powerful shot through a bullet proof vest, rite to the chest~ ~Wit no free will just held rite to the head so finally the best can rest~ ~Life as a gun is like a life wit out a chance~ ~Like wen cheddar bob in 8 mile shot rite through his pants~ ~No idea I was gonna shoot him cuz I just read and glanced~ ~Like wen you have absolutely no idea that you’re not lyrically balanced~ ~I am my own instruments of course my own gun~ ~No time to be holy not even now cuz I shot a priest and a nun~ ~Hell nah it was not a heart attack that actually killed........big pun~ ~It was actually me who betrayed him it was his one and only gun~ ~Now this is just a quick spit just like your life~ ~Just you need me of course cuz I backstab like a knife~ ~So you lookin to a new life, take ya title even ya kid and wife~ ~So now you shot ya cuz and I shot the soldiers stole away their life~ ~Now you askin me why but I dont know~ ~Cuz I’m not the one who actually wanted to blow~ ~All they do is just pull the trigger and bullets just go~ ~Cuz I don’t control wat I spit and flow...So I’ll just let ya know~ |
Blah some quick key spit hope its enuff to beat him
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okay i know im late but come on its just a day. i aint been in vegas for a few dayz and i forgot about this shit. but anyway wether u cool wit me bein a day late or not here it is: Life As A Gun
I got a few names but most cats prefer to call me nina Homes home I sit on tha waist of a drug dealer Hopin I aint gotta put bodies to rest man im prayin to god But when a nigga act up I have him layin in chalk Im takin anybody out men babies and even femalez Big L, 2Pac, Biggie and Bugz from D12 Not to mention all the niggas who getting bodied Wanna know what lifes like with a gun ask them soldiers in the army But all my people in the hood getting shot in the streets Cause life as a gun aint nothing but provoking the beef In my lifetime I aint feel too special though Jus wait for niggas to get loud and blaow! let one go But I only got 9 other niggas with me Unless u got an empty clip or them homeys runnin semi’s And I apologize for doing pac on the strip he was hot Shot this dude cheatin behind his wife’s back he was not Thinking but that’s his problem cause now his soul belongs to me Like that dude from mortal kombat but im the one rockin the heat But everybody like me cause im tight when I bust U don’t wanna know what its like to live life as a gun |
i meant i been in vegas
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uppin for votez
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i'm giving this one to lethal he was just alot better
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yall gotta explain ya vote better than that |
ok fag he had a better structure, better pl and metaphors and flow was alot better than yours and what else could i say he's better than you was that good enough for you lady
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uppin for votes
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uppin 4 votez
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uppin 4 votez
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uupin...................
will return the favor....... |
uppin 4 votez
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Lethal was more creative wit his shit.... It had better rhymez, structure, and punches... All around pretty tight nah mean... Str8 Hood was all over tha place wit his structure and flow.... He basically had no punches, but tha lyricz was aight... My vote goes to Lethal... 1.
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Fuck It I Wont Vote Lol Not Enough Posts... Damn, Lol... 1.
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uppin for some votes
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Lethal: your verse had a lot more creativity put into it and had better flow, ya structure was good to, overall had the better verse on the topic too, captured it nicely
str8:your verse was ok too, but didnt have the intensity as lethal, but overall good work from both VOTE:LETHAL Drop an honest vote here:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135415 |
my bad man, ya in my crew.....well uppin for ya......
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hmm
not really a lot to say......... hood`s woz straight weak it didnt even rhyme vocab was poor imagery woz worse it jus looked like a ten year old piece sorry no hate but u need to elevate lethal-like u said u prob didnt come that gud... but u did wot was needed n took this in every aspect vote-lyrical return an honest vote plz http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...134#post1420134 |
shit aint got enough posts.my bad
i meant lethal not lyrical lol |
uppin 4 votez
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uppin 4 votez
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Structure Wit To Lethal
And His Fit Da Story More But You Was Hot To Hood Return Da Favor Good Stuff |
god damn all these newb don't have enough post to vote.
I’m start doing topical battles. Heres my verse on life as a gun i'm being held tightly in the hands of a kid// i got 16 in the clip and one in the hole so i'm fully loaded// and i ain't had the feeling of being bust yet// i can tell that this kid is nervious cause i can feel his sweet// we hiding in the bushes and I’m tried of waitin// I just want one of my bullet to break in, some skin// i'm ready to blast, at any cat that walks past// all of a sudden i'm moving and going fast, look behide the cops is on our ass// i got dropped and with the pain of hitting the gound// i let one go out the camber and everyone went down// but one did't come back up, and i don't mean to brag// but no i have to live my life in an air tight evidence bag// anywhere down to the voting. flow: both style: str8 understanding of topic: lethal feel: lethal who got deeper into it: lethal ayo str8 it was a good flow and style andnice name but you started rapping about d12 and biggie and jay and pun and pac idk but it seem like that ain't gotta do with a guns life lethal i didn't like the tyle that center shit. other than that good. i liked the vision i got with your words. vote lethal and i can really vote lol |
Hmmm...well...both of you stayed in the boundaries of the topic...nothin' really creative...so no points on originality or creativity here.
So basically...you both did the same thing...so I will vote on that. My vote goes towards Lethal. Why? His piece was written better than Hood. As you can see...Lethal had a much more complicated rhyme structure...hood was basically jus' rhymin' at the end of every line..n' sumtymes didn't even rhyme at all... "Hopin I aint gotta put bodies to rest man im prayin to god But when a nigga act up I have him layin in chalk" Lethal's was just written better...it's a no brainer to be honest... v/ - Lethal Return the favour both of you please and vote on the battles in my signature. Thanks. |
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