QBsmasher vs *The~Star*
 

Aight time to put the kiddies to bed, heres how it goes

10-15 lines
Dont be stupid, you know the rules, they are as follows:
N/hate, dr, crew, recycling, biting, feeding

Blind Spit( means we both go at the same time)

20 minutes to spit( 21+ = DQ!!!)

Lets do it.

That's not the fucking rules we agreed on

10 lines (nothing else)
No strecthing
no d/r

That's what I agreed to

Also I didn't agree to spit within 20 minutes either,so get back with that DQ shit

Come on wit it...supposed to be ill rappers in 314...your makin the STL look bad...my verse is done. Ill give ya your 40 min you agred to...you got 23 more min better get with it.


Have "the star" blow up like a "supernova", my rhymes are inhuman like "warf"
Her heads swelled like a "red giant", make her feel small like a "white dwarf"

I handle fools, like Vandals stealin jewels, sorry no scandles this duel
Crew votes, dont count, to quote unquote, without that well, your left out

Like an ant thats lost its family, she just pointlessly wanders in circles
Not that her "family matters", but she should probably be geekin with urkle

They say you cant teach an old dog new tricks, yeah right, well here go fetch
I Leave ya runnin on ya leash, just like ya rhymes your lifeline'll be STRECHED

Your words wont be equivalent, in other words "equal" if they were a synonym
Gonna be ambivalent, about another battle, unless crews defendin their women

Just like lightning, my flash is so freighting, and equally as enlightening
Youll hafta grab the dictionary to plunder, When i crack on you like thunder

A whole verse? Here I got three words thatll scare ya to death "Back to school"
You think your cool cause your up late, HA before long 9 oclock'll be the rule

Game Over
 

We agreed on 10 lines,but you broke the rule & went to 14.Stupid ass,but its good.......Stuff in {} is an short explanation 4 you slow peeps out there.


=This fucker coming to me, but when he get ‘roasted', he won’t get high, cuz I ‘toasted’ his wing
=Trying to test me, I’ll leave him ‘grossed‘, like stuffing his ass into his equivalent ring {skill/him equals small;ring is small}

=Thinkin he winning, you having a hard time seeing this L like erected{straight} visions
=Call ya-self Qbsmasher for the fact you knew you was heading into this future collision

=Stopping ya ‘streak‘, for this ‘geek‘, for he only get his wins off of weak peeps
=Making a ‘leak‘, from ya ‘cheek‘, for I had to bust ya, sending you into a quick bleep {alert}

=This dude a ‘bitch‘, that’s known to ‘switch‘, put a lil more in it than the ordinary trick
=He’s gets that ‘itch‘, for him to suck ‘quick‘, Erected for men, his shit be harder than a brick

=I’m dropping this ‘lame‘, for coming to me with bullshit, making his mama be ashamed
= Shredding up his ‘fame‘, thinking he better, but I drops you quick to tha point no one remembers ya name

=What do I ‘say‘?I say you’re ‘gay‘… cuz its obvious you smash QB’s :hump: {peep his name}
=You like to ‘lay‘, and you like to ‘say‘, “boy BLOW ME a cool breeze”

=This dude come like he all hard and shit, but he wack, he soft as tissue
=I beat his ass, and I’m a female, I know you Hate That, so address that issue

:shoot:

U P P I N

god 2:53 the next day!!!!!!!! LoL lets get some votes in

honestly both verses...were below par...nethier had standouts...but i did see a line outta QB
s verse that was kinda cool


decent...really the only line outta everything that was ok..i enjoyed QB's verse more then star's....enough for the v

v-QB

i think that u both matched each other in nearly every catagory but seen as i have to vote for one of u a will go wid Q.b cos he seemed to make the reader more intresting and in the end it was a case of who the reader prefered to read..

v - q.b

drop 1 on this - http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134062

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yeah, i might seem like a follower but ima say the same thing, you both had good punches and everything but my votes gonna go to qb cuz his vocab seemed a little more on point and even though he rhymed a little different it worked out good, plus his punches were a bit more original...he gets my vote

return the fav

DAMIT cant edit

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134532


plus its a bit odd that someone would even need 20 min. for a verse much less 40..

Uppin for votes.

Now this was a damn good battle...Shoot. This one was almost even. Both came with good punches that were hittin hard as hell...Damn this is a tough call to make. I think QBs punches werent as hard as stars cuz he mostly talked bout how she was a lil kid. Star came with some good punches, like that one about smashin qbs and a cool breeze or watever. I think that got her the vote. This was a good battle. Both Mcs did good.

