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JPoll 07-12-04 03:25 PM

Tweener: Valor(0-0)vs.LethalLunatic(0-0)
 
deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wensday
verses due by thursday
votes due by the next sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
bar limits:
4 line min.
12 line max.

Paris Hilton666 07-12-04 03:27 PM

yo son I dont wanna be in this tournament no mo thats y i havent check this shit fo the longest so close this shit

Paris Hilton666 07-12-04 03:48 PM

check in

Ima battle this bitch

Valor 07-13-04 01:48 AM

Checkin In On This Bitch.......*yawns*....lets Go!

Valor 07-15-04 02:51 AM

this dude looses battles then cry's and throws fits..
i didn't even know they let herbs in hardwood class-sickz..
lmao at this dude thinking hes ~A LETHAL VETRAN~..(user title)
ill leave this guy's brain fryed needin ill-legal EX-CEDRIN..(pain killer)
yo in this shit your wackness aint packin any heat..
you should ask anyone dude there aint no beatin me..
its been a while homie wtf when the hell are u gonna be spittin..
and it's sad ur gonna loose and your verse is probably pre-writtin..

8 quik lines, u better show

Paris Hilton666 07-15-04 04:33 PM

The only person that is gonna ~rest ya case~ is me *
As the Judge, I’m a prove you wack so now your guilty
Uh huh okay now shut up before I cast ya dreams away **
Ok so your the jury and you can’t still put me away today ***
Wit rhymes or courage I’m still hittin you and ya crew ****
The ways you eva knew, ended up to come to hit you
Look at this cat thinkin he’s valor-able but he’s worthless *****
You can’t mess wit a cat that since birth-was-bless
Only thing you are to me is just another wack contestant
A shot to the stomach make your burn out into your intestant
It’s only the eleventh line and still I don't even need it
Ya try so hard to spit a verse that you actually bleed it

* Rest ya case= The Jury(his crew) Motto
** Cast ya dreams= dream cast(his crew
*** The jury can’t lock me up
**** Rhymes of courage- his user title
***** Valor-able= his name-able

YaYo 07-15-04 05:54 PM

damnnn this was a tyt battle but i gotta give it to lethal lunatic. He came out harder and his rhymes flowed better for me. He won this in multis,punches,metas everything. it was close though. No hate valor though good battle to both of ya

Punches: lethal
Metas: lethal
Multis: lethal
Structure: Tie
Flow: Lethal

Vote: Lethal Lunatic

Paris Hilton666 07-15-04 09:57 PM

uppin for sum votes please dont sleep on this

Valor 07-15-04 11:24 PM

Uppin

Please Leave Explained Votes.........
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Paris Hilton666 07-15-04 11:31 PM

Good battle valor

Valor 07-16-04 12:24 AM

you too man
good battle
;).................

Pop Lotty 07-16-04 05:09 PM

Valor
this dude looses battles then cry's and throws fits..
i didn't even know they let herbs in hardwood class-sickz..
6.5/10...didnt rhyme well, but ok
lmao at this dude thinking hes ~A LETHAL VETRAN~..(user title)
ill leave this guy's brain fryed needin ill-legal EX-CEDRIN..(pain killer)
7/10...good punch
yo in this shit your wackness aint packin any heat..
you should ask anyone dude there aint no beatin me..
5/10...self glorification = :nono:
its been a while homie wtf when the hell are u gonna be spittin..
and it's sad ur gonna loose and your verse is probably pre-writtin..
6/10...the "prewritin" punches are played
overall - 6.125...u had some played shit, i only like like one line.


