Sporadic Vs Energy
 

10 Lines
No hate
No d/r

your spitting first by the way, I wrote it in bitch slapped the rules.

Calling yourself energy got me laughing but yet slightly intrigued,
Thinking my flaws will rejuvenate u like glucose
...coz your battle imaginations fatigued
Occupation is better than yours isit? Listing kellis song as your expertise
but yet your 16 and no qualifications
..waiting for the results of your G.C.S.E's
Fed up of herbs asking me to spit first illiterate got me in frustration
u like fucking girls? chea i was doing that
...when you just discovered masturbation!
Does mommy know about this site, you have permission and consent?
if she knew she block it protecting
…u from the offensive lyrical content! (laughs)
Could find any flaws could ya? As my lyrical talent increases
Got u looking for scrapes from my shredder
…coz ive left you in pieces

(explanations)

Bar 1- Was manly playing on his name..for those of u who don’t understand wordplay
Bar 2- His Occupation Is apparently “better than yours” well thas what it says in his profile and the gcses are the final exams you take b4 u leave school in the uk and those people are waiting for their results and hes also 16
The rest should be self explanatory

sporadic got this one he seemed to have come stronger enegy yours was alright

v=sporadic

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he went over the line limit and his punches were crap, you got 2 admit.

he did go over the line limit i notice that after i voted sorry man you would have got my vote if i notice it before

upping for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aight man 1st dude u need 2 elevate 2nd dude so do u lol....

heres tha break down

Opener - Spo
Closer- Energy
Punches - Energy
Wordplay - Energy
Flow - Spo
Sturcture - Enegry
Multis - none

Winner - Enegry

And Spo u went over limit cuzz not good....

Weak battle... Energy gets it..

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i need to elevate!!! im wack u gotta be kidding!! i didnt go over no line limit either

line1 - Calling yourself energy got me laughing but yet slightly intrigued,
line 2 - spilt into parts Thinking my flaws will rejuvenate u like glucose
...coz your battle imaginations fatigued << punchline...this way the punchline is highlighted..ive seen ur shit envee lol << nuff said

the facts are there you just wrote 15 lines that were ruled by yourself as 10 lines. How can you say you didn't go over the line limit of coarse you did and you do need to elevate.

No, the fact is its 10 lines but in a different style to yours you herb...

energy i merked you any decent mcee with any kind ov interlect would know that!...fuck i cant wait to get out ov this herb front line shit..anyway ups!

Hmmm an aight battle but my vote is going to Sporadic coz he was stronger in this battle in my opinion, his punches connected well and also had sum good wordplay and was quite funny at times.

Energy definitely u improved my teachings have helped you but 1 bar didnt rhyme but u gettin there, also ur punches werent as strong as Sporadics. But i will say u have improved since and all i can say is keep improving work on the wordplay and punches more and u'll get there dawg.

V/Sporadic

P.S Can i clear this dispute on the over the lines thing...Sporadic DIDN'T go over the limit, the structure he used is perfectly normal and adds complexity to the flow and breaks it down to make easier to read 5 BARS 10 lines all legit Sporadic did nuttin wrong in this battle jus add sum ... to make it clearer next time


Removed.. hate vote / beef

mad dog are you just sending a hate vote man cause I know this we agreed to not post threads on each others battles and you have and gave a loada false infomation about this when he clarly has gone over the line limit and if you read the 10 lines your self from his verse and compare it with my 10 line verse it clarly shows that I came harder and thats a fact. He was way over the limit and his punches were weak adleast I had better punches, structure, wordplay, and closer. I'm only stating facts if you wanna listen to mad dog thats fine but he's toatally wrong.

shup u herb..im not gotta sit here i argue with a weak ass mcee..just shup and up

sporadic took this to doubt, i didnt get energys guys verse,

giv my vote to sporadic on structure flow and punches

drop a vote here

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134656

sporadic you knob jocky can't you see that you went over the line limit and read your 10 lines out loud and compare it wid mine, I beat your sorry ass enough so that just explains something your shit. Upping this thread.

Fuck up u herb..i didnt go over the line limit over ppl have explained this to u..shall i use smaller words like in ur verse to explain it again..if u feel so strongly about this report this to the admin..

upping this thread................................

Sorry if this is a free post but Energy man ur weak i gotta admit

jus face it man he gettin more votes then u so shut up
he better den u n stop sayin ur da best cuz u aint biatch

Can an Admin please tell this fucking Moron that Spor spit 10 lines...

i would have to give this one to sporadic because more of his stuff was on point but the ENERGY guy is wack.......... he still usin kid vocabulary............

upping dis theard..want to get this over and done with will return the favour if the votes are well explained

ok upping dis theard...over a week old now come on i will return the favour if they are decent

sproradic came harder in every category with mad wordplay and personals.his structure wasnt the best but it was original(i think).
Energy,on the other hand,had a complete alphabet soup verse.very herbish.you need to work on your wordplay and structure.dont put the /'s at the end of your lines,makes you look ''newbish''.all I can say is elevate and you'll get there.

sporadic

Calling yourself energy got me laughing but yet slightly intrigued,
Thinking my flaws will rejuvenate u like glucose
...coz your battle imaginations fatigued
->>it was ok...rhymin about glucose...you white? just a guess

Occupation is better than yours isit? Listing kellis song as your expertise
but yet your 16 and no qualifications
..waiting for the results of your G.C.S.E's
->>wack to death

Fed up of herbs asking me to spit first illiterate got me in frustration
u like fucking girls? chea i was doing that
...when you just discovered masturbation!
->>filler

Does mommy know about this site, you have permission and consent?
if she knew she block it protecting
…u from the offensive lyrical content! (laughs)
->>doesnt rhyme unless you say CON-sent...but nobody says that

Could find any flaws could ya? As my lyrical talent increases
Got u looking for scrapes from my shredder
…coz ive left you in pieces
->>decent closer


ENERGY

your pretty funny makin rhymes about gcse's/
when ur dum and an't even learned about your abc's/
->>what are you 8

sporadic cut the three syllables leaves ya wid dick/
you can't rap sick, your shit and ur da one who's thick/
->>shit

I guess you thought of ya lines from eminem, don't attempt/
if you tried you only get your fucking ugly bitch slapped/
->>weak

this guys mental, because of his little small needle/
not even medical people could suss if it was REAL..../
->>makes no sense at all

your punches give me a alergy, and you an't no gee/
i'll slice your spleen and internally bleed and after leave/
->>WACK

sporaidc you came weak as hell and you still merked energy......terrible

v/sporadic

Pretty easy voting here, energys whole thing was wack and i was very impressed with Sporadic's verse.

Sporadic: All yours was better, and your punches worked well.Your verse flowed well too.
ENERGY: Pretty wack, try making your lines a bit longer, could have used better things, not abc's etc.
Opener - Spor
Closer- Spor
Punches - spor
Wordplay - spor
Flow - Spor
Sturcture - Enegry
Multis - none

Winner - sporadic

Sporadic didnt go over the limit, just a different style and not one i really like.

energy - decent, but ur punches werent witty.. flow was ok... no wordplay...
no disses that were good, only personal was the name play u had, overall u need to elevate, shit was weak.

spo - good verse, mostly all ur bars connected.. some were witty.. some werent,
punches were good. perosnals were ok... overall u did what u had to to win, and it was easy :thumbup: ... flow was decent to, structure... ended up being better than i thought it would. good verse.

vote - spo, better punches.

hit this up please.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136173