One-Man-Band vs The black plague
 

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Yo, ima put a stop to this kids ego.. throwin hooks-at-ya-laugh..
cut this rook-inta-half.. kids got nuthin, just look-at-his-av..*
droppin pre-writs, no comebacks, no personals? theres no place-fa-ya-style..
preparin lines months ago.. before i noticed that empty space-in-my-file..

Leave whats up-from-ya-neck in debris, crack ya whole column-n-set..
I got-him-in-check.. figured this guy out.. he just a wannabe-vet..
the sentiment climbs, youd stand a better chance if you rented-ya-lines..
even if i break your verse 2 quarters it still wont make sense-a-ya-rhymes.**

Man, im not even tryin, this battle ima just diddle daddle-fa-fun..
record 4-0? cmon man.. name the last non-herb battle-you-won..
and dont even try diss me on flow, thats just foolish-so-save-it..
n' quit readin fairy tales, kid.. aint no way goliaths losin-to-david..

*he doesnt have an avatar
**"quarters" and "sense\cents"

No wonder this kids a one man band, no one can stand his wackness
Wishes he had a right hand man, but hes left alone when shit happens
His rhymes are so unexplainable, he's got more astericks than shakespeare
Cuz no one understands his shit, it gets filtered out, its like hes makin beer
Look at his sig, how gay... "first there was the beat, then there was god"
He aint got nothin left, he gets less respect than my man Ahmad Rashad
It's like hes screamin from outer space..... no one can hear his words
He hasn't done nothin worth while since his city hosted the Real World
Just by lookin at his name, and his rhymes at the end of his lines...
We can tell he's dashin just to get his battered ass to the finish line

Sorry i didn't drop sooner, but i was only online yesterday for like a half an hour, so i just saw our battle today

One Man Band-You had a good verse.You have good structure & flow.Your punches were good.

The Black Plague-Your verse was ok.The flow was ok.Your punches could have been better.

Vote=One-Man-Band

He gets my vote because he had better punches & flow.My advise is just try to add some multies in next time to make ya verse better.

Hit one of my battles back,after all,I did take time 2 read this shit!!!

daamn... i hate herb votes.. those "dashes" were multies my friend... and my structure was pretty much the same as his.. except divided in fours... and an even syllable count... just goes to show you have no idea what your talkin bout... but whatever...

uppin.........................^^^

Yo, ima put a stop to this kids ego.. throwin hooks-at-ya-laugh..
cut this rook-inta-half.. kids got nuthin, just look-at-his-av..*
blah
droppin pre-writs, no comebacks, no personals? theres no place-fa-ya-style..
preparin lines months ago.. before i noticed that empty space-in-my-file..
straight didnt hit hard
Leave whats up-from-ya-neck in debris, crack ya whole column-n-set..
I got-him-in-check.. figured this guy out.. he just a wannabe-vet.
nice multies
the sentiment climbs, youd stand a better chance if you rented-ya-lines..
even if i break your verse 2 quarters it still wont make sense-a-ya-rhymes.**
straight but not personal
Man, im not even tryin, this battle ima just diddle daddle-fa-fun..
record 4-0? cmon man.. name the last non-herb battle-you-won..
soso
and dont even try diss me on flow, thats just foolish-so-save-it..
n' quit readin fairy tales, kid.. aint no way goliaths losin-to-david..
dope punch

No wonder this kids a one man band, no one can stand his wackness
Wishes he had a right hand man, but hes left alone when shit happens
decent
His rhymes are so unexplainable, he's got more astericks than shakespeare
Cuz no one understands his shit, it gets filtered out, its like hes makin beer
soso first part is like what
Look at his sig, how gay... "first there was the beat, then there was god"
He aint got nothin left, he gets less respect than my man Ahmad Rashad
nice
It's like hes screamin from outer space..... no one can hear his words
He hasn't done nothin worth while since his city hosted the Real World
not hard hitting
Just by lookin at his name, and his rhymes at the end of his lines...
We can tell he's dashin just to get his battered ass to the finish line
soso punch

vote the black plague

black plague: i was feeling some of ya stuff.. at the begging it was kind of slow..then it picke up in the iddle withthe punches..and then i felt like it fell off again a lil bit.. some of your punches didnt hit to hard.. some of em did.. verse was pretty inconsistant.. Decent drop overall..


band:the multies worked pretty niclely.. the multies made your punches harder because the punches were withthe flow pretty good.. id say the punches that hit, were hard and stuck to him... soem of em didnt hit hard tho.. overall pretty good spit..

id have to say that one-man-band took this.. PLagues verse just wasent consistant enuff.. but nice battle oyu guys..

