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Wordz AhGod 07-10-04 03:22 AM

EyeDentdy V.s. .Gunit101
 
no max bars/lines
verses due by sunday at 3:30 est time
30 mins to spit after check.
no feedin, no recyclin, no crew votes, no alias votes, no dick riding votes, no biting, any of these rules get broken and I'll DQ u befor I even have time to K.O. Ur punk ass.

I'll go first seeing as how Niggaz wont read my lines if U go first and put em to sleep.

Wordz AhGod 07-10-04 03:52 AM

eyedentdy rap niggaz up wit infro beams/
Gunit got enough aliases to start a soccer team/
Get a pin and pop Ur splean, and whach u bleed/
If bloods thicker than water, Urs'll squirt like Oxyclean/
but I'll leave u "underground" like Nate and Jada/
U a failure... even If U knew my verse beforhand, it still wouldnt save ya/
do U like Mase, and make U rearange Ur behavia'/
cuz the clocks tickin and times running out/
U pop thangs? I see half of em in Ur mouth right now/
U aint gangsta, I'll cut Ur balls off like a eunuch/ (pron='yü-nik)
U str8 out the woods? I'll turn Ur block into a tooth pick/
I'll leave Ur block uninhabitable, like a sunless earth/
U couldnt beat me if lloyd whatched ur progress as Buck wrote Ur verse/

explanaition...

He has Gunit101, .Gunit101, Gunit101. and the list goes on.
50 cent once made a song cold, Thicker than water.
Mase became a priest or some shit...
eu·nuch
1 : a castrated man placed in charge of a harem or employed as a chamberlain in a palace
2 : a man or boy deprived of the testes or external genitals
3 : one that lacks virility or power <political eunuchs>

thats it. sorry it took so long, I had a lot to explain.

.gunit101 07-10-04 10:39 AM

LOL....you should rally let someone know when you are setting up a battle....

I'll drop in like 10 minutes...

.gunit101 07-10-04 10:49 AM

LOL.....you should have never even set this up

Why you stepping up to a god and still praying for help?
You must love solitaire.......cause you're playing yourself
You need a dictionary.....why did you spit that to me?
Need to be Eyedentdy Proofread...can't spell Rhapsody
I'm spitting ill........my words straight write you a picture
Your punches wouldn't burn me if you spiked em wit liquer
Of course I won't even try...if I did the shit would be ugly
I even put a period in my name to leave this pussy bloody
He's thinking he's fresh cause he Febreezed his words
I'm even uprooting his ass......when I weed this herb
Nope, you're just not good enough..this is how I'll end it
A verbal onslaught....even you're next of kin's offended

Wordz AhGod 07-10-04 11:53 AM

I kno its spelled Rhapsody U dumb ass, were the fuck were Ur personals, punches or metas at? U dissed Urself wit the period shit while Using the same crack about the period shit that I did on U in the thread. niggaz liked it so U added it in like a dumb azz. lets get them votes in now.

Yvonne 07-11-04 10:33 AM

structure (which i aint got) : both
punches:eyedentdy
metaz:eyedentdy's were betta..the whole combination....cool
in short i think its bearly clear he go this 1

v/eyedentdy

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eB 07-11-04 10:55 AM

i Dunno Both Were Aight. Eye Had All The Good Personals And Disses. Gunit Dissed Himself Once That Was Funny. Vocab = Eye Metas = Eye Personals = Eye.

Vote = Eye

-eB

MR.Goodbar 07-11-04 11:30 AM

By the time I got to ...
Of course I won't even try...if I did the shit would be ugly
I even put a period in my name to leave this pussy bloody

...I decided you took it. I didnt have to read the rest.

v/gunit

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Wordz AhGod 07-11-04 12:33 PM

keep em votes comin, uppin for votes so I can move on to the next Gunit101 member. This is one army that aint gonna make it to salvation.

.gunit101 07-11-04 08:01 PM

^ LOL.....OK, lets get some more votes in here so this pussy can take another L.

Atleast the person who voted for me quoted a fuckin line....

Uppin!

.gunit101 07-11-04 08:03 PM

LOL....I just noticed you changed your sig you fucking fag. He used to have the word Rapsody in his sig really big, but it's really spelled Rhapsody.....

Thanks cheater :thumbup:

gunit101. 07-11-04 08:08 PM

lmao. gunit is a merking squad, dont sweat the votes, i never get them either. eydentity, lets take our battle to EFL :thumbup:

flow2crazy 07-11-04 08:19 PM

aight well dis was a close battle

vocab:gunit
personals:eye
metas:eye

vote: eye
drop some votes on my battles

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.gunit101 07-11-04 08:32 PM

^^^ Another DQed vote.....If you're gonna vote, please leave a decent explaination.

