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Ca'lam 07-09-04 05:36 PM

Calamity Vs. Mixtape
 
House Voting rules. Explain votes clearly.
5 bars max.. 80 posts to vote.. 30 minutes to spit after this goes up.. Checking in, good luck, and lets go

Wicked One 07-09-04 05:43 PM

Checkin in..............................................

Wicked One 07-09-04 05:57 PM

Don't u know that i never die, it's what all scripts need and rely...
Without me u ain't got nothing like a Non Vet guy with no hearts on supply...
Slowly twisting ya de-feet in to place, soon after i'll deface...
Cause after i'm through amputating ya features,you'll never be able to show face...
Slamming the point of an axe in the facts that his skills is just an act...
Ya highly over rated like a weak .8 twenty five dollar sac...
Fuck u, fuck this battling, ya just anotha washed up WANNABE VET trying to revive ya rhyming...
Ya climbing opposite of my skys designing crying cause u missed the 1 time only wack rapper signing...
I'm sick to my stomach and I'll win cuz I vomit late...
See you thought you could run shit but I came here to dominate...

Ca'lam 07-09-04 06:05 PM

Mixtapes are played,matter of fact I got some under my couch..
theres nothin you can say to me...............................
...........................you lost to someone stuck ina box..
missfiyas man?............now i see with ugly guys she is cumfy..
til i dis-arm n de-feat you,like you stole in foreign countries..
you not hot,so stop using pink to describe heat on ya name..
maybe its a habbit, cause you know gays drawn to flames..
just needed a win, so i accepted what you tryn to make happin..
like ya avy all i need was 2 less than this last one..(9-2=7 lines)


..aight uppin for votes..leave links

Ca'lam 07-09-04 06:07 PM

Mixtapes are played,matter of fact I got some under my couch..
theres nothin you can say to me........................................
....................................you lost to someone stuck ina box..
missfiyas man?............now i see with ugly guys she is cumfy..
til i dis-arm n de-feat you,like you stole in foreign countries..
you not hot,so stop using pink to describe heat on ya name..
maybe its a habbit, cause you know gays drawn to flames..
just needed a win, so i accepted what you tryn to make happin..
like ya avy all i need was 2 less than this last one..(9-2=7 lines)

bold fucked up my structure.. ^ peep this one not that other one

Just-2-Ill 07-09-04 06:18 PM

aiight now, mixtape'z verse is better than calamity

i hardly read any blowz on mixtape's verse so lucky u won this cause calamity lookz like this is his 1st battle, and he'z lazy as fuck so y u rhymin' 4??, u ain;t got no blowz in ya shit so u know who i pick

opener, flow, blowz, closer goes 2 mixtape


Ca'lam 07-09-04 06:24 PM

rofl.. get the fuck outa here ryding his dick.. now mixtape even you know that was a dick ryde ROFL... wow.. i should have set up in elevated.. damn herbs..^that hate ass vote aint counting

~Lady Fiya~ 07-09-04 06:26 PM

hell no... u will not drop sum bullshit.. look below!
Mixtapes are played,matter of fact I got some under my couch..
theres nothin you can say to me...............................
...........................you lost to someone stuck ina box..
missfiyas man?............now i see with ugly guys she is cumfy..
til i dis-arm n de-feat you,like you stole in foreign countries..
^calamity... not bad but...
How about throwin' personals at him not me! save that fa later, nigga...
*Mixtape's the finest nigga i seen on here so far... so you trippin'... my baby dropped in ten and snapped on ya ass... droppin' in 30..

Fuck u, fuck this battling, ya just anotha washed up WANNABE VET trying to revive ya rhyming...
Ya climbing opposite of my skys designing crying cause u missed the 1 time only wack rapper signing...
I'm sick to my stomach and I'll win cuz I vomit late...
See you thought you could run shit but I came here to dominate...
^nice closer... u did good baby
not dickridin' just the truth..
this my crew partner so i can't vote but both drops were nice given the time limit...

holla supportin' Mixtape..
good luck baby*
The Jury
Fiya Gurl

Ca'lam 07-09-04 06:30 PM

lol..^ much love to you miss, its just a battle :) -_-.. uppin for some honest votes.. and that was swaying lol.. your supposed to vote for you "baby" lol.. ne way man.. nice drop mix.. uppin and leave some links so we can end some threads..

Wicked One 07-09-04 06:56 PM

Just 2 Ill dont know that kid plus ....80 posts to vote people so vote people..leave a link...

MR.Goodbar 07-09-04 09:50 PM

yo if you need 80 votez to vote then I cant but I think Mixtape took it because every bar was a good punch, I only saw one from Calamity and that was the "pink flames" line, nice but I cant vote so...

