la la vs gotaasswhoopin4u
 

10 lines
house rules
u spit first

checkin in...and i thought you said you was droppin first?
btw, what are tha house rules cuz i dunno em...i go by first to 5 votes wins, 3-0 ko, no d/r or hate votes...

no i didnt...house rules mean no crew..no d/r...and no crew votes...
go drop...

*smh* when i was your age i wasn't a little girl like you are...i'll drop in a minute...

damn, sorry for takin so long, i forgot i had this window open and i went downstairs haha...enough of this fuckin around, this cat's shook so i guess i'll drop first...

This is practice-for-me, why battle me if you're after-glory?/
Cuz tha only reason I won't rape you is cuz of statutory/
I maim-wit-a-knife, got ya brain-in-a-vice prayin-to-Christ/
And you only wanna change ya name cuz I came-to-tha-site/
I'm takin-ya-Life, and I ain't talkin bout your box-of-cereal/
I cock-Glocks and pop-shots then botch-tha-serial/
Before I even dropped a bar he said "Sha-please-don't-hurt-me!"/*
Get crazy-in-Jersey and leave fucked wit scavies-and-herpes/
I'ma send-em-to-Heaven at 13, this baby's-unworthy/
Now he's Seven-Eleven, plus his bitch gave-me-a-Slurpee/*

*Sha is short for Shane, that's my real name...
**his record would be 7-11 after i beat him, 7-11 tha convenience store, slurpee is their drink, blah you get tha punch...

damn, that shit took me 6 minutes to key (and it's wack cuz i just kept typin and didn't go back to fix shit, nor did i care), and this cat wouldn't drop in 10...*smh* stop takin so long and drop a verse so we can get some votes...

look at ya weak verse, i thought tissue paper was softer...
ur still a free agent and ur never gonna get an offer*...
im ahead of this socalled emcee by hundreds of miles...
u can drop a "g" for this battle u still wouldnt be "worth" my while...
he got clowned off his old site and came over here...
damn a name like "la la", and i thought "tha Q" was the only queer...
he came to this site talkin shit so his ass could be popular...
my rhymes is choppin-ya, damn u had to close a window jus to make ur own shit hot-to-ya*...
jus cause u battlin the best, u aint gon get respect...
here "la la" i hope u feelin the "direct effect"*...

*in his profile, under crew name it says "free agent"
*he jus said that he had to close the window downstairs in his house
*his name is "la la" and thats the chick that hosts "MTV Direct Effect"

Breakdown for La La...........

This is practice-for-me, why battle me if you're after-glory?/
Cuz tha only reason I won't rape you is cuz of statutory/

Nice wordplay...Good opener 7/10

I maim-wit-a-knife, got ya brain-in-a-vice prayin-to-Christ/
And you only wanna change ya name cuz I came-to-tha-site/

Wasn't feeling punch 5/10

I'm takin-ya-Life, and I ain't talkin bout your box-of-cereal/
I cock-Glocks and pop-shots then botch-tha-serial/

Don't like self hype punches but it was ah'ight 6/10

Before I even dropped a bar he said "Sha-please-don't-hurt-me!"/*
Get crazy-in-Jersey and leave fucked wit scavies-and-herpes/

tight punch 7/10

I'ma send-em-to-Heaven at 13, this baby's-unworthy/
Now he's Seven-Eleven, plus his bitch gave-me-a-Slurpee/*

ok closer 6/10


Breakdown for Gotass



look at ya weak verse, i thought tissue paper was softer...
ur still a free agent and ur never gonna get an offer*...

Horrible opener....4/10

im ahead of this socalled emcee by hundreds of miles...
u can drop a "g" for this battle u still wouldnt be "worth" my while...

decent punch 5/10

he got clowned off his old site and came over here...
damn a name like "la la", and i thought "tha Q" was the only queer...

Weak punch 4/10

he came to this site talkin shit so his ass could be popular...
my rhymes is choppin-ya, damn u had to close a window jus to make ur own shit hot-to-ya*...

Seriously stretched an wack 4/10

jus cause u battlin the best, u aint gon get respect...
here "la la" i hope u feelin the "direct effect"*...

