MARVOLoUsJ1009 VS truth a.k.a
 

aight 10-12 lines you drop no less than 5 min after,house rules
i'll drop in 5 min aight,n honest votes please

AIGHT,

Battling me is a 'DUMB MOVE' like 'playing leap frog with a UNICORN'/
Left u scorned...talk shit? I'll have your 'lips' TORN worse then porn with new-BORNS/
after this RAPPING-FIGHT I'm stealing the "first amendment", so I know I'm walking away with the "BRAGGING-RIGHTS"/
Cause Marv’s like "porno vets" in "virgin roles", he's only "ACTING-TIGHT"/
Not a single soul will come to your "wake" after I SHRED-YOUR-ORGANS, cause "kids
sleep on you" like you rest on a single bed with SEVEN-"ORPHANS"/
There's no chance of my "ankles and LEGS-DEVORCING", cause "de feetin' me" is like getting a blow job from the HEADLESS-HORSEMEN/
Truth’s the rawest alive, with chords in his wrist and two mics in the PLACE-OF-FISTS, my existence alone will replace the faith of an ATHEIST/
God's a SATANIST, after this AMAZING-DISS you'll need an AIDS-ASSIST just to TAKE-A-PISS/
"Kurt Cobain" takes me in "vain" cause even God CALLS-ME-DOPE, write the RAWEST-JOKES that put kids in such an AWE-OF-QUOTES that when they come to their JAWS-ARE-BROKE/
If you wanna BRAWL-WITH-FLOWS you'll get hit from "all directions" when ATTACKING-ME, cause Emceez who "front" get "left" "right" in "BACK"-OF-ME/
You're WACK-TO-ME, you see T's challenges? Smart foes REFUSE-THOSE, cause now R.B knows that battling me is a "grave error" like "mis-spelling TOMB-STONES"/

YO YOU GOT MAX 10 MIN,SO SPIT,GOO'LUCK

Sorry Dawg I Did'nt Think It Was Gonna Take That Long,don't Worry Bout That 10 Min Shit,jus Don't Take All Night....

YO,SICKIST ON DA SITE,WTF,YOU SAID YOU WOULD DROP RIGHT AFTER ME,AS LONG AS I WENT FIRST ,THIS IS BULLSHIT,DON'T EVEN BOTHER DROPIN YOUR VERSE,YA FINALLY GET A CHALLENGE THEN BACKOUT,I KNOW THE ONLY REASON YOU ACCEPTED THIS BATTLE WAS CAUSE YOU THOUGHT I WAS A NEWBIE,BUILDIN YOUR WINS OF ROOKIE'S,IM GETTIN YOU D'Q'd,FUCKIN PUSSY...............WASTE MY TIME.......

rb could tell dis prick is chicken,look at dem corny's bar's dis kidd is spittin-
cant keystyle everything he put up is like "nas album" cuzz "it was written"-

dogg pleez quit it u only spit on da net u was neva ryhmin on a track-
nigga da iron gon clap,and leave dis nigga "truth" dead "lien" on his back-
(lyin)

shit u had da take all nite writin me a verse i already proven u shook up-
ur garbage dogg only time dis dude "strong on bar's" is "doin a pull up"-

when i spit dogg they all watchin and stair,so u aint gota shot at dis here-
u new 2 site and already ya "times up" just like u threw ya "watch in da air"-
he talk about puttin a album 2gether pleez nobody a be coppin dis quer's-
when u get a sign ya deal a be worth whut a nigga get 4 mopin in "sears"-

u da worst rapper on rb i been on here 4 a few month's but u not lastin 2-
only way u could say u "2 sick" is if ya "moms" had "aids" & ya pops had it 2-

u real soft aint no part of u street,if i load up dem clipps and target u creep-
u'll have da get a vest & "guard ya grill" like da hood had "bar be que thief"-
dogg if i suck the y dude u look up 2 on here sayin marv dat dude's heat-
no audio's cuzz ya "flat lines" suck plus u aint got da "heart" 4 new "beats"-

16 dunny and u fukkin took all nite da write me a verse so i bounced...and y u writin ryhmes 4 da net dunn dat sad lol

truth is tha best cat i've seen on this site so far, marv isn't that bad either, he needs to elevate though...i'll drop a vote on this later...

