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MR.Goodbar vs. Bigbitch..err.BigChase
Hey Yo! BigChase private messaged me saying...
10 lines....you spit first......set it up bitch..... First of all, that's a bitch move challenging me then tell me to spit first? But I don't give a fuck, I private messaged him back and said Shit I come back from work and find this? Iight bitch, it's on like Donkey kong? And after you read my slaughter to you, don't be a little bitch and go changing your signature and avatar like I know you'll wanna do. LET'S GO!!! And guess what bitch, I'm spittin 15 barz cuz if you're so fucking badass, you could take me in 10? Right?! Fuck, I'll even let you spit 20 and have a round 2!!! Bigchase must've swigged his shit-laced/ and got shit-faced/ Challeng me? You bout to "lose" like you've been misplaced/ ILL enough to go to a knife-fight knifeless/ fight and survive it/ Leave my opponent life-less/ Leave his eyes without eye-lids/ Take his licence to kill without one slit on my grill/ The only thing you "BigChase" is donuts rolling down the hill/ I'll pound this "Soljah" down into the ground until we squash beef/ (*Psh *Psh *Psh ) There, now you the "streets"!/ B. Chase, I don't need pencils to battle or make you erase/ I eat-mase and spit it back into B's face *sppizz* Here have a taste/ Now-blast your most stout-raps out-fast that you-have thus far/ I'll leave this "Big Boi" an "outkast" like his avatar/ Enough of the bluffs that erupt from your mouth's lips/ Just read my signature..http://www.thebikinidorm.com/nuts.jpg/ Yeah nigga, like only the Candy-Man can |
ROFL^ nuts in your mouth hahahahaha.. thats funny shit.. ima vote after big chase spits.. nice drop.. bigchase, make it a good battle :)..
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134137 ^ i will be back to voteon this.. hit mine up while i wait |
Just so you can understand my disses better since BigChase seems to be sleeping on the battle he called me out on here is his avatar and his signature.
http://community.rapbattles.com/ima...ars/outkast.gif http://thestank.freeservers.com/images/bcrd.jpg Tha Street Soljah........Tha Suburban ledgend http://thestank.freeservers.com/images/bigchase.jpg |
lol, I can't wait to see this. Even though we on da same crew Big, you gotta come hard if you wanna win this. That shit was funny.
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oo sorry i was away man...i left the siteo n was away.....how long it take you to spit this hsit.....did y freestyle it or pre-written....
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neither one, it was keystyled, and I'm still waiting
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okay i just say the battle....i went to the beach and left rb minimized...........im start typin mine.........
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:flipoff: :gfy: :thefinger HURRY UP AND BRING IT!! Quit Stalling Here, I'll even give you a line... I'm street smart, speak sparks that blister and melt Goodbar's "d-bars"/ So all that's left is "goo", so theirs no Mister to speak on/ Their! Thats a tight line against me USE IT! WHATEVER!!! JUST HURRY THE FUCK UP!!!! |
This testicle obsessed faggot knocked up an ugly ass whore
Even when he makes sound effects his bitch cant find "Mr.Herbs" dick though... All these empty threats of killin emcees is gettin irrelevant He calls me bigbitch cause Im the one who gots his babys mama pregnant.. In your battle you also mentioned your affection for Tupacs dick This Max Hardcore jerkin, antagonist rhymes would be Slick if he was Rick.. Even if he was the Streets this dude aint neva gonna be hardcore Did ya see hes a racist too this Candy Bar is poster boy form the Klu Klux Klan This "badass" pissed cuz he came on his sister, got her pregnant, and the only action was wit his hand..\ How bout leave suburbia and take yo weakass pre-written shit to realists Even if he was on Deathrow Candy-Bar dick still wouldnt be a killah.. a quickie.....im busy so yeah.....nice psit no hate...... explainations for htose who be slow..: He always says nuts in your muth(testicle obsessed), the gurl im tlakin bout (see the mebers pictures), His avatar is Cannibus(Mr. Herb aka weed),all his verse say how hell kill someone(irrelevant), said the chick he was wit was his babies momma(got her pregnant), He left a link for Max Hardcore:a nasty XXX site and mentioned tupacs dick in his verse gainst Poetic justice..,mentioned the streets(streets=hard ala hardcore), he said nigga and hes pure white (racist), odnt wanna explain the rest.... |
there.....the explainations took most of the time...........god ur impatient..........i hate typing im super slow at it......
