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dawgfatha_13 V/S LethalNJection
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unlimited lines no d/r,hate,bullshit,crew,or unexplained votes first to 5 no beef battle good luck i dont care who goes first blind spit |
ayo,
The only way you could be ''sick'' is if you bit my rhymes(avatar) The only way I could be ''bad'' is if i stole your lines The only action you ever got is when you paid your mom 5 cents And the only way you can ''elevate''(erection) is if you paid the gents(guys,gentlemen) You claim you're dangerous but its just a fib The only danger you inflict is trying to infest my crib With all your dickriders voting on your raps They're all pussies just scared of your slaps The only dealers you've seen are those at your game of craps So stop thinking you're a threat before i shut you down Like a computer virus,deadly and with no sound My name is dawg and I do have bite Kinda like Barqs except with a mike Your undefeated streak is coming to an end This merk came from the brain but got typed wit my hand This verse is sure to leave you right where you stand no beef battle. |
check in sorry i forgot about this ill drop my verse ina couple of minutes
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I'll Knock Ya Lights Out Like Folk's In The 80 That Used 'The Clapper'...
Battle Me And Win?, Ya Lost Ya Mind... Like A 'Decapitated Rapper'.... My Spit's Fresh, I Sonned You Then Fuck Ya Sis Just To Prove 'Incest'!!... You Could Cook At K.F.C... And Wouldnt Be Touching A 'Chicks Breast'... I'm Lennox Lewis in text, Why You Trying To Fuck With Me, Featherweight!... .....................Dont fuk wit me becuase your testing Fait.... I'm Talking About Dropping Battle Verses, Dawg, So Ya Better 'Get It Straight' Lethal Disintegrate Competition, With Obnoxious Writtens, So Stop And Listen It's More Likely To Be 'Ya Teeth', When Ya Start To Talk 'Bout Spittin... Yo, I Don't Mean To 'Embarrass Deliberatly', Guess I 'Affront', Kidd!!... But It Ain't My Fault Your Just More 'Pussy' Then A 'Cunt' Is.. Punch Ya Til Your Chin's Down And There Ain't No More Guard... Fuck Wit Lethal, Get The 'Heater To Ya Spine' And Take More 'Back Shots Then Anal Porn Stars'!!... ........................My verse is so hot and juicy..... its justender.. Yeah, dawg Got Some 'Thug In Him'.. When He 'Sexin Gang Members'!!.... You Better. ?? Lies Seem Dim , Stick This Dude When I See Him... My Punches Leave Your Mouth Wit More 'Chips' Then 'IBM'.... This Battles Over.. Yall Can Dwell On It Now... Turned Into An 'Uncaring Shooter' And Left 'dawg On The Ground'!!... quick key good luck |
damn i got ripped....lol oh well i guess i shouldnt have accepted this...well anyways maybe some herb will vote for me....uppin
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lol... well uppin for some votes on this realy quick
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damn, i checked both yall verses, and dawgfatha, no hate but you got ripped pretty bad homie, lethal had you in every category, punches, flow, wordplay everythang. i was really likin the line about takin more back shots then anal porn stars that shit tripped me out. so my vote goes to lethal man
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but i think lethal was better flow same style same punches lethal personal both complexity lethal there it is vote lethal |
lol.. iight thankz can i get some more votes pleade
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congrats on yo votes lethal....uppin
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iight thankz uppin for some more votes.... will return the favor
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fa real, damn lethalNjection dropped it on ya dawgfather...
best lines: I'll Knock Ya Lights Out Like Folk's In The 80 That Used 'The Clapper'... Battle Me And Win?, Ya Lost Ya Mind... Like A 'Decapitated Rapper'.... My Spit's Fresh, I Sonned You Then Fuck Ya Sis Just To Prove 'Incest'!!... You Could Cook At K.F.C... And Wouldnt Be Touching A 'Chicks Breast'... I'm Lennox Lewis in text, Why You Trying To Fuck With Me, Featherweight!... .....................Dont fuk wit me becuase your testing Fait.... ^lethal i guess u meant fate, but yeah excuse me lol lol rofl... i was tryna hold that in fa a long time.. lol nice drop you two but uhm... My Vote/ LethalNJections- he came in swingin' got sum good punches and was funny.. lol i ain't got any open links thank goodness, i will soon.. holla y'all ~wun~ |
Hey sup all. Both were really good. I would say lethal got u though. Flipped everything, and punches as well. Bottam line both good rappers, but Lethal was the better one.
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thankz for the votes uppin for some more please
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lethal-your shit was okay i have seen you come harder then this alot of times but you didnt reallyu need to come much harder for this battle if this hard at all.......flow was off due to you fucked up structure but that is thew only thin that you had wrong wit your verse......punches was on and erything else keep it up man
dawgfatha-your shit was fucked.....structure was wack and stretched as fuck and you flow was competly off....punches wasnt that great and they deffintly didnt match up to lethal's you need to elevate if your gunna be batttling heads like this at your curent level....... v/lethal |
^^iight thankz for the votes uppin for some more please.....
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Dawgfatha_13 - First of all ya first line had nuthin to do with his av. LOL. Most of ya rhymes was basic and u didn't have any good punches. Your closer was iight. keep elevatin...... 5/10
LethalNJection - Ya stucture was good but ya rhyme scheme was a lil off. Ya had some nice punches in there and decent vocab. Nice drop. Overall good spit.....7.5/10 Vote: LethalNJection |
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