Wicked One 07-09-04 11:39 PM

Uppin......Vote people.....80 posts to vote......Leave a Link.....

FlowIntelligent. 07-10-04 12:12 AM

mixtape:

Don't u know that i never die, it's what all scripts need and rely...
Without me u ain't got nothing like a Non Vet guy with no hearts on supply...
^^1st line good multi 2nd line weak 5/10
Slowly twisting ya de-feet in to place, soon after i'll deface...
Cause after i'm through amputating ya features,you'll never be able to show face...
^^it was a good set up but it ended up weak 3/10
Slamming the point of an axe in the facts that his skills is just an act...
Ya highly over rated like a weak .8 twenty five dollar sac...
^^good try at multies but they werent hott 6/10
Fuck u, fuck this battling, ya just anotha washed up WANNABE VET trying to revive ya rhyming...
Ya climbing opposite of my skys designing crying cause u missed the 1 time only wack rapper signing...
^^bar was foced and decent not a hott punch and stretched 4/10
I'm sick to my stomach and I'll win cuz I vomit late...
See you thought you could run shit but I came here to dominate...
^^your best bar and it was filler 7/10

overall : 25/50 (50%)

calamity:


Mixtapes are played,matter of fact I got some under my couch..
theres nothin you can say to me........................................
....................................you lost to someone stuck ina box..
^^2 good personals hottest bar in battle 9/10
missfiyas man?............now i see with ugly guys she is cumfy..
til i dis-arm n de-feat you,like you stole in foreign countries..
^^lol good meta 7/10
you not hot,so stop using pink to describe heat on ya name..
maybe its a habbit, cause you know gays drawn to flames..
^^kinda weak 4/10
just needed a win, so i accepted what you tryn to make happin..
like ya avy all i need was 2 less than this last one..(9-2=7 lines)
^^good personal weak punch 5/10

overall : 25/40 (63%)

vote: calamity

mixtape i have seen you come way hotter your verse was your worst ever...dont start getting weak use better punches more personals and multies better wordplay and fix your structure a lil

~!1!~

God 07-10-04 12:28 AM

breakdown

Don't u know that i never die, it's what all scripts need and rely...
Without me u ain't got nothing like a Non Vet guy with no hearts on supply...
damn that was a pretty hot opener
Slowly twisting ya de-feet in to place, soon after i'll deface...
Cause after i'm through amputating ya features,you'll never be able to show face...
hot... but it could have been better toward the end ... but decent
Slamming the point of an axe in the facts that his skills is just an act...
Ya highly over rated like a weak .8 twenty five dollar sac...
lol...nice multies...
Fuck u, fuck this battling, ya just anotha washed up WANNABE VET trying to revive ya rhyming...
Ya climbing opposite of my skys designing crying cause u missed the 1 time only wack rapper signing...
iight decent line... but the structure was off
I'm sick to my stomach and I'll win cuz I vomit late...
See you thought you could run shit but I came here to dominate...
pretty good closer.... but seen alot better from you but overall i think you took this

Calamity
Mixtapes are played,matter of fact I got some under my couch..
theres nothin you can say to me........................................
....................................you lost to someone stuck ina box..
damn nice ass opener...
missfiyas man?............now i see with ugly guys she is cumfy..
til i dis-arm n de-feat you,like you stole in foreign countries..
decent line
you not hot,so stop using pink to describe heat on ya name..
maybe its a habbit, cause you know gays drawn to flames..
good personal but not really feelin it
just needed a win, so i accepted what you tryn to make happin..
like ya avy all i need was 2 less than this last one..(9-2=7 lines)
weak closer...


structure:Calamity
punchlines:mix
personals:calamity
multies:mix
enjoy:both
flow:mix

overall vote mixtape but i very close battle

Ca'lam 07-10-04 11:10 AM

uppin this battle..leave some links

Ca'lam 07-10-04 05:28 PM

uppin this battle.. leave some links, so we can close some battles.. 1-1

Introspect. 07-10-04 05:32 PM

yo homie u gimmie 2 battles u need votes on and i need these closed this one http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132128 and i'll be rite back wit tha other they been open for 5 week's now by tha way this is trase

Introspect. 07-10-04 05:34 PM

aight here's tha other one please vote on both i really need em closed now i'll vote on this one and anutha u need a vote on

Introspect. 07-10-04 05:35 PM

whoop's i forgot tha link here http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132266

Introspect. 07-10-04 05:51 PM

aight both was good but...


calamity i thought u came a tad bit harder in this punches wise u both were basically tha same in everything else


mixtape he got u in punches man i thought u come much harder ive seen u come betta man but u was tha same in every thing except punches


flow both
multis really neither some but not alot
punches calamity
vocab neither
humor a lil from both
overall vote calamity


now drop a vote here please i need this closed it's been open for like 5 week's http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132266

Wicked One 07-10-04 06:10 PM

Damn....what a D/R vote.......iam sorry to say...cuz Calamity voted on one your battles, so you voted for him....shakes head.....anyways VOTE PEOPLE...

e-dubz 07-10-04 06:34 PM

nice battle both of u..
mixtape i liked ur punches, u had barely any fillers..ur flow was good as well, ur structure was off at times but the punches hit..