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yo i took tha street soljah thing off my sig cuz my sig had too many characters.....
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OH MAN! Yall please up this shit! I'm begging you! Fuck, I'll let cha crew vote on it! You did alot of fuckin research and explanation for that to be a quick reply plus you a slow typer? :huh: shit dont smell right? But whuteva..yall up this shit! Miss Lyricist[b], [b]Calamity, yall come back on a rock this vote. |
Wow, I really expected a lot more from this.....
Mr Goodbar was OK. He had a few OK punches but most were ehh. He flowed OK but was off in a few spots. He had a little bit of wit behind his punches but it was minimal. Overall, like I said, it was an OK verse... BigChase was pretty much horrible. He didn't even rhyme in his opener, let alone most of his bars. He needs to learn that you can't type five lines and call it one bar. Wit wasn't apparent. Overall, his verse just lacked everything. You need to just start practicing on your structure. Learn how to make your lines even, and for gods sake, learn how to rhyme.... Vote - Mr Goodbar |
I can't vote on this because Big's in my crew, but I can leave an opinion.
Flow- Mr. Goodbar. His lines may have been shorter, but line length doesn't matter. You've got make sure that when people read your verse, they can breeze through it easily and with comprehention. Big, your verse was rather stretched. Work on your sylables, it'll help the flow. Structure- Tied. Nothing flawd with the way y'all wrote yah verses. Punches- Big, I must say that although Mr.Goodbar was funny, you hit harder. Even though some of the shit you wrote was play'd, I saw some originality there. Personals- Big, I noted the way you used Goodbar's pic in your verse. Nice one. Multies and Wordplay- Both go the Mr.Goodbar, he had some nice ones in his verse. Funny- Definitly went to Mr.Goodbar. Your sig just cracks me up man. Big, you can include hard punches as well as funny ones brah, but I didn't see any this time around. Overall vote... I'll keep that to myself. But this was a tight battle, I'm out. |
Goodbar killed him. There was nothin creative in Chases verse. This battle kinda sucked cuz it was one sided. Good bar had the punches on his side. He had a good structure and flow to it too. Chases verse was weak because there was basically nothing that caught my attention. Yeah....Good bar took this hands down.
Vote - Goodbar Vote on this: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133759 or this: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134111 |
damn I say this was a all around nice battle............................
GoodBar: haha your flow was crazy it was just ill to me atleast.... punches hmmm........nice real good it hit hard........................ originality/creativity was pretty good also!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! funniness was very very good made me laugh a lot................. BigChase: well the flow was aight I say in my opinion............ punches were just ok nothing special to me...................... originality/creativity was just ok...................................... funniness I didn't find it that funny all around....................... vote goes to: Mr.Goodbar do a honest vote on my battle links in my signature............. |
goodbar:that was pretty funny shit man.. when a verse is funny and it flows good.. that verse normally is the one that wins.. humor is kind of hard to pull off.. big ups to mr funny man :)..
bigchase:yessir did you do your homework lol.. nice punches.. you came out swinging pretty hard.. you fell a few times, but then got right back up.. i hate to do this hehe.. but i gotta choose.. i would have to say that flow, enjoyement,and creativity, has to go to good bar.. which swayed my vote in his direction.. good battle both of you.. v/Nut man lol Mixtape vs. calamity (0-0) calamity vs. Kingz (2-1) Re$TricTed vs. Hoops (2-0) Hoops vs. TRASE (2-0) |
goodbar...you took this...you had punches that were pretty good...structure and flow was aight...you had multis and and good wordplay...keep it up...
bigchase..i wasnt feeling your verse at all...it was like all sex...be more personal.. ..diss on his name..or somethin...structure and flow was off because of the stretched lines...it would have been ok if you had metas...but you didnt... v/goodbar harder punches |
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