Durmil v Gods son
 

ayo house rules..like you said youll match my bars..spit by Tues @ 4..i'll go first

Gods son's sicker than "syphillis"...Only thing Durmil could "Win At" is "Ignorance"..
.I Spill sweeter than liquorish...and this fuckas spits sounds like freakin gibberish
I'm about to eat you up type nice Like ''Stoves'' U can ''Stew-On-This-Spit''/ Cuz Your rhymes suck & "Bout As Gifted" As A "Jew-On-Christmas"!!
Menace Pleaded-To-Hault-Da-Grief so if i was ya wife “Refusin-To-Cook-Meat”
u still couldn’t ‘BEAT~Me~OVER~DA~BEEF’!!//
Be proud ur bruised-as a newbie on RB cuz thats the rhythm and the beat
Y'all know Durms already losin’-to-me widout his D/R ‘FANS~AROUND~TO~CHEAT’!!?????//
His "Refugee" Ass Is up in canada Hopin For A *Cash~Plan*!..No "Kodac",I Snipe-Atcha *Flash~Span*..
This "Husbands Rubbish"..Findin His Mom in a trash can (Kodac.. bear in canada)
Gee (one who he was battlin') whatchu think ya nice that youre undefeated..damn youre the new KillaCam
I get it..you think youre good now cuz you beat a girl Rapmistress, wow youre the man.. :thumbup:


Switchin-the-Flow...hope you Bastards-are-Listening/
I heard ya PIMP-is-a-HOE...and ya ACTION-is-Missing//
Or Missing-In-Action, this cat must have a dissing-attraction...Cause steppin to me you'll be gettin flipped like "Reciprocal Fractions"//
I only got "one-thing" for this TERRIBLE-BASTARD...A middle-finger thats "up-in-the-air" like Durmils MARITAL STATUS!//...Got Ya "X-posed" On "Full Blast"..Complete Opposite Of A *Mild~Horn*...Ya *Wild Scorn* From Durmil who sists in his office looking at child porn...ouch

~Witness The Skill~
 

God Son

Gods son's sicker than "syphillis"...Only thing Durmil could "Win At" is "Ignorance"..
.I Spill sweeter than liquorish...and this fuckas spits sounds like freakin gibberish
/\ Stretched but an ok opener a lil multi and good rhyme

I'm about to eat you up type nice Like ''Stoves'' U can ''Stew-On-This-Spit''/ Cuz Your rhymes suck & "Bout As Gifted" As A "Jew-On-Christmas"!!
/\ Stretched again but a nice punch

Menace Pleaded-To-Hault-Da-Grief so if i was ya wife “Refusin-To-Cook-Meat”
u still couldn’t ‘BEAT~Me~OVER~DA~BEEF’!!//
/\ Flow off but an aight punch

Be proud ur bruised-as a newbie on RB cuz thats the rhythm and the beat
Y'all know Durms already losin’-to-me widout his D/R ‘FANS~AROUND~TO~CHEAT’!!?????//
/\ Nice diss better this time

His "Refugee" Ass Is up in canada Hopin For A *Cash~Plan*!..No "Kodac",I Snipe-Atcha *Flash~Span*..
This "Husbands Rubbish"..Findin His Mom in a trash can (Kodac.. bear in canada)
/\ Stretched and flow was off

Gee (one who he was battlin') whatchu think ya nice that youre undefeated..damn youre the new KillaCam
I get it..you think youre good now cuz you beat a girl Rapmistress, wow youre the man..
/\ Nice diss but the () thing made it a bit hard to read



Switchin-the-Flow...hope you Bastards-are-Listening/
I heard ya PIMP-is-a-HOE...and ya ACTION-is-Missing//
/\ Nice good flow and structure more of this

Or Missing-In-Action, this cat must have a dissing-attraction...Cause steppin to me you'll be gettin flipped like "Reciprocal Fractions"//
I only got "one-thing" for this TERRIBLE-BASTARD...A middle-finger thats "up-in-the-air" like Durmils MARITAL STATUS!//...Got Ya "X-posed" On "Full Blast"..Complete Opposite Of A *Mild~Horn*...Ya *Wild Scorn* From Durmil who sists in his office looking at child porn...ouch
/\ blah nice disses and punches but the STRUCTURE???


Durmil

The Murking Begins...
Durm gonna have ya "head pop out ya body" like "jack in the box"
Fuck glocks, Durm got "wires attached to you" like "electrical shocks"
/\ Good opener

Snatch ya "plates", like "race cars" without "pedals" im too "fast to "break"
God's Son ya style is just like "animated anal sex" cuz ya "ass is fake"
/\ Lol nice diss made me laugh

Jesus!(God's Son), ur rep is whack how u expect to gimmie an L boy?
Ur whole verse struggled to come(cum) "fresh" like a clit fighting "altoids"
/\ Lol again nice dawg im liking

If your God's Son then u already know that ur death is destined*
Battlin me "showed guts", now im playin jump rope wit ya "intestines"
/\ Oh nice use of the name good bar

