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SONIC 07-10-04 02:01 PM

Black Thief Vs. Datruth29
 
Ok.. 10 lines
no crew votes
blind spit, due in 30 min.
c'mon..

let's go.. check in..

SONIC 07-10-04 02:24 PM

I'll steal this thief's soul and pull it right Threw His Chest
Ya Know your Victory in this battle dependes on if "I" Do My Best
Your record proves the fact that you're no body to Take On
Writing the disses are the easy part, I stay in the booth Like Pay Phones
I'll dislocate Joints, wet with pistols and Anoint Him
if not, I'll pull out my knife to "SHOW HIM MY POINT THEN", (knife's point)
You can't "move me", like Godzilla can't be droped when Wind Blows
You Can't See Me, like Stevie Wonder looking threw tented Windows
shit, I'm so attractive man, it's like my body's Filled With Magnets
If you really are a "Black Thief", then you should go n Steal Some Tallent

Black Thief 07-10-04 02:24 PM

check in....my bad...was postin in my crew thread.....

SONIC 07-10-04 02:25 PM

No Feeding Off My Verse Coz..
I Wrote It By The Time You Should Of Checked In.

Black Thief 07-10-04 02:32 PM

aiight lets go...
"Da Truth" is...you cant beat this
Im a pummel this nigga til he curled up like a fetus
this coward is more shook than strippers titties
Its like Im battlin in a drama...da truth aint gettin nothin but pity
Come to California and give ya a "hella beating"
put a couple to ya dome and leave ya "hella leakin"
drop ya best shit...and still pales in comparison
tryin to beat me wit ^^those^^lines....what an embarrasment

Black Thief 07-10-04 02:33 PM

ok Ill drop somethin else then cause my last line would be considered feedin

Black Thief 07-10-04 02:34 PM

u wanna redo this shit or what?

Black Thief 07-10-04 02:42 PM

aiight Im a get this one closed....Uno

SONIC 07-10-04 03:07 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Black Thief
tryin to beat me wit ^^those^^lines....what an embarrasment

C'mon man, I said don't feed off my shit..

SONIC 07-10-04 06:13 PM

yea

*The~Star* 07-10-04 06:28 PM

Vote=DaTruth

It's very simple on how he won this battle.He had better punches.Flow was cool from both of you.Black could have came with better punches than that.That's all I could say about this battle,DaTruth won cuz of better punches.

I'll poll when somebody votes on my battle,cuz I did take the time 2 read this shit!

FlowIntelligent. 07-10-04 09:05 PM

datruth:


I'll steal this thief's soul and pull it right Threw His Chest
Ya Know your Victory in this battle dependes on if "I" Do My Best
^^first line good second line weak 5/10
Your record proves the fact that you're no body to Take On
Writing the disses are the easy part, I stay in the booth Like Pay Phones
^^hott meta decent punch 7/10
I'll dislocate Joints, wet with pistols and Anoint Him
if not, I'll pull out my knife to "SHOW HIM MY POINT THEN", (knife's point)
^^good shyt 7/10
You can't "move me", like Godzilla can't be droped when Wind Blows
You Can't See Me, like Stevie Wonder looking threw tented Windows
^^lmao your best bar hott 9/10
shit, I'm so attractive man, it's like my body's Filled With Magnets
If you really are a "Black Thief", then you should go n Steal Some Tallent
^^hott closer good punch and personal 8/10

overall : 36/50

black thief :


"Da Truth" is...you cant beat this
Im a pummel this nigga til he curled up like a fetus
^^good nameplay decent punch 7/10
this coward is more shook than strippers titties
Its like Im battlin in a drama...da truth aint gettin nothin but pity
^^decent punch but stretched 5/10
Come to California and give ya a "hella beating"
put a couple to ya dome and leave ya "hella leakin"
^^kinda weak 4/10
drop ya best shit...and still pales in comparison
tryin to beat me wit ^^those^^lines....what an embarrasment
^^hott closer your best bar 9/10

overall : 25/40

vote: datruth

i think you just came harder it didnt even look like you tried in this battle black thief and i know u got more fire than that...datruth good punches and metas hott verse...black shoulda came harder

~!1!~

Black Thief 07-10-04 09:30 PM

LOl....i feel ya, but....

























this battle is closed!no more votes!

