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YaYo Vz Joval8
iight heres how it goes down:
5-10 bars no d/r,crew or hate votes 3-0 votes K.O. 5 votes wins U SPIT first and ill follow up after u!!!! |
cmon yo spit so we can get this started
Or imma spit and forfeit the battle |
Iight den imma spit since u takin so long.......
ayo ayo Yo look at this mc he got a DJ for an avatar// But he aint ill enough to even drop a bar// Makin you stumble and slip like u juss stepped in black tar// Got this mc thinkin he sik but he cant even drive a car// ayo Like pepto bismol i got chu on the run// You prolly so scared, ya got cha pants weighin a ton// Look where hes from, hes from M.I.A, isnt that missin in action??// Yea i think it is cuz he didnt spit wid a reaction// He QUICK TO BACKDOWN like dem bravehearts say// Cuz he wont wanna spit after wat he juss seen today// Yo i got this kid in line bout to get served give me ya lunch tray// Joval gotta learn to drop rhymes the right way// Leave you like the twin towers crashin to the ground// While ill be alive standin there with the crown// Spit roundz at cha like i do it wid no sound// Joval be on the floor while his brains splattered down// This mcs rhymes "stank poor" they all up ~in-cents~// He all shakin and sh*t juss because my rhymes juss intense// Got this kid suffocating like he got the bends// Leave ya unnamed cuz ya spit gotta mend//// YO HOLLA ans spit back maynnnnnnnnnnnn iight PEACEEEEEE |
YO joval8 holla at cha boy and spit ya stuff yo. if u dont spit soon in a day, then imma have to forfeit you and i get the win PEACEEE
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Yo joval8 check in man so we can get this battle started. I already drop my stuff and u was the one who said u wanted to battle WASUP???
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yo dog sorry i had alot of work:
Ey yayo, its not ya day yo, wen u fuck wit me u cant play yo, Ill stay low, i had to work full-day hoe... aN I AM SICK, Ill spit diddy spit ma rhymes in yo face yo... U fake ass tony yayo, u think im done wit ma rhYMES i aint think so... U prolly sit in yo house screamin yay, but no... Dogg, afta this u gua be troubled, doubled, layin flat on yo back ova tha rubble... But me im celebratin ma victory, Damb.... I shouldnt be doin dis shit 4 free... I cant believe im spittin against a chump like thee, How u gonna make fun of a boy from Mi-am-i, when u come from fuckin Ha-wa-ii.. Dogg, This rap shit is too hard for u, go wax ya board, cause this battle got me walkin out tha door... An u talkin bout rounds.. this aint fuckin basket ball, Dogg, they aint no rebound.. An this shits almost done, I can imagine yo frown, u loook like a fuckin clown... |
iight iight thanks for spittin mayn. I thought u wasnt even gonna spit. Well uppin fa votes now and vote honestly. Nice spit joval
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yo i'm gonna go for yayo in this one dude joval that rhyme is wack dawg
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aight breaking down the spit, something that joval spitted was orignal and it wasn't good enought to take out yayo fo sho
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Punches: punches yayo had a little more disses towards joval
Multis: ok yayo lines was better, but the action and reaction was not good but i didn't like joval mi-am-i and ha-wa-ii rhyme it was retarded and sounded like something a little kid would write Metas: now the yayo made more metas cause you can't jovals was about calling him a hoe and him having victory sounded very immature Structure: joval cause it was longer, but yayo kept it consistent Flow: yayo flows was good, and joval wrote like lines to long and to short |
Joval8 what was with at flow? one line had 5 words and the next 15 that fuck up. plus the style sucked punches weak and personnals were not there. i don't think that mults were there cause of the flow overall i didn't like it.
yayo it was good flow was happening and damn let me just say it was all there. best line: He QUICK TO BACKDOWN like dem bravehearts say// Cuz he wont wanna spit after wat he juss seen today// Yo i got this kid in line bout to get served give me ya lunch tray// Joval gotta learn to drop rhymes the right way// you no who i'm voting for |
iight iight thanks AKA the votes is 2-0 Yayo is up
Upp them votes now peeps |
joval-
Structure: 4/10 Flow: 4/10 Punches: 4/10 Personals: 4/10 enjoyed: 2/10 Overall: 3.3/10 YaYo- Structure: 6/10 Flow: 5/10 Punches:5/10 Personals: 4/10 Enjoyed: 6/10 Overall: 5.1/10 vote: YaYo |
damn joval ur structure and flow was fucked up and thats wut lost it for u..ur punches were iight but work on the flow
yayo u had some hot punches and ur flow was nice so i gotta give it to u no hate V/Yayo |
ay joval i aint got any idea what was up with ur whole flow. man ur lines werent even. i liked yayo's style he came with something different and his flow was on point
vote - yayo |
this is real simple, I kno u heard this b4 joval, but u need to work on your flow, holla at yayo maybe he can help u.. yayo, overall just handed it to u b, keep ya head up tho
vote - yayo |
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hmm YaYo verse was nyce n Joval it was aiight Yayo pulled off more then Joval because it was better disses and was better verse
v/YaYo |
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