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Tweener: Shadow(0-1)vs.GodsSon(1-0)
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battles go up monday check in by wensday verses due by thursday votes due by the next sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd bar limits: 4 line min. 12 line max. |
checkin in nice..lets do this..
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newbs newbs newbs is that the only people you can beat?... havnt logged in since sunday he runnin from a defeat..... im not a newb so he must know that he shouldnt show... if complaining to mods was good he'd finnaly be a pro!.... he shouldnt step up..ill smack him back to the ground... he if he sits in all the shit he spits he would drown.... i wish i had ten cents for evry time this kid looses.... its wendsay.. he scared now but b4 he was like........... Quote:
j-poll will wake tomorow and see godson still hasnt replied.... dont show..dont ruin ur pride becuz u have already beeen crusified |
j-poll is that a no-show..or what?..or does he have till tonight..?
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nah way i'm here gimme a break its thursday morning,.
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Livexyourxwords: son..please calm down its okay dont cry..take it easy little man
soopermoose9999: ur a fucking bitch..its gonna take you all day to spit a 10 line verse...ur just a bitch Livexyourxwords: :-) soopermoose9999: fuck you pussy sounds like hes a little mad.. Shadow why you in RB you aint a man, you supposed to be up in Wendy Darlings drawer waitin for Peter Pan...Like Peters Home Ya Punch''ll Never Land, While U Just Cant Handle My Spits Like U Got A Fear Of Glands!!.. C'mon son youre 14 years old ya mom dont want you cursin...J-poll put the battles up sunday and thats when you started rehearsin'... 512 POSTS? Somebody must get NO PUSSY, He on Rapbattles from NIGHT TO MORN// Oh, I forgot, Mark is just a 14 YEARD OLD FAG JACKING OFF to POKEMON PORN(say it: PEE-ka-CHEEEWW!)lol if you Winning that would be ODD, so im going to Beat you and make everything EVEN make you ..26-3.. an PROVE you only ..HALF DECENT.. i may be givin you TO MUCH credit cause LOOKS can be decievin' Don't front me son, I'm Gods son giving you grace..I'm just a time bomb ticking and I'll be like your punches and blow-up in your face I'm sorry kiddo youre gonna have to go back to 8 mile i know that thats your dream..but wait you cant see that its Rated R and youre only fourteen.. there shadow happy? |
hott battle lets go and vote up..y'all we need votes..
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yea fa'sho
c'mon lets get some votes |
my vote
opener=gods son-he used a nice punchline 4 tha opener flow-tie=both had good timin and equal bars personals-gods son=C'mon son youre 14 years old ya mom dont want you cursin...J-poll put the battles up sunday and thats when you started rehearsin'... 512 POSTS? Somebody must get NO PUSSY, He on Rapbattles from NIGHT TO MORN// Oh, I forgot, Mark is just a 14 YEARD OLD FAG JACKING OFF to POKEMON PORN(say it: PEE-ka-CHEEEWW!)lol ^damn! vocab-niether simple werds closer-godsson=I'm sorry kiddo youre gonna have to go back to 8 mile i know that thats your dream..but wait you cant see that its Rated R and youre only fourteen.. overall gods son ripped it |
uppin 0-0..his vote dont count gotta be in the league fuckin newbs..
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my vote goes to gods son because he he came harder
and he clowned on him for his age and had funny shit in there my fvorite line was I'm sorry kiddo youre gonna have to go back to 8 mile i know that thats your dream..but wait you cant see that its Rated R and youre only fourteen.. shadow you didnt come as hard and you flow was ok but you had some good shit in there you had a lot of personals which were allright but overall gods son won v/ gods son |
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newbs newbs newbs is that the only people you can beat?...