SONIC 07-11-04 01:01 AM

uppin

SONIC 07-11-04 02:41 PM

We Might As Well Keep It Open... Upping For Votes,

*The~Star* 07-11-04 02:41 PM

What's up with the poll?It won't let me poll for some reason and I got over 5 battles,but this one won't let me.

SONIC 07-11-04 10:56 PM

upping

SONIC 07-12-04 10:30 AM

uppin fa votes

SONIC 07-12-04 06:15 PM

uPPING

SONIC 07-13-04 10:37 AM

nO ONE VOTE IN ELEVATED

Mad Dog 07-13-04 11:09 AM

DaTruth

I'll steal this thief's soul and pull it right Threw His Chest
Ya Know your Victory in this battle dependes on if "I" Do My Best
/\ Ok opener

Your record proves the fact that you're no body to Take On
Writing the disses are the easy part, I stay in the booth Like Pay Phones
/\ Not hard at all not much of a diss

I'll dislocate Joints, wet with pistols and Anoint Him
if not, I'll pull out my knife to "SHOW HIM MY POINT THEN", (knife's point)
/\ Nice punch

You can't "move me", like Godzilla can't be droped when Wind Blows
You Can't See Me, like Stevie Wonder looking threw tented Windows
/\ Nice diss

shit, I'm so attractive man, it's like my body's Filled With Magnets
If you really are a "Black Thief", then you should go n Steal Some Tallent
/\ Good closer nice diss


Black Thief

aiight lets go...
"Da Truth" is...you cant beat this
Im a pummel this nigga til he curled up like a fetus
/\ Ok opener nothin special

this coward is more shook than strippers titties
Its like Im battlin in a drama...da truth aint gettin nothin but pity
/\ Not a hard punch or personal


Come to California and give ya a "hella beating"
put a couple to ya dome and leave ya "hella leakin"
/\ Na nnot feelin at all

drop ya best shit...and still pales in comparison
tryin to beat me wit ^^those^^lines....what an embarrasment
/\ Ok closer not feelin much tho

V/DaTruth came harder in this in my opinion

RTF on my link honestly and i'll poll as i keep votin and no-1 returns a vote so hit mine up and i'll come back and poll :thumbup:

Mad Dog 07-13-04 11:18 AM

Here it is...http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132981

Mad Dog 07-13-04 11:32 AM

Na i'll poll actually now coz yall battle needs to move to so its fair here ya are

SONIC 07-13-04 03:42 PM

Anymore Votes

SONIC 07-13-04 06:46 PM

Uppin

Pop Lotty 07-14-04 12:43 AM

Datruth
I'll steal this thief's soul and pull it right Threw His Chest
Ya Know your Victory in this battle dependes on if "I" Do My Best
6/10..ok opener
Your record proves the fact that you're no body to Take On
Writing the disses are the easy part, I stay in the booth Like Pay Phones
6.5/10...*tsk, tsk* self glorification is a nono
I'll dislocate Joints, wet with pistols and Anoint Him
if not, I'll pull out my knife to "SHOW HIM MY POINT THEN", (knife's point)
7/10...good
You can't "move me", like Godzilla can't be droped when Wind Blows
You Can't See Me, like Stevie Wonder looking threw tented Windows
6/10..played
shit, I'm so attractive man, it's like my body's Filled With Magnets
If you really are a "Black Thief", then you should go n Steal Some Tallent
7.5/10...nice.....
overall - 6.6...some good punches in here


Black thief
"Da Truth" is...you cant beat this
Im a pummel this nigga til he curled up like a fetus
5/10..weak line, and the flow was off
this coward is more shook than strippers titties
Its like Im battlin in a drama...da truth aint gettin nothin but pity
6/10..wack
Come to California and give ya a "hella beating"
put a couple to ya dome and leave ya "hella leakin"
5/10..wtf...u put it in there like it was a punch
drop ya best shit...and still pales in comparison
tryin to beat me wit ^^those^^lines....what an embarrasment
5/10...weak
overall - 5.25...wtf was this, i seen u come better than this
v/Datruth

SONIC 07-14-04 01:12 AM

upping

Tempa 07-14-04 02:25 AM

RETURN THA FAVOR.
Me vs. SevenThird


DaTruth - Gotta give it to ya. ILL verse. Nice punches and good structure. No multies or vocab. but ya shit was still hot. Good verse. 8/10

Black Thief - You had a nice verse too but lyrically and punch wise didn't come as hard as truth. But good verse cuz. 7\10

Vote: Da Truth


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