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134401
hit up this one when ya get a chance..^

Uppin this shit...

Lmao... The little cracker changed his sig after i ripped it....(he said he's white)

Anyway, uppin...

BLACK PLAGUE:NOT 2 BAD BUT LACKED IN CREATIVITY N GOOD ELEMENTS LIKE WORDPLAY,IT WAS JUS 2 SIMPLE, YOUR PUNCHES WERE AVERAGE,DINT LIKE YOUR FLOW..
ONE-MAN-BAND:LIKED YOUR FLOW,N I UNDERSTOOD YOUR MULTI'S,PUNCHES STARTED GOOD BUT I THINK YOU TOOK IT A LITTLE 2 EASY ON HIM ROUND THE END,BUT STILL SHOWED THE BETTER VERSE IN THE END...

VOTE/1 MAN BAND
PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134418

Uppin once again...

one band man came hard, but i was feelin plagues shit better. he had harder punches and a more consistent flow, i like the real world line too, that line was tight. so my vote goes to plague.

yall return the favor here, and one band man, not sayin you gone do this, but dont drop a hate vote just cuz i voted for plague, that shit happens often. if you feelin hate then dont vote

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134795

umm okay nice battle....

one man band-ummm ya had a good flow...madd multi's dem shits dont win battles had a few punches and i aint get ya avatar personal cuzz he does have wun..overall ya verse was good but da multi shit is wack

black plague-u had a good structure ya opener was hott,personals was good but some of ya lines were played but i think u won dis battle just off ya personals...if dis was a battle in da street would niggaz feel ya verse more

my vote-black...

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...780#post1408780
^^^RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL...GON

nah shit... i forgot bout that sig thing.. wasnt that good a punch anyway.. but..

"first there was the beat. Then the beat became god." - Kenny Muhammed

was in my sig before i changed it.. for the voters

Pretty tight battle...one of the best ive seen in a while.

One-Man-Band always comes hard...never underestimates opponents<---thats how it should be.

One-Man-Band: Some of the best multies that you can get. I counted syllables were right on track, flow was good. I just wasnt feelin all the punches, I thought you coulda been more consistent with the dope ones, as well a little more personal with it. Cause he was on top of you in the personals. The metas were alright in some spots, just was kinda hit and miss. Dope verse though.

The Black Plague: Nice flow and solid structure, was consistent through your verse. I did think you started off a lil slow, but you picked up pace with your punches pretty fast, and they were hard, personal and hit. Need to imply in some of the multies it really helps flow a lot. Metas were nice, i hadnt heard a lot of the concepts and creativity that you were using.

Was a pretty close battle, but I think Black takes it marginally.

v/The Black Plague

Both of ya was aight, but i din't get the flow of black plague, you had some aight shit but one man had better punches

I think you both could have done better

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Both of ya was aight, but i din't get the flow of black plague, you had some aight shit but one man had better punches

I think you both could have done better

my vote goes to one man

lol... yeah I tend to do that a lot... underestimating my opponents.. then i dont go personal or i just give up on punches halfway..lol.. ah well

uppin though

one

ok, first of all.. the first 2 lines of bands verse were pretty weak.. i had a hard time trying to rhyme laugh and av, unless you were saying it like 'arv' but that wouldnt of worked.. second 2 lines were well written, except his verse did have personals so that sort of in-validated those 2..
it got better from there, the wannabe vet line was good, the non-herb rhyme was good, finisher wasnt amazing.

black plague, opener was good, second bar, waaaay too many syllables, and the pinchline wasnt amazing either. the third bar used a personal that was annoying, cuz i dont think you knew what you were talking about, the guy who said it was a beat boxer, sort of needed to know that if you were gonna use it as a personal... the next bar, top line was good, but it finished bad.. and your finisher was pretty weak..

i cant stress how important it is too have a good finisher, its the last thing the voters see, u need to leave them thinking it was dope. u both had weak finishers..

but im gonna give this vote to one-man-band.. in all honesty he won this (only just tho)

one man band- ya spit was ok..............i think you focused on multis to much and not worried about the punches you had......to me it seemed like ya verse was pre-written cuz......cut this rook-inta-half......he just a wannabe-vet....you called him a fake vet and a rookie in the same........

The Black Plague- ya shit was straight too even though ya lignes were stretched out alot.........you got my vote on this though becuz of ya punches..they werent hittin as hard as they could but they was ok.......you can do betta man.......