Schema vs zVilLaiN
 

10 lines
you spit first
due date tomorrow

im checkin in...let me know when you get here. I dont know how the votes will be if you changed your name

well im done so im gonna go ahead and put it down

you cant take all day to spit cause you know i aint worried
you should change your name from McDeath to fuckin McFlurry
shits all blurry for ya now cause i just ate your face
in two bars but then i still had eight.....check it
ya flow's nasty...like a old bitch nekkid
with scars...you try to get loose and fall apart
from start...your style came from ass like a fart
get smart...aint nobody gonna fuckin fear ya shit
even with tp in my ear i aint tryin ta hear that shit
and now ill sneer because its clear i just speared ya bitch

ten lines is too short but there it is

are we gonna have to redo the battle b/c of your name change?

dam i woke up at 6:00 u still wan battle me or u wan take the win?

i dont think it wud matter about the change thread

go ahead and flow i want to win on votes not d.q.

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aiight i was writin it yesterday but my cuz spilled sumthin on it so ima make new one ryte now

You comin up here lyke u was tha 5-0//
stupid white boi ur rhyme is garbage, now u hittin high notes//
Errybody knows you dont diss jus rap bout sumthin//
jus listen to mah flow n rhythem thas gon be bumpin//
Engraged Wit Flames, whoever Gave Ya Shame felt sorry for u n Forgave Ya Name//
Dont try to front me when your rhymes is lame//
Bitch an emcee like you will never be a legend//
U in mah crew but fuck u cuz im tha one thas Reppin//

oh shit i only did eight lines sorry
thought i did 10

vote on my 10 and his 8 im tired of looking at this

dayummmm my boy mcdeath got this shit. Ya stuff was tyt yo. i was feelin mcs spit more than schema fa reals yo.

punches: death
metas: death
Multis: death
Structure: death
Flow: death

Vote: MCdeath

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Uppin dis shyt

people vote up mayun dunt get it slept on

Yo battle was close, both a y'all in ma crew man and you both spit shit well,
schema, ur opener was tight -
"you cant take all day to spit cause you know i aint worried
you should change your name from McDeath to fuckin McFlurry"

Death ur opener was decent too -
"You comin up here lyke u was tha 5-0//
stupid white boi ur rhyme is garbage, now u hittin high notes//"

But i'm gon' say schema had best

best line=MC Death - Engraged Wit Flames, whoever Gave Ya Shame felt sorry for u n Forgave Ya Name//

I liked readin this battle cos both of you are good rhymers, but I think I'm gonna say that schema got this one, was very close tho and a rematch wud be great to see

vote:Schema

^uppin for vote^

yo ill vote on this if you go back to my battle and actually explain your vote or else itll get dq'd

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yo c'mon yall vote on dis battle its bein slept on

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comeon yall vote on dis battle i need dis ova wit

^uppin^

aaiightt:
schema:your verse was mad funny, u had some hot punches and your flow was good too, nice name personal, ur disses just came harder...
McDeath:ur verse was good, but some lines were stretched a little and structure wasnt that great, but decent punches,,, tho,, overall good battle y'all.
VOTE:SCHEMA

m.c death you was good but you didnt hit hard enuff
ill give this one to schema

aight 1

vote for lyondreds battles honest votes pleeze

Okay, first I thought Schema was tight. But then I saw McDeath and he's got the flow. Ya'll really had a close batlle but I have to go with McDeath he used better "rapping slang".

the battle wuz very close but im gona give it 2 schema cuz he had more personals in there..u both had good flow though..

v/s

vote on da prodigy vs slugga and i'll return the favor

opener: death-maybe cause he went 2nd, but opener was better
closer:death-is closing stuck better
metas: neither-no one, i dint see any good ones
punches: death-i was feelin it better
rhyme:death-he changed up his rhyming in the bars, dint use the same word to rhyme

v/death

ok. pretty easy.. schema, your structure was a bit fucked at times, the 3rd line didnt rhyme in any bar.. punches were a bit weak all through, you rhymed shit with shit lol.. ..pretty weak verse.. but i dunno.. it wasnt amazingly bad..

MC DEATH, you bummed around a lot before u dropped which doesent score you any points, first bar didnt rhyme.. really shit opener, 2nd bar was self glorification (bad self glorification at that) 4th bar was prolly your best, you had a go at a multi and almost pulled it off, cept too many syllables, and the closer was only decent...

votes goin 2 schema... weak battle.. but he took it..