Vote-Star

Vote on mines: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134141

votes....

yo im gnna go wit QB on this one, its got better structure and i feel he came harder wit the punches,, nice wordplay by both

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^Damn I post people with 100 posts vote only

lol shut up star...if you wanted 100 posts then you shoulda set it up and put 100 posts to vote...but nope you told me to set it up, so too bad.

This one was pretty easy to decide....

QB came with some halfway decent punches. His flow wasn't that bad, but was off in a few places. He had a few nice metas, and overall I thought it was an OK verse....

The star, however, seemed to lack any good punches. All I saw were a bunch of played concepts that were worded horribly. You need to lose the stretched style too. Just because you make the font smaller, doesn't mean you made the lines shorter....

Vote - QB

lol lets get 2 more votes here...thanks

U P P I N

I guess both of ya didn't follow the rules writin 14 bars.... QB was straight, but one of hs bars didn't rhyme, synonym with women... thas a stretch. But my gurl Star came a lil weak on this one, u started off straight but then feel off at the end.

winner..... QBsmasher

U P P I N

Need to end this battle

=This fucker coming to me, but when he get ‘roasted', he won’t get high, cuz I ‘toasted’ his wing
=Trying to test me, I’ll leave him ‘grossed‘, like stuffing his ass into his equivalent ring {skill/him equals small;ring is small}

=Thinkin he winning, you having a hard time seeing this L like erected{straight} visions
=Call ya-self Qbsmasher for the fact you knew you was heading into this future collision

=Stopping ya ‘streak‘, for this ‘geek‘, for he only get his wins off of weak peeps
=Making a ‘leak‘, from ya ‘cheek‘, for I had to bust ya, sending you into a quick bleep {alert}

=This dude a ‘bitch‘, that’s known to ‘switch‘, put a lil more in it than the ordinary trick
=He’s gets that ‘itch‘, for him to suck ‘quick‘, Erected for men, his shit be harder than a brick

=I’m dropping this ‘lame‘, for coming to me with bullshit, making his mama be ashamed
= Shredding up his ‘fame‘, thinking he better, but I drops you quick to tha point no one remembers ya name

=What do I ‘say‘?I say you’re ‘gay‘… cuz its obvious you smash QB’s {peep his name}
=You like to ‘lay‘, and you like to ‘say‘, “boy BLOW ME a cool breeze”

=This dude come like he all hard and shit, but he wack, he soft as tissue
=I beat his ass, and I’m a female, I know you Hate That, so address that issue
dont explain your punches...look at how stretched you are if you don't resize
you also tried to use big words to make it like nicer. didn't work well

Come on wit it...supposed to be ill rappers in 314...your makin the STL look bad...my verse is done. Ill give ya your 40 min you agred to...you got 23 more min better get with it.


Have "the star" blow up like a "supernova", my rhymes are inhuman like "warf"
Her heads swelled like a "red giant", make her feel small like a "white dwarf"

I handle fools, like Vandals stealin jewels, sorry no scandles this duel
Crew votes, dont count, to quote unquote, without that well, your left out

Like an ant thats lost its family, she just pointlessly wanders in circles
Not that her "family matters", but she should probably be geekin with urkle

They say you cant teach an old dog new tricks, yeah right, well here go fetch
I Leave ya runnin on ya leash, just like ya rhymes your lifeline'll be STRECHED

Your words wont be equivalent, in other words "equal" if they were a synonym
Gonna be ambivalent, about another battle, unless crews defendin their women

Just like lightning, my flash is so freighting, and equally as enlightening
Youll hafta grab the dictionary to plunder, When i crack on you like thunder

A whole verse? Here I got three words thatll scare ya to death "Back to school"
You think your cool cause your up late, HA before long 9 oclock'll be the rule
this shit was stretched too. not as bad. but the punches were alot softer. and the ryhmes were basic.

neither were any where near good. but star get's lucky finding sum one worste.

vote wit star-1

CarsonJetX2 is a bitch...fuckin hate votin mother fucker. Go suck a cock bitch boy

your structure is annoying i almost didnt read ya verse cause of that, not to mention your skill level isnt that high, your vocab isnt that good, your metas were weak........... i wasnt surprised when i read you were a female but you are giving females and st. lo a bad name,

qb smasher you got this easy BUT......... i've never read your shit before and i kind of expected way more from you cause you voted on a couple of my battles and left some opinions but with that verse i wonder if you follow your own opinions
Anyway, still good enough to win
dont hate, just an honest opinion and opinions are like asses...........................