I could spit somethin blazin or come to ya house and punch ya face in
It's amazin, your disses are about as useless as your punctuation**
/\ nice diss

I'd rip on ur sexuality but u admit ur gay, got an ass like a pig sty
Don't cry, but im lookin at ur location and askin your in bed wit stu y?***
/\ Gay lines are played but nice

Voters gonna be sayin "Durmil just murdered Legendary"...Oh Gee****
But you were just "too tiny from the start" like a pre-mature baby
/\ Ok diss not as good as previous 1's

Stand correct, Kill ya again in three days this time u wont ressurect*****
My intellect leave ya "fired", and ya too whack for a "severence cheque"
/\ Nice diss 1st line again on the name but 2nd fell a lil bit


Durm Stop Embarrising This Guy
This battle was a waste of time, ur as frail as a gorilla on glass treelimbs G
GS=no chance, last "man to take me out" was the "doc that delivered me"!
/\ Good closer nice flow

V/Durmil 1 sided GS u need to work on ur structure dawg its everywhere

RTF on this link...http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132981

Gods Son...

I'm about to eat you up type nice Like ''Stoves'' U can ''Stew-On-This-Spit''/ Cuz Your rhymes suck & "Bout As Gifted" As A "Jew-On-Christmas"!!

Or Missing-In-Action, this cat must have a dissing-attraction...Cause steppin to me you'll be gettin flipped like "Reciprocal Fractions"//

^nice lines although your flow was messed up it kept falling off. Your verse had some good lines but then it some pretty shit stuff...but overall ide say 7/10.

fuk me Durm is pretty dope.......

If your God's Son then u already know that ur death is destined*
Battlin me "showed guts", now im playin jump rope wit ya "intestines"

Voters gonna be sayin "Durmil just murdered Legendary"...Oh Gee****
But you were just "too tiny from the start" like a pre-mature baby

8/10

Vote D for havin more quotables & a more solid verse. Flow was also much better by u


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Me vs. SevenThird

Gods Son - Nice verse. Had alot of multis. Good thing. A few good punches and nice structure. Overall good verse...........8/10

Durmil - Alotta nice punches. Tha flow wit tha verse was ill. That was ya strongest point to me. Had real nice flow. Had multies and all..........9/10

Vote: Durmil

lol.. wow.. Durmil ripped it man.. god son i was reading your vers, and with all the hyphens and dashes and htis and that, i was annoyed.. at first i was like..god sons won this .. but then i wasent even half way down durmils verse, and the battle was over lol..big ups to both..

God sons... your verse wasent consistant.. honestly.. it sounded hella hot in the beging part.. then in the middle, it sounded like a different writer.. then in the end the person who was writing the begging came back in..lol how ever the fuck that happened.. but id say if oyu were doign what you did at first, you might have won.. andsick as ghonerea/syphili/aids/herpes is mighty played out.. let those go :p..
i gotta go with durmil for having some ill metas, and nice as flow.. i was surprised with durmil.. id say that verse was hot bruh.. good job..


v/Durmill

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durmil won this, his flow and strucutre was alot better, it made it alot easier to read and then he had better punches then gods son.

gods son you were ok but you flow and structure was way off it made it hard to read, your punches were ok but durmil came harder

vote/durmil

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god son gotz my voice, for better wordplay, it rhymed more. But his structure wasnt bad. He also had good hard hitting punchs. But ya i tried ignoring the dashes and all that. It does kinda mess up the rhyme, but behind them God son won. But it wasnt a bad battle. Peace.

v/ god son

Ok here's breakdown......

Durmil...you had a good verse you had one good line the fans line was nice the rest I wasn't feeling all that much, because all your lines were seriously stretched which took all the stregth out of your punches, your personals were ok but the structure fucked those up too, the flow was jacked because of your structure do use that no more lines were to stretched, metas were good but it wasn't enought o overcome that structure I give ya.................7/10

God son..........good drop, nice opener I like how you kicked it off it was pretyy consistent following that, your punches were good, personals coulda been better but good enuff, flow was good structure was much better than his, metas were ok nothing spectacular but you edged this out with better punches, flow an structure only so I'll give you..............8/10

Vote: God Son

^^^wtf kinda herb bullshit is this?

1) U gave him structure? ARE U FUCKIN BLIND, his bar lengths were all over the place and his set-ups were shit
2) Structure doesn't win battle's....punches, personals and skill do...bitch ass herb
3) I didn't even use a fans line??? are u even reading the right battle?
4) How did i get up'd in wordplay? the christmas-jew concept is more played then micheal jackson punches.....

these herb votes shouldn't even count....hate bitch ass herbs....Triple N...are u even readin the rigth battle?

lets see, Gods sons verse got so stretched at times that some of it didn't make sence. I shouldnt have to spend 5 min. on each line rearanging were everything should go just to make it sound decent. Ur punches were kinda played out and not too good. U lack mostly in punches and structure. this cauzed Ur flow to suffer as well. U should work on that. making a complicated verse dont mean U'll get the win. if no one understands wat Ur trying to say cuz u put all these symbols, and hyphens and shit, then U most likely wont get voted for. Ur verse gets a 5 out of 10.