havnt logged in since sunday he runnin from a defeat..... this was ight...personal was there im not a newb so he must know that he shouldnt show... if complaining to mods was good he'd finnaly be a pro!.... haha decent...personal was there decent punch he shouldnt step up..ill smack him back to the ground... he if he sits in all the shit he spits he would drown.... blah...it was ight i guess i wish i had ten cents for evry time this kid looses.... its wendsay.. he scared now but b4 he was like........... Quote: Originally Posted by Gods son checkin in nice..lets do this.. solid closer...set up was awkward tho but decent ya flow was on point...had some decent punches and personals in there...overall it was ight....7/10 Shadow why you in RB you aint a man, you supposed to be up in Wendy Darlings drawer waitin for Peter Pan...Like Peters Home Ya Punch''ll Never Land, While U Just Cant Handle My Spits Like U Got A Fear Of Glands!! Peter pan-neverland concept is very played...2nd line was ight..still played tho C'mon son youre 14 years old ya mom dont want you cursin...J-poll put the battles up sunday and thats when you started rehearsin'... punch and personal were ight..decent 512 POSTS? Somebody must get NO PUSSY, He on Rapbattles from NIGHT TO MORN// Oh, I forgot, Mark is just a 14 YEARD OLD FAG JACKING OFF to POKEMON PORN(say it: PEE-ka-CHEEEWW!)lol blah...punch was ight...personal was there if you Winning that would be ODD, so im going to Beat you and make everything EVEN make you ..26-3.. an PROVE you only ..HALF DECENT.. i may be givin you TO MUCH credit cause LOOKS can be decievin' bar way too stretched...punch was pretty good tho nice and creative Don't front me son, I'm Gods son giving you grace..I'm just a time bomb ticking and I'll be like your punches and blow-up in your face blah...1st line set-up was ight...2nd line played and rather weak I'm sorry kiddo youre gonna have to go back to 8 mile i know that thats your dream..but wait you cant see that its Rated R and youre only fourteen.. pretty decent closer...personal there but again just on his age God u had some good punches...but ur structure and flow was whack (but i dont really care its text)...u had a lot of played lines tho and every personal u had was about his age...it really started to get repetitive...but some good creativity....6.2/10 Punches-Tie Personals-Shadow...god focused on his age too much shadow at least had varying personals Flow & Structure- Shadow Creativity & Wordplay- God's Son Originality-Shadow Enjoyment- Shadow...cuz a lot of god's shit was played and got repetitive... Overall- Shadow...hence the breakdown and categories.... |
Hands Down Shadow Ripped This "
godson Yo Structure Was Fucked Opener- newbs newbs newbs is that the only people you can beat?... havnt logged in since sunday he runnin from a defeat..... 9/10 Darlings drawer waitin for Peter Pan...Like Peters Home Ya Punch''ll Never Land, While U Just Cant Handle My Spits Like U Got A Fear Of Glands!!.. Kinda Weak 8/10 Closer wish i had ten cents for evry time this kid looses.... its wendsay.. he scared now but b4 he was like........... hah 9.2/10 sorry kiddo youre gonna have to go back to 8 mile i know that thats your dream..but wait you cant see that its Rated R and youre only fourteen.. Are You Talkin or Spittin??? 7/10 Weak verse Man Seen better From You Winner-shadow |
shadow got this shit he wasnt great but it was enough to put godson away
punches shadow vocab none complexity none structure def shadow multis neither really word play neither really humor none enjoyed shadow's a lil overall vote SHADOW um not much to say shadow took this wit betta punches and structure just work on ya structure godson pc |
I gotta be honest.. iv seen alot better from you god son.. i think it was mostly your structure.. what you were saying was good i guess.. but your structure lost you this battle pretty much strait up.. dont ever post a structure like that again lol.......
Metas:Godson Personals:Shadow Flow:shadow Punches:Pretty close. id have to say tie.. Creativity - Wordplay:God..pretty nice creat.. Enjoyment:shadow... god fucked his verse up with that structure.. Vote:shadow Vote on my battle with shabbaranks plz.. return a vote there |
punches:shadow easily...he had way more hardhittin ones.....some of gs' didnt even make sense
flow:shadow easily.gs' shit was stretched like a mofo... personals:shadow...gs had none really structure:shadow by years....gs' shit was ugly as hell, jus capitals and then 4line bars..ugly.. multis:nun overall:shadow...he had better everything imo...flow punches...way better v/shadow.... |
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