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Presyce vs Golden shellz
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yea iight
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just somethin quick
I burn unworthy soljahs from the tounge twist in between my lips.. Tighten my fist, punch a hole in your chest with my fist.. I stepped to da plate and your carreer stopped like short brakes.. Cause i move crowds like tectonic plates that cause earthquakes.. Unrehearsed i spit flames and prepare for the worst.. I flow like liquid and every emcee becomes sumereged.. Ill react like a cat when you arch your back and attack.. Causin me to sink sharp flows into your veins wit poisonous syntax.. Ill seperate your ligments and leave you in disfigurment.. Beat you until your skin color completley changes pigment.. |
just somethin quick
I burn unworthy soljahs from the tounge twist in between my lips.. Tighten my fist, punch a hole in your chest with my fist.. I stepped to da plate and your carreer stopped like short brakes.. Cause i move crowds like tectonic plates that cause earthquakes.. Unrehearsed i spit flames and prepare for the worst.. I flow like liquid and every emcee becomes sumereged.. Ill react like a cat when you arch your back and attack.. Causin me to sink sharp flows into your veins wit poisonous syntax.. Ill seperate your ligments and leave you in disfigurment.. Beat you until your skin color completley changes pigment.. |
damn my bad i thought i shit didnt send the first time so i sent it again
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i said 5lines damn
nigga act like jim jones he act like he hard he look like lil kim before her motherfuckin boob job hell burn a ligment thats such a hard word but ill put ya life on pause, like turnin a sharp curve u servin me dog, thatll neva happen u got as much chance in winnin as bill gates has in rappin im livin my life dog u noe how it goes but hes not a pimp so why da hell he fuckin wit my ho wen i spit my freestyles i get like shaq nah ima dominate i aint mean ima hack!?! |
uppin for some votes
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Presyce you had far to much self glorification in your verse that hit at the end though i liked but really no attempt at personals or punches.
Golden Shellz you attempted at more hits some connected some didn't that's just how it is.. nothin really special in the verse personals wise... but vote has to go to golden for makin a harder attempt.... oh yea shellz i holla'd at your bitch slap lets go for ten lines .. if you down go back to the bitchslap and accept... |
bot sucked vote golden shellz..........for the most tryed punches
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I like ya flow the vocab was nice..the flow was decent. Nice punches to..or attempted punches. Anyway u got my vote.
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Umm I ment to say Presyce has my vote
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Hardly an insult coming from someone in Lyrical Virus...Presyce...way too much self glorification..should used those lines to make some punches that were worth reading...yet..Golden used played shit that i really didnt care for
V/Presyce...return te favor in my battle against amayze, thanks |
Presyce
structure was decent...some of ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off a little cause of the few stretched lines...u had a few multis...wordplay was ok...some of ur punches connected...no good personals... Golden Shellz structure was pretty good...flow was good for the most part...no multis...wordplay wasnt good...none of ur punches connected...no good personals... Overall Golden Shellz had the better structure...and the more stable flow...neither had good personals...Presyce had more multis...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Presyce gets my vote... VOTE - PRESYCE PLEASE return the favor with an honest on the link in my sig against bullethole...thanx... |
2 me presyce won
he had better punches n his rymes made alot more since v/presyce |
oh yea vote 4 deez battles
amayze vs 2hard2lose http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487 forgotten flow http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031 murda-gram http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136506 kool col-b http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136465 thanx |
weak battle but... golden shellz get it... tho presyce had some decent metaz... golden went for punches... no expla- needed...
peace V- Golden Shellz peep battle n vote fair... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136850 |
Presyce, I liked what you did.. but it wasn't a battle verse. It was an open mic. So the only thing I had to look at was see if the other person made one punch, which they did.
So... Golden Shellz: "nigga act like jim jones he act like he hard he look like lil kim before her motherfuckin boob job" Weak. Really lame, but it was a punch. So you've already won at this point. "hell burn a ligment thats such a hard word but ill put ya life on pause, like turnin a sharp curve" Again, weak. Not a punch, it's self glorification. "u servin me dog, thatll neva happen u got as much chance in winnin as bill gates has in rappin" That was decent. "im livin my life dog u noe how it goes but hes not a pimp so why da hell he fuckin wit my ho" Not good. "wen i spit my freestyles i get like shaq nah ima dominate i aint mean ima hack!?!" You get like Shaq, as in you never make free throws? Hah, just kidding. It wasn't good, but again, better than nothing. v/ golden shellz |
aight this was kinda close but once i look at it again it really wasent Shellz you had nice structure cuz all ya bars were about the same they were short and righ 2 the punch, you had some decent punches but nuthin spectacular and you really didnt have any personals you need 2 elevate Presyce you had better vocab and ya structure was good u had nice meta's you really didnt have any personals but u had enough to take this one, i liked the wordplay in ya drop ~~ good shit My vote~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Presyce |
RETURN THE FAVOR, HERES MY LINK,
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136860 im gonna give this to golden shellz for atleast attempting to shoot out some punches which werent all that ( i didnt understand the last punch whatsoever) n e ways Presyce ur shit was toooo big in vocab and u didnt even have n e punches seems like ur whole spit went on making your self look smart and good both need to work on punches keep uppin |
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