Durmil,
Ur verse was a lot easier to read. U word play was decenct and punchlines were also a bit played but more decent then Ur opponents. Ur flow was a lot easier to understand as well. U took some ok personals and it helped a lot that u explained em after the verse rather then during it. thats good for ur structure. I also liked the last lines to ur verse. that was nice. Over all, Ur verse gets a 8 out of 10.

No beef, just elivate more.
V/ Durmil

these sound like dickrides cause durmil had a weak verse.first u had strucutre but that dont mean shit ur punches were very weak opener and closer was weak u should never explain ur punches anythign u cant do on stage dont do here cause itll wind up lookin bad only thing u had goin was structure i seen ur verses and usually u bring better than this. gods son not bad no strucutre but like i said before it dont mean nuthin aight started off extremely weak then it piked up from ur as gifted as a jew on christmas that made me laugh i like that then i duno wat u did another verse or somethin but that opener was weak and again the next line was weak but u piked up after that good closer wasnt bad some of ur lines r played out...BUT u did have harder and funnier punches than durmil so u get my vote pc

v/gods son

This is what i saw in my eyes Drumil took wit punches wordplay i give 2 God structure Drumil took it God u need 2 work on that u stretch ya shit... Opener God took it.. And tha closer god took it barely... I think this was an aight battle God took this but not b alot he had sum good punches in there but what kilt it was tha sturcture.... But he still wins because i didnt really like some of Drumils lines.. The opener was aight but ive heard it b4 so i wasnt really impressed wit it i heard it in a diff way not sayiin u bit lol... My vote goes 2 God

V//God

flow gods
style god
punch god
personal god
vote god

wow....whata fuckin joke

flow and punches god? what about personals? creativity? his played lineS? his structure and varying bar lengths?? wow herbs

and Triple N....u mixed up mine and God's versus....he used the fans line not me....

what a mess....

Flow- Durmil
Punches - Durmil
Context - God
Style- Durmil
Multis- God

Ight over all nice battle but this one has to goto durmil .. God you stretched some of them lines a little much for me.. Durm you were on point , could used a little improvement but it was enough for this battle

v - Durm

^^^gotta have 5 wins to vote homie....

ight uppin this again....some vet votes would be nice

hahhaha God Son Holy Shit the fuckin Multi's And Punches were bangin HARDDDD....lol......this shit was nice..only thing you need to fix up is your structure....your best line was:
I'm about to eat you up type nice Like ''Stoves'' U can ''Stew-On-This-Spit''/ Cuz Your rhymes suck & "Bout As Gifted" As A "Jew-On-Christmas"!!


lol that ahd me laughin for a while...and sick set up...that was sum real nice shit

opener: your opener was crazy good multi's 8/10
closer: again nice flow and nice multi's 7.5/10
vocab: your vocab was bangin hard 8/10
Multis: multi's was fuckin crazy here 9/10
Punches: punches were also bangin real hard 8/10
personals: didnt see too many personals 4/10
structure: your structure was ok.. 6/10
flow: flow was fuckin crazy aswell: 9/10

overall: that shit was mad crazy fuckin sick

durmil: your shit was decent....good structure and flow..but only thing is...lot of those rhymes are played..but this shit was still fiya..i was feelin it

opener: your opener was decent 6/10
closer: wasnt feelin da closer dat much 5/10
vocab: your shit was pretty basic 6/10
Multi's: multi's....you lacked multi's 4/10
Punches: your punces were ok 7/10
structure: that was ur strongest point 8/10
flow: your flow was decent 6/10
personals: personals were ok..didnt see too many 6/10

overall: nice shit but ur shit was played...and sum was basic...good try thuogh

vote: god son

^^^State ur a whack bitch....i think in the past 4 battles i've had uve voted against me....haha i had played lines? ur favorite line of his was the most played shit ever...Jew-Christmas concept...and my personals? what were his he said u beat rapmisteress and sumone else...wow great effective personal...i had like 6 read the verse again ya fuckin twat....haha wow for 18 wins or w/e ur quite the herb

Bthis is a battle forgotten to be upped but i felt this shud be closed

Durmil: nice verse you got allot of strong punches and nice personals also your wordplay is very good and i liked ya structure and ya flwo and yes you did have better flow and stucutre than god son

God son: yours was iight noting speical about yours you had ok punches and ok personals but your lines were a lil streched and ya flow was iight

Vote Durmil

ROFL@ ppl who voted for gs, and durmils bitchin about it....
anyway

God Son: I really wanted to stop reading your verse son, wtf is wrong with you son...Do you look at your shit when your typin it, and if you do...How long does it take you to read that shit...Ya structure is horrible...And dog...multis dont win battles son...and outta all them damn bars you had, I only liked about 2 of em...focus on punches next time instead of this multis and slashes and shit like that.

Durmil: Good drop, had some nice wordplay and punches....structure was wwwwwwaaaaaaayyyyy better and although GS had multis...yours flowed better while readin it because i didnt have to keep stoppin to read that shit...
v/Durmil
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