LL
The only person that is gonna ~rest ya case~ is me *
As the Judge, I’m a prove you wack so now your guilty
7/10...good opener
Uh huh okay now shut up before I cast ya dreams away **
Ok so your the jury and you can’t still put me away today ***
6.5/10...ok
Wit rhymes or courage I’m still hittin you and ya crew ****
The ways you eva knew, ended up to come to hit you
5/10...wtf are u talkin about.
Look at this cat thinkin he’s valor-able but he’s worthless *****
You can’t mess wit a cat that since birth-was-bless
5/10...huh?
Only thing you are to me is just another wack contestant
A shot to the stomach make your burn out into your intestant
6/10...ehhh
It’s only the eleventh line and still I don't even need it
Ya try so hard to spit a verse that you actually bleed it
7/10...good
overall - 6.083...sum of ur shit, i didnt understand...this shit was weak
v/Valor....can u guys return the favor with me versus calamity....vote will not be polled until then.

JPoll 07-19-04 04:34 AM

breakdown here it is...

valor first...

Valor
this dude looses battles then cry's and throws fits..
i didn't even know they let herbs in hardwood class-sickz..
7
lmao at this dude thinking hes ~A LETHAL VETRAN~..(user title)
ill leave this guy's brain fryed needin ill-legal EX-CEDRIN..(pain killer)
8
yo in this shit your wackness aint packin any heat..
you should ask anyone dude there aint no beatin me..
6
its been a while homie wtf when the hell are u gonna be spittin..
and it's sad ur gonna loose and your verse is probably pre-writtin..
6

now for ll...

LL
The only person that is gonna ~rest ya case~ is me *
As the Judge, I’m a prove you wack so now your guilty
6
Uh huh okay now shut up before I cast ya dreams away **
Ok so your the jury and you can’t still put me away today ***
6.5
Wit rhymes or courage I’m still hittin you and ya crew ****
The ways you eva knew, ended up to come to hit you
4
Look at this cat thinkin he’s valor-able but he’s worthless *****
You can’t mess wit a cat that since birth-was-bless
4 where's the punch man...
Only thing you are to me is just another wack contestant
A shot to the stomach make your burn out into your intestant
5
It’s only the eleventh line and still I don't even need it
Ya try so hard to spit a verse that you actually bleed it
4

alright for obvious reasons vote valor...

Mad Dog 07-19-04 06:28 AM

Valor got his hands down one-sided battle I expected more to be honest Valor came out all arms swinging valor had better punches personals wordplay structure and flow.

Lethal Lunatic, your verse I really expected more from you to be honest I was actually quite disappointed however I do think that you are better than this verse and perhaps in future battles you will be able to avoid the mistakes you may today

V/ Valor

Paris Hilton666 07-19-04 11:04 AM

cool uppin for votes its 3-1 ^ yea it was like a quick shit dat I did so w/e LO:L this is gonna be my first lost

40z 07-19-04 11:16 AM

Vote: VALOR

Both sucked, but he came a little more witty and personal to take this.

Lethal Lunatic needs harder personals than VALOR-able.

Poppa Kap 07-19-04 12:37 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by VALOR
this dude looses battles then cry's and throws fits..
i didn't even know they let herbs in hardwood class-sickz..
Basic but I guess this was a personal...weak one tho.

lmao at this dude thinking hes ~A LETHAL VETRAN~..(user title)
ill leave this guy's brain fryed needin ill-legal EX-CEDRIN..(pain killer)
thats not a punch.....talkin about beaten up people aint a punch it aint really dissin him

yo in this shit your wackness aint packin any heat..
you should ask anyone dude there aint no beatin me..
like Shab said...self glorification.

its been a while homie wtf when the hell are u gonna be spittin..
and it's sad ur gonna loose and your verse is probably pre-writtin..
basic........

this was weak.
8 quik lines, u better show


Quote:
Originally Posted by Lethal Lunatic
The only person that is gonna ~rest ya case~ is me *
As the Judge, I’m a prove you wack so now your guilty
ok...an attempt at complexity & personals 2 do with his crew...noy very hard but nice try.

Uh huh okay now shut up before I cast ya dreams away **
Ok so your the jury and you can’t still put me away today ***
yeh again...attempting wordplay & personals.....decent.

