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Terrorism ft Lethal Lunatic
LethalNJection Humanity recently encountered an enemy And fell victim to its sick pysichotic mentality Cause its only belief is to die for a cause So it makes no misstakes and it has no flaws. What it creates has only one name which is described as terror. What it lacks most in its actions is the thing called error. It is a living nightmare for all public security And we could only stop it if we form an unity, If we could all shout loud so that it could hear us It might see our determination and begin to fear us. Yet if we only hide and pray it doesn't hit us We would all go down a whole, ripped apart and feet first. It is called TERRORISM and kills our urban peace, It destroyed thousands of lives and doesn't seem to cease, It deserves a darkned place in our global history, It will be always regreted by us and our comunity. Lethal Lunatic Just like terrorism hip hop terrorized The young children who watch and tries not to cry To hard but figures out that they’re livin in the devil’s eye thugs thinks that they can neva die, dictators tries to lie Lie you into terrorism just waitin to be Me and terrorism are alike blinded not able to see That we cause destruction, physically and emotionally But not just to us but the kids who actually looks up at me We create massive destruction even hip hop artist Like hip hop now life is endin into the hands of terrorist Terrorist, kills more people than the ones on the injured list We need not to have an open hand but to unite to hit wit a fist Terrorist is just the beginnin of the end Life is hard your not even able to trust a friend Life only happens once here and it doesnt happen again For the world it’s the gun in the hand for me it’s the paper and the pen |
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yup uppin for some feed back on this please
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uppin
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it wasn't the best thing i heard but it was good. i personnal liked Lethal Lunatic's shit better but it was all good.
best line:We create massive destruction even hip hop artist Like hip hop now life is endin into the hands of terrorist one thing i didn't like was that it wasn't always about terrorism. stay focused. it was pretty good 1 |
I was tryin to compare hip hop wit terrorism but thnx for the feed back
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i like the comparisons you was makin between hiphop and terrorism, i dont know if interpreted right but i like how yall were talkin about how hiphop music effects kids, especially the young ones who are real impressionable. the rhymes was hot but like the other dude said it wasn't real focused, but i understand what yall was trying to say, hot shit
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uppin for some more feed bak
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iight yea wasnt my best but uppin for some more feed back
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Same here that wasnt my best either
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good, liked the flow and structure, although it did get a lil off track
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yea okay anyways ... uppin for some more feed dont sleep
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uppin
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arite arite, this was very good material i like most of the bars the ending especially impressed me, i mean the vocab was above average but if yall had put more time into it im sure it could have been phenomenal...anyways i still liked this peace as a whole, innovative subject and whatnot, keep it up
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it was good but i thought it was a lil weak for u 2 overall good though betta than average pc
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cool anyways my verse I wrote it in like 5 minute thnx for the feed back
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np homie yo if i go get tha link will u drop a vote on this battle cause i need it closed cause tourny's are comen up and this was my 2 battle here an it's still open???"
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iight thankz for the feed back uppin for somemore
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word
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uppin for sum vote
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not my best work but w/e uppin for some more feed
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okay once again uppin on this one ...
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it was str8 i like the way u described evrythin clearly that was raw a lil off track but still koo
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