Haha,you Say I Took All Night,voters Jus Look At The Time,i Took 19 Min,while This Cat Was On Line When I Dropped My Verse Then Suddenly Disappeared Till Today...check Yourself Homie,the Facts Speek For Themslves,did'nt Wanna Spit First In The Callout Because You Said Cats Write After A Drop,what Do Ya Think You Jus Did,fuckin Hypercrit.....

lol dickhead u could tell my verse wasn't written i had personals...u really wrote dat shit bar 4 bar talkin bout god n shit??? come on stupid and y da fukk would i write a ryhme 4 u lmaooo get da fukk out of here...but let da voter's speak they shit

as always props to both lyricists, and i say LYRICISTS, cuz most others on these sites are bullshittin, spittin corney lines. and you niggaz actually came out and hit us up wit a REAL battle. But here's the judgement.

#1, both of you leave internet rappin altogether, and put out records. i really don't wanna see another text from either one of you.

truth-excellent flow throughout the whole thing.

Battling me is a 'DUMB MOVE' like 'playing leap frog with a UNICORN'/
Left u scorned...talk shit? I'll have your 'lips' TORN worse then porn with new-BORNS/

excellent opener which makes reader want to read on.
and you didn't dissappoint, with numerous quotable punches, you kept us going, and left us with a nice ender, that i especially liked.

You're WACK-TO-ME, you see T's challenges? Smart foes REFUSE-THOSE, cause now R.B knows that battling me is a "grave error" like "mis-spelling TOMB-STONES"/

marvolous-kind of a weak beginning to tell the truth. the first four lines werent' that hot. but i saw potential so i paid attention.
how you came about things, is you seemed to build up momentum. you had my full attention at this point:

when i spit dogg they all watchin and stair,so u aint gota shot at dis here-
u new 2 site and already ya "times up" just like u threw ya "watch in da air"-

at that point i said, It's on. so for the remainder of the verse, you hit him hard and also left us wit a nice ender

dogg if i suck the y dude u look up 2 on here sayin marv dat dude's heat-
no audio's cuzz ya "flat lines" suck plus u aint got da "heart" 4 new "beats"-

judgement.

I'll give truth this one simply because his whole verse, start to finish was a powerful diss, and his flow was better. This of course was a close one. but my vote goes to truth.

if y'all could return the favor and vote on a small battle i need closed, truthfully, i'd appreciate it.

Syck vs. Maku Jaiiliin

Uppin For Votes Ya'll,don't Sleep On This Battle,uppin

Truth: wasnt feelin ya structure... but your flow was good. Punches were hitn miss.. but it was only like 1 or 2 that were weak.. which is ok.. youre wordplay was funny as shit.. nice work


marv: i HATE gangsta raps... anything with dogg, nigga, guns, street, hood, clips etc. is weak as shit punchwise, unless its audio and you have a voice to suit that kind of style.. .. your flow was fine, didnt fall off, wordplay wasnt bad, but wasnt that good either..

v/ truth

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^^^lmaooo...aww man aneway uppin 4 more votes...dis nigga wrote a ryhme 4 me had no personals or nothin...but vote ppl

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Some1 Please Vote........................................uppin For Votes People!!!!!!

uppin for votes.......................leave a link ill return the favour..................uppin

I Think Marv
Won Because My Man Truth
Had No Personals And
Marv Jus Keep Comin At Truth

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uppin 4 more votes...pleez explain ya shit 2.......................

truth a.k.a...