Don't u know that i never die, it's what all scripts need and rely...
Without me u ain't got nothing like a Non Vet guy with no hearts on supply...
^nice opener, thats wut won it for u

calamity..u had some hot punches and iight flow but mixtape's punches hit a little harder..no hate

just needed a win, so i accepted what you tryn to make happin..
like ya avy all i need was 2 less than this last one..(9-2=7 lines)
^ok personal, but weak ass closer and thats wut lost it for u fam

v/mixtape

Ca'lam 07-10-04 09:43 PM

mix.. yes i voted on his batte.. and he returned an honest vote.. he only had 2 choices lol.. not tryna be cocky, ^the verse you put up, didnt murk me at all.. its a close battle.. and right now its dead even... 2-2, i deserve my votes just as much as you diserve yours.. i know i did my thang, and you did yours.. uppin and leave links so we can get some battles closed

Wicked One 07-10-04 09:56 PM

Aight whatever manye....i know i didnt KO you ...it's close tho...but Anyways Uppin FOR VOTES PEOPLE.....LEAVE A LINK...

bully_ 07-10-04 10:22 PM

i think dis wus a really sad battle none of them were good i think calamity was better

Orijinal 07-10-04 11:05 PM

Don't u know that i never die, it's what all scripts need and rely...
Without me u ain't got nothing like a Non Vet guy with no hearts on supply...
GOOD OPENER..NICE PUNCHLINE..8/10
Slowly twisting ya de-feet in to place, soon after i'll deface...
Cause after i'm through amputating ya features,you'll never be able to show face...
HAH..NICE..GOOD..BUT DONT TRY TO BRAG URSELF..7/10
Slamming the point of an axe in the facts that his skills is just an act...
Ya highly over rated like a weak .8 twenty five dollar sac...
GOOD..GOOD..YOUR FIRST LINE YOUR FLOW WAS ILL..GOOD 8/10
Fuck u, fuck this battling, ya just anotha washed up WANNABE VET trying to revive ya rhyming...
Ya climbing opposite of my skys designing crying cause u missed the 1 time only wack rapper signing...
LMAO..GOOD PERSONAL..YOUR FLOW WAS ILL ONCE AGAIN 8/10
I'm sick to my stomach and I'll win cuz I vomit late...
See you thought you could run shit but I came here to dominate...
GOOD CLOSER..A "DEEP" ENDER...GOOD. 8/10

AVERAGED: 7.8

Mixtapes are played,matter of fact I got some under my couch..
theres nothin you can say to me...............................
...........................you lost to someone stuck ina box..
SHIT DIDNT RHYME..SO IT LOSES MAD POINTS..5/10
missfiyas man?............now i see with ugly guys she is cumfy..
til i dis-arm n de-feat you,like you stole in foreign countries..
AIGHT PUNCHLINE..WASNT GREAT..6/10
you not hot,so stop using pink to describe heat on ya name..
maybe its a habbit, cause you know gays drawn to flames..
EHH...KINNA WHACK..DIDNT LIKE 6/10
just needed a win, so i accepted what you tryn to make happin..
like ya avy all i need was 2 less than this last one..(9-2=7 lines)
ONCE AGAIN..DIDNT RHYME..I DUNNO IF IS JUSS ME BUT IS NOT RHYMIN..5/10

AVERAGED: 4.5

VOTE--MIXTAPE

Gods son 07-10-04 11:36 PM

iight this battle was whack..both didnt really have personals..that wins battles but i'ma go from there. The flow mixtape had a better one.Calamity yours was weird man some of ya lines didnt rhyme and thats not good..good vocab on both parts...MixtApe got my vote..with this fav line Slowly twisting ya de-feet in to place, soon after i'll deface...
Cause after i'm through amputating ya features,you'll never be able to show face...

keep elevatin

Luse Cannon 07-11-04 12:02 AM

yo this was a real close battle to judge. neither of them really pulled away whe it came to punches, but Calamity definately took it when it came to personals. the only thing that swayed my vote was that Mixtape had a better flow and I enjoyed readin his more.

no hate, close battle, but mixtape gets my vote


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