Ok who didn't see the direct effect line coming, weak.....3/10

This was a really one sided battle La La took this one hands down

Vote: La La

yo all LA LA's lines could be fuckin PRE WRITTEN OR BITTEN OR USED...cuz she didnt use any personals....imma vote later..im too tired now

^^^she? i'm a dude, and there isn't any personals cuz i don't know who tha fuck he is, quit dickridin him and hatin on me...i keyed that verse in like 5-6 minutes, i've never prewritten in my life, and i said that i left tha internet window open, not a window in my crib lmao...1-0 uppin for more votes please

btw, triple n you gotta vote on tha poll thing too cuz it says 0-0 for tha battle standings...can a mod please clean up tha freepost in here too?

ehh...i didnt kno that...be specific, uppin for votes...

^^^??? i dunno what you're talkin about but yeah, 1-0 uppin for votes, this shit is fuckin dead...

up for more votes, and i don't want state capitol votin on my battles...1-0 uppin

uppin again...damn, i gotta go vote on other battles now........

Lala had the better verse in my opinion. though the verse was kinda stretched and multis werent used effectively, the punches were a lot stronger than Asswhoopings and some personals were used (however wack they may be)
v/lala

Return the favour here:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134449

umm okay battle...

opener-gota..it was a personal
structure-umm a tie
punchlines-la la
multi's-la la
creativity-a tie
personals-gota
finisher-gota
enjoyed-gota...i think if battlin wasn't personal then la la would of won dis battle...nahmean gota some of ya shit was weak but ya personals was good so there 4
my vote-gotta

^^^well it's kinda hard to use personals when you don't know anything about tha person...2-1 my lead but tha peeps that voted for me didn't do tha poll...uppin this for more votes

Aight Check It...

You Who Voted For La La....Wow....Please Excuse Me But That Verse Was Wack. Not One Punch, Self-Glorification and Thug Talk Threw Out The Spit LMAO...

GotAssWhoopinForU Actually Threw Sum Nice Punches At This Herb Who Thought He Was Nice...La La Had Nice Flow With Sum Multis But Thats ABout It. GAW4U Mos Def Took This With Punches and Metaphors.

Vote - GotAssWhoopin4U

~R~

La La - Hot drop. Had plenty of multiples and some nice punches this was a real good verse. Nice structure. Everything was on point. 8.5/10

Gotta - You had a hot drop too. But la la had more efficient multi's than you did and came harder lyrically. But overall ya did ya thing. You had all on point but just not as on point as la. 8/10.

Vote - La La
Return tha favor on tha real.
Me vs. Unfortunate

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133785

^ hit that shit up since im votin on this


lala ya opener tried to doin somethin tight but didnt go no where wasnt worded right an didnt land to good ya closer was wack lol@ ya fuckin bars dog i wasnt fealin none of it that talk abotu ya girl shit is wack mulites aint givin u no advantage just helps ya flow an thats it u lacked punchs and had no personals pretty weak verse to me

gotta ya opener was decent soft punch an personal didnt hit to hard ya closer lmaoooo i thought of the same shit when i looked at his name nice personal an punch the rest of ya verse was decent some punchs wherent to good but u came with a bunch of personals even thought not all of em hit hard u had some

vote gotta

had a better verse to me an actually had personals in it gottas closer was prolly the best lines out this battle la la u need to work on rewordin ya punchs kid

la la's drop:

wow that was just.............................................. ..
a flat-out self-glorification drop seriously were you in a stage of
your life that your brain told you that being full of yourself wins a
battle fo ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
well I say flow was nice anywayz you had multis I have to say
that in what i'm typing of course.....your originality/creativity
was not all original I have to type aswell.....punches weren't
that good but it was decent in my opinion........................
personals weren't there at all thats not a good sign.............

Shabba Ranks a.k.a. Gottaasswhoopin4u drop:

ok that was overall a pretty good verse I was really feeling
it most of the time it fell off sometimes tho but hey every drop does!
ok hmmm.........flow was nice which means the syllable count
was on point aswell.........multis was aight nothing special also....
originality/creativity was pretty good in my eyes............................
punches was aight I was feeling the majority of them all...........
personals well you had them opener was a personal also
and that and the fact you keep self-glorification lines to a
mininum & none.......

my vote goes to: Shabba Ranks....

uppin 4 vote.........................................

GOTTA ASS - nice verse wid nice structure. it was the better of the 2 and it was more creative n had better punches

LA LA - lost for the weakness of his punches, although u included multiz n som gud wordplay gotta ass whoopin won this clearly

v - gotta ass whoopin 4 ya

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