Oh, And how can you seriously vote for someone that spit that hunk of garbage?

Whatever.....vote how you want...

Leave links

Wordz AhGod 07-11-04 11:09 PM

Ur getting worked up, I can emagine U grabing Ur computer and putting it the trunk of Ur car and drive off a bridge like in the stan video. I changed my sig becouse I had some difficulties wit a member n the crew, He got cut off like Ur wak ass verse. We picked Lyrical Rapsody rather then Lyrical Rhapsody becouse its kinda like a wordplay type of shit, not a type O. too be real, Ur verse was ok, U just lacked personals, Ur punches were ok, they werent great but ok. My shit apperently wasnt garbage if Ur going crazy and thretening to make this battle last another life time by dq'ing votes that arent for U like a crying ass baby. Id really like to move on wit this man, calm down and let the shit happend.

Hi-C 07-11-04 11:24 PM

ok lets break it down...

first, eye's verse. you had alot of good punches, i liked how sum of em associated with g unit and they was very good, keepin your vocab up to par, the only real problem i see with your verse is that the flow was a little shaky at times. otha than that this was good.

g-unit's verse. first off, i dont know if this counts towards you, but your verse was definitely alot cleaner grammatically and easier to read. dont think that matters though. some good punches yet again, i liked your wordplay, you actually got a laugh out of me, which dont happen often.

overall, this was a close one, they seemed to both have good punches, but it seemed to me like g-unit used a couple that were more defensive, whereas eye stayed on the offensive..and it seemed like eyes vocab was just a little better..so my vote goes to him. this was a good one though

Hi-C 07-11-04 11:25 PM

phuk i cant edit my post...so i gotta freepost, sorry guys

please peep mine its gettin its ass slept on

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134532

Wordz AhGod 07-12-04 03:44 PM

lets get them votes rollin in this shit so I can hurry up and Ko. this fake ass gangster.

flow2crazy 07-12-04 04:54 PM

aight well imma redo my vote

Gunit: u got a pretty good structure n vocab but i wasnt feelin ur punches n didnt see to many personals or metas 7/10

Eye: u had some pretty good punches n personals... ur vocab is pretty good but could use improvement but u got some original ideas so thats y u get my vote 7.5/10

v/eye

flow2crazy 07-12-04 04:56 PM

my bad i cant place a new vote on this one

Cocaine 07-12-04 11:24 PM

ok gunit got this one easily.. he is way more skilled then eye.. its obvious he wasnt even trying and he still merked him.. better punches .. good personals soo overall my vote goes to gunit

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Wordz AhGod 07-13-04 12:02 AM

hay, Gunit. R u gonna DQ genicides vote too? it is a hate vote if U havent noticed any of our run ins. plus he didn't exacly explain his vote, it was more a "fuck eye, he's stupid" kinda vote U know. fuck it. lets get on wit the votes. no more DQ'ing shit U pussy. I couldve had a fucking KO on U by now.

Know-Gimix 07-15-04 12:45 AM

this was a pretty good battle both were decent here--- I think Eyedentdy had more wordplay in his verse and his punches attacked the opponent more, eyedentdy didn't have any personals and ur best line with the period kinda was a diss to urself especially when he dissed on it already-- aside from that you both had good structure and creativity in your verses, good luck to both in the future vote Eyedentdy--- please drop an honest vote here ... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133452

gunit101. 07-15-04 02:09 AM

lmfao... herbs. he's not even my alias you stupid fucks. :shoot:

.gunit101 07-15-04 06:27 PM

No offense seventhird.....but did you even read the verses? I was actually one of the competitors. It seems like you thought this battle was between Eyedentdy and......um.......eyedentdy....lol. I'm sorry but you mentioned he was good, then you mentioned how he sucked.....what about me?

M.F.P 07-15-04 08:23 PM

eyedenty won in all the categories

he had better punches
his vocab was ok
metaz goes to eyedentity

gunit won in structure
gunit also had ok vocab

but eyedentity won 3-2

vote=eyedentity

M.F.P 07-15-04 08:27 PM

vote on dis

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135202

Wordz AhGod 07-15-04 10:55 PM

Thatz a mu fuckin Ko. GGGGGGGGGGGGGGood bye bitch.

servin them up 07-15-04 11:31 PM

gunit right off the u get my vote but both did good eye u ur punchlines didnt go hard enuff but good one though and gunit u could of also done better but i liked ur punchlinesgood one holla!

Drastic 07-15-04 11:34 PM

yeah id have to give this battle to eye. he had better punches and personals tha only thing i liked bout your verse gunit was that it was easier to read if u work on your punches youd actually be a good textcee eyes personls caught me "eye" LOL his aliasis can make a soccer team lol but an oveall good battle

vote-eyedentdy


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