prapper1 VS PoEtIc JuStIcE
 

U a nu-b, so clue me, when u gonna make the switch
u betta call on fuckin lassie if u wanna get a bitch
gotta switch it up, make it happen in a snap
in a lesbo porn, is when u eva bein fuckin strapped
I own ur lyrics and ur life, so u gotta dig fartha
Ur gurl wants me to cum, she loves it that im big pappa
u cant swallow the truth, but ur family is in that trance
wats sad is that ur moms pussy's looser than ur fuckin pants
slangin thangs, it aint me, but ur head is on the nozzle
only time u bust a cap is when u open soda bottles
c i flow, try to rep the g's i know
the only time u go to war is wit G.I Joe, u know
cry to the police, cuz it'll alwayz stay mine
letterin ma guns, u got shepards i got K-9's
ma lyrics keep on droppin like it was anotha dell share
ur lyrics keep on droppin so u puttin em on retail
watchu know about Guns? U’ll be fit to defeat
when u in miami is the only time u recognize heat
ima nu bred killa im floetic u cant touch this
make u commit suicide wit a verse, and thats poetic justice

10 linez lez go boy

wen woz dis arranged???why i only got 10 lines wen u spat 20?......
antwayz aint got time now i`ll hit it up 2mora

i put up a challenge? u said yes? i meant 10 barz aight

uppin on this since this coward has to take days on end to write stuff down can i get some feedback on ma verse?

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comon u fuckin pussy that verse aint that good spit!

na.its wack...................but i aint got time yet,TRY SETTIN SOME RULEZ NXT TIME BOY

i did set the muthafuckin rules. i set up a challenge. u said spit first then u said u'd hit it up tomorrow. so do ur job. 10 bars and i hit u now u hit me back thats how a battle works. if ur gonna be a pussy just forfeit god damn man

ok can i get a forfeit win? comon head boss guys he obviously doesnt wanna spit can i win by default and go on?

please? someone? d d

no rules in thread................................

if u dont spit then forfeit dss adfadfadsfasdfasdf

fuck it i`ll spit sumert quik in 5 get it ova wit


i bin busy dawg.damn

ok
 

about to knock your head back n forth...give u whiplash
i fuck you sicker than the gal off tha film...crash
u a digitised cartoon character....parraper the rapper...
you couldnt have nuts..if u woz a unoppened snicker wrapper
digest your diper to try make you sick..
rip you so bad..i`ll make ya sides split..
when u punch..u clearly lack a destination..
ive seen more I.Q..in the alien invasion..
when peeps spit..u stand,admire..n stand still..
like a nosey neighbour..peepin ova tha window sill..
i cnt be bothered coming ill with my lines..
coz i freestyle,i dont pre-write mine..
u know wot?...i kinda wish idve forfeit....
so i didnt hve to read all ya horse-shit..
your styles bout as active..as 2 strapped feet..
u back away from beef...like infested meat..
quick to defeat,your sinking deeper down..
ima leave ya ass begin in tha lost n found..

ok finally the chicken spit. but to no avail. uppin so vote on this ish

ok breakdown.

prapper came wit those funny punches dawg. he was gettin under ur skin huh? big ups to both of u. but those punchlinez are too good to drown out.

hm^^^^not really,,,,,,,,,,

i probably won,but then again
i got beta thingz 2 do than cumin hard agaist a newb

comon guyz dont sleep on dis.. who won? i need feedback

ILIKE BOTH FLOWS YA PUNCHES WERE TYGHT
BUT POETIC JUSTICE URS FELL OFF AT DA END
CLOSE BATTLE BUT I GIVE IT 2 PRAPPER

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THANX

thanx man c nobody can withstand me. and after i drop ma demo into tha song category. no one will be able to deny me

umm poetic justice had madd long come up with a ill verse and failed 2 do it lol..prapper ya verse was good nothin dt really stood out but ya shit neva feel off

opener-pra
structure-pra..justice ya lines were long then short
punchlines-pra
creativity-a tie
multis-nun
personals-pra
finisher-pra dat was a good personal usin his name
enjoyed-pra..ofcourse...

my vote-pra

RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL ITS 3 LINKS IN MY SIG AND JUSTICE DONT GIVE ME A HATE VOTE CUZZ I AINT VOTE 4 U U LOST FACE IT

thanx guyz wat can i say? yo make sure u all listen to ma song 'perfection' ima drop it around 3 eastern time. thanx fo tha votes uppin

mad long..........it took 5 mins u tits

im battlin propa cats nt wastin time on newbs/lmfao

5 minutes? try 5 days u stupid bitch. and dont cry becuz im better than u

comon guyz please dont sleep on dis shit vote now

comon comon guyz watchu all think about this battle huh

lets go close this shit out..... i obviously won. can i get some votes up in this bitch

ok now this shit is not funny drop tha votes on tha battle

c-l-o-s-e o-u-t t-h-i-s t-h-r-e-a-d there i spelt it out for u illiterate homies

les go les go i aint got till im dead to win ma first battle

Poetic justice-flowand structure was right on punches were nailed and funny too

prapper- lines and flow were way off your structure needs work but was still alright

Vote-Poetic justice

both had good structure and flow both had ok vocab and parapper had better vocab and his disses were harder poets verse seemed forced.parapper gets it with better punches'you want a bitch you better call on lassie'and better disses'only time you bust a cap is when you open soda bottles'
v/parrapper

thanx dawg c i told ya im tha best... one more vote'll put 5 thru this pussies chest... cuz i kilt him

my votes for papper1 overall he was better no lie peaace holla vote on these battle on my name

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