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femcee Vs. Malefic
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Wake up...
Smell the Folder's...Fem, I'm Bendin back your shoulders Your a Vet? who told ya?...Girl you got beat by WillNova Reppin Blue Print..Jus show's dis Dope don't kno the rope's You got no Hope..Even your Sig know's your number of vote's This just a Remix of -Body COunt- One Up 5 votes an I'm out Some body answer this.."who the hell's Blue Print's Scout?" Cus you belong in Rap as much as Juvenille in plaid.... Don't be mad...4 wins...an now your just dried up Mag..(marker) Played' key word your success revolve's around vision blurr'd- The only way you stand a chance is if reprecussion's reflect my words |
this is just a matter of being dismissed...
...no record of malefic audio, cause theres dips in his lisp. hes flushed emcee, thats why theres no mic in his fist... ...its a mouse that he grips, your just an online vigallant. aint got the skill you want, this cat kills with font... ...i kid you not, just a dyke behind a screen. its like the pipe with out the green, just how you write behind the scenes... you'd need an edit button to equal out our rhymes... ...your just a sequal to the vines, like vin deisel's face in Times.(the mag) you say your rymes are goin places, ya IRAQ... ...lie back, and think apon my facts of why your still sitting behind iMAC. dont worry your not tha only one whos pissed, ive got da list... ...battle buisiness is this, "step to me at your own risk".......sorry MaL but youve been DismiSSed. |
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Malefic: Thought your verse started off a bit weak, but progressed as it went on. Punches and personals were reasonably nice. Flow and structure were nice too
Fem: Wasnt really feeling your verse at all, you had some attempted punches but these were weakened by your fucked structure. vocab could also be improved v/Melific |
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hmmmmmmmmm.......ok battle
mal: your verse started off ok but iy got pretty good.....Your punches were pretty good.......okay/good vocab Fem: you you were okay.........ok punches......but you failed cuz mal came kinda harder and had stonrger punches..........okish vocab........... v/ mel |
malefic:
Wake up... Smell the Folder's...Fem, I'm Bendin back your shoulders Your a Vet? who told ya?...Girl you got beat by WillNova -great opener... Reppin Blue Print..Jus show's dis Dope don't kno the rope's You got no Hope..Even your Sig know's your number of vote's -nice creativity...good personal, and good metas This just a Remix of -Body COunt- One Up 5 votes an I'm out Some body answer this.."who the hell's Blue Print's Scout?" -first line was tight, but second line was mediocre and the punch could have been better Cus you belong in Rap as much as Juvenille in plaid.... Don't be mad...4 wins...an now your just dried up Mag..(marker) -wasnt fellin this one Played' key word your success revolve's around vision blurr'd- The only way you stand a chance is if reprecussion's reflect my words -closure= 7/10 this is just a matter of being dismissed... ...no record of malefic audio, cause theres dips in his lisp. -no structure...but personal was good hes flushed emcee, thats why theres no mic in his fist... ...its a mouse that he grips, your just an online vigallant. aint got the skill you want, this cat kills with font... -metas are good, but need more wor play ...i kid you not, just a dyke behind a screen. its like the pipe with out the green, just how you write behind the scenes... -i like the pipe w/o the green line. nice you'd need an edit button to equal out our rhymes... ...your just a sequal to the vines, like vin deisel's face in Times.(the mag) -i saw that issue, they made a fool out of him, good punch, haha you say your rymes are goin places, ya IRAQ... ...lie back, and think apon my facts of why your still sitting behind iMAC. lacks structure, but nice creativity dont worry your not tha only one whos pissed, ive got da list... ...battle buisiness is this, "step to me at your own risk".......sorry MaL but youve been DismiSSed. -closure= 7/10 vote:close, but i give it to femcee... i admitt it was close but i was feeling femcee's creativity |
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MALIFIC:thought you had good flow n was feelin your verse,vocab was good,i think your punches could've been better but overall you had the battle...
FEM:creativity was koo,but your punches were weaker than malific's,structure needs a bit of work,vocab was ok..not good enough for the win though... VOTE/MALIFIC PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134418 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130025 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134245 |
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Malefic- betta opener, harder punches, nice vocab, good structure, nice closing: had me laughin' a lil'>
Played' key word your success revolve's around vision blurr'd- The only way you stand a chance is if reprecussion's reflect my words Femcee- okay structure, punches didn't hit hard enuff, very creativite, nice closing also but the Dismissed thing is kinda played now... Both had nice metas, wordplay... But who came out stronger in my eyes was- MALEFIc< my vote... no links right now, hit me up later.. nice battle ~wun~ |
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Fucker....why wont Femcee up? UPPIN 9
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i gotta give it to Mal for comin harder with a better flow n structure...return the favor..link in my sig
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