Wit rhymes or courage I’m still hittin you and ya crew ****
The ways you eva knew, ended up to come to hit you
WHAT?
Look at this cat thinkin he’s valor-able but he’s worthless *****
You can’t mess wit a cat that since birth-was-bless
GAYYYYYYYYYYYY

Only thing you are to me is just another wack contestant
A shot to the stomach make your burn out into your intestant
WASTE OF 2 LINES

It’s only the eleventh line and still I don't even need it
Ya try so hard to spit a verse that you actually bleed it
ermmm NO.
* Rest ya case= The Jury(his crew) Motto
** Cast ya dreams= dream cast(his crew
*** The jury can’t lock me up
**** Rhymes of courage- his user title
***** Valor-able= his name-able


DON’T EXPLAIN UR PUNCHES OR BOLD THEM THAT WILL MAKE U LOOK A HERB. I will give this 2 Lethal because even tho I liked 2 bars from both of u his were more complex & were not basic.

Vote Lethal. This was a very disapointing battle.

Luse Cannon 07-19-04 01:04 PM

yo this goes to lethal easily. Valors lines was weak, no real personals, and his closer looked like it couldve fir min the midd le of the verse

now lethal, your verse wasnt great either. but u had more punches, ad thats basically all i could say about your verse a exept you played on his crews name too long

vote/lethal

Vango 07-19-04 07:15 PM

Damn i wrote a whole bunch of shit and it didnt take oh well. This battle goes to Valor for better punches, both of you guys came pretty weak. Lethal you would have took this if you would have re-worded some of your punches. Then your punches would have hit harder. For example. "you claim your the judge and jury but you cant even put this battle away, its good to have hopes and aspirations, but im about to cast your dreams away". you see how that makes that punch much harder. you had the personals to work with, but needed to re-word them a little.

vote- valor.

Durmil 07-19-04 09:42 PM

yea i wasnt feelin this battle...

Punches- LL
Personals- LL...i felt both were weak but def LL
Flow-Tie
Opener-LL
Closer-LL
Overall-LL

both weak versus (Excedrin is a weight loss suppliment...not a pain killer....and its intestines not intestents)....but yea LL came harder wit punches and personals...and there wasnt a lot of complexity or wordplay so vote LL

T West 07-19-04 10:00 PM

VALOR:
this dude looses battles then cry's and throws fits..
i didn't even know they let herbs in hardwood class-sickz..
^a personal...but hella weak...

lmao at this dude thinking hes ~A LETHAL VETRAN~..(user title)
ill leave this guy's brain fryed needin ill-legal EX-CEDRIN..(pain killer)
^weak...

yo in this shit your wackness aint packin any heat..
you should ask anyone dude there aint no beatin me..
^filler...

its been a while homie wtf when the hell are u gonna be spittin..
and it's sad ur gonna loose and your verse is probably pre-writtin..
^weak...but meh...atleast it's better than the other attempts


Lethal Lunatic:
The only person that is gonna ~rest ya case~ is me *
As the Judge, I’m a prove you wack so now your guilty
^2nd line was crap...1st line was pretty good...

Uh huh okay now shut up before I cast ya dreams away **
Ok so your the jury and you can’t still put me away today ***
^weak...but atleast der personals

Wit rhymes or courage I’m still hittin you and ya crew ****
The ways you eva knew, ended up to come to hit you
^weak...but a personal atleast

Look at this cat thinkin he’s valor-able but he’s worthless *****
You can’t mess wit a cat that since birth-was-bless
^1st line was a coo personal...2nd was shit

Only thing you are to me is just another wack contestant
A shot to the stomach make your burn out into your intestant
^weak...

It’s only the eleventh line and still I don't even need it
Ya try so hard to spit a verse that you actually bleed it
^you got lazy and just typed anythin to end it off...

Overall: Lethal Lunatic


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