Battling me is a 'DUMB MOVE' like 'playing leap frog with a UNICORN'/
Left u scorned...talk shit? I'll have your 'lips' TORN worse then porn with new-BORNS/
->>fuckin disgusting but i laughed

after this RAPPING-FIGHT I'm stealing the "first amendment", so I know I'm walking away with the "BRAGGING-RIGHTS"/
Cause Marv’s like "porno vets" in "virgin roles", he's only "ACTING-TIGHT"/
->>first line too stretched shoulda left out the first multi and reworded

Not a single soul will come to your "wake" after I SHRED-YOUR-ORGANS, cause "kids
sleep on you" like you rest on a single bed with SEVEN-"ORPHANS"/
->>weak personal

There's no chance of my "ankles and LEGS-DEVORCING", cause "de feetin' me" is like getting a blow job from the HEADLESS-HORSEMEN/
Truth’s the rawest alive, with chords in his wrist and two mics in the PLACE-OF-FISTS, my existence alone will replace the faith of an ATHEIST/
->>these were stretched but they were good and being good is better than having good bar length

God's a SATANIST, after this AMAZING-DISS you'll need an AIDS-ASSIST just to TAKE-A-PISS/
"Kurt Cobain" takes me in "vain" cause even God CALLS-ME-DOPE, write the RAWEST-JOKES that put kids in such an AWE-OF-QUOTES that when they come to their JAWS-ARE-BROKE/
->>i dont think god's a satanist and wtf is an aids assist...only part of this i liked was the cobain thing

If you wanna BRAWL-WITH-FLOWS you'll get hit from "all directions" when ATTACKING-ME, cause Emceez who "front" get "left" "right" in "BACK"-OF-ME/
You're WACK-TO-ME, you see T's challenges? Smart foes REFUSE-THOSE, cause now R.B knows that battling me is a "grave error" like "mis-spelling TOMB-STONES"/
->>the directions thing was crazy creative...tombstones thing was decent



MARVOLoUsJ1009


rb could tell dis prick is chicken,look at dem corny's bar's dis kidd is spittin-
cant keystyle everything he put up is like "nas album" cuzz "it was written"-
->>doesnt flow at all but good punch

dogg pleez quit it u only spit on da net u was neva ryhmin on a track-
nigga da iron gon clap,and leave dis nigga "truth" dead "lien" on his back-(lyin)
->>ok

shit u had da take all nite writin me a verse i already proven u shook up-
ur garbage dogg only time dis dude "strong on bar's" is "doin a pull up"-
->>ok meta

when i spit dogg they all watchin and stair,so u aint gota shot at dis here-
u new 2 site and already ya "times up" just like u threw ya "watch in da air"-
->>watch thing is played to death

he talk about puttin a album 2gether pleez nobody a be coppin dis quer's-
when u get a sign ya deal a be worth whut a nigga get 4 mopin in "sears"-
->>weak personal

u da worst rapper on rb i been on here 4 a few month's but u not lastin 2-
only way u could say u "2 sick" is if ya "moms" had "aids" & ya pops had it 2-
->>wack

u real soft aint no part of u street,if i load up dem clipps and target u creep-
u'll have da get a vest & "guard ya grill" like da hood had "bar be que thief"-
->>this was alright...couldve flowed better

dogg if i suck the y dude u look up 2 on here sayin marv dat dude's heat-
no audio's cuzz ya "flat lines" suck plus u aint got da "heart" 4 new "beats"-
->>terrible terrible flow in first line...second was good


truth took it. his shit was stretched but it was more creative. marv i saw you had a lot of good ideas there but the flow was unrappable at points i had to read it like a book or some shit. no hate to either just my take on it.

v/truth a.k.a...

\/hit me up honestly\/

ok

my votes gonna go to da truth.basically because he came much harder wit punches

structure was fairly even.marvoulous did hve sum nice wordplay......but most his punches were played

vote datruth

RETURN THA FAV PLZ GUYS
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135192

Truth aka bit those lines, and I know exactly where from.. As soon as I put the proof together, he's outta here.. Just thought I'd let ya'll know ahead of time..

lmaooooooooooo wow i knew it dunny cuzz he didn't even say my name in his verse damm datz fukin sad niggaz stealin lines

Okay, I've found the proof.. Posting it in the biters thread.. Go look for yourself.. I'll link it here afterwards.. Truth, you're fuckin wack dawg.. :(

Yeah, not only did he bite in this battle, but I just found another battle also.. and found the proof for that one too.. so he's gone, for sure..

Stop votin' for sir bites-a-lot.. my man marv don't deserve a loss, when he's not even battling the writer of the verse..