riot .vs. va
 

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no essays
no d/r, h, c

-you drop first like you said...

you get an hour after check

DQ.. nearly word for word line from eminem cd:
I'ma RUN your brain around da block to JOG your fuckin memory

check n shit

check, waiting on your verse

aiyo
 

I'ma spit this shit raw, u guaranteed to fuckin remember me/
If ya don't, I'ma RUN your brain around da block to JOG your fuckin memory/
Add a loss to your record book, make your status kinda uneven/
U a GULLIBLE BITCH so is it aight if i start callin u "Miss Believin"?/
Your initials read "VA", but u aint from Virginia or D.C./
When u rhyme shit about me, u like Green Bay cuz u are cheesy/
U lack lyrical content, like your avatar and profile, your style's empty/
When we listen to u rap, we searchin for skills but da shit is missing/
I'ma burn your style up, yo I'll FRY it like an order from McDonald's/
I'm fresh and clean, your shit is shitty and dirty like a hick's tonsels/
I'll be Michael Johnson plus a fuckin cheatah in this lyrical triathlon/
Your shit is just "Alrighty then" like Jim Carrey wit a MASK on/

...word...

hit dis up wit some votes bitches

opener:

you spit your game, came plain and now votes wait arranged...
...wanted fame so heavily you bust a vein, even your sigs ashamed.

riots no emcee not to offend you,
just pretend to be a venue like gatorade...
...but, is it in you?

lets continue, if rap was money id donate what you lack...
...my text murder your front to back, its nuthin but a fact.
shut your trap, im over this battle, 5 votes and im out...
...shoot spokes in your mouth, so your grill like crunk folk from the south.

thats the only way you passin as fully Lyric...
...2nd line was murder, shoot caps in your cascet and your a Holy spirit.
slip on brass knuckles cuz your punches alone dont buckle...
...2 bars would be too suddle, my punches: you couldnt duck fool.

closure:

its my former-town-where quater-pounders like yourself aproach~the~best...
...a shorter-crowd-for the normal-sound-where my lyrics elope~your~chest.

as Bill~would~taunt:your mine to fill~with~haunt...
...you cant escape the fear when your pill~is~shot, dude you just got killed~with~font

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uppin for some votes

Battle was pretty hard to judge on.

MC Riot: Pretty nice flow...a couple lines were off a few syllables but it really didnt skip a beat thru your verse. I noticed right off the bat that you used a whole lot of metas...and you tied a lot of them in with personal punches. Creativity was what your verse was all about. No multies from you...which would helped your flow even more...but over a good verse...nice hard punches...and nice metas also.

Whos next?

VA: I havent seen a style like yours before, it was a lil different in parts. Some of your bars were long and some were short...it wasnt really that bad, it was just confusing to read at first. The gatorade line was pretty nice I liked that. Nothing really along the lines of personals from you though...that hurt your punches some. I didnt think your punches were as hard as his...seeing also that he had more than you. Some nice multies to open your verse up though...not really a good opener though. Just a lil harder next time...some personals and you got it.

v/MC Riot

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Okay
Flow: mCriot
Personals:VA
Style: VA
Opener: Va
Metas: mCriot

Winner: VA...

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mc riot, liked ya opener, 2nd bar was ok, 3rd bar was an alrite personal.. 4th bar was a pretty decent personal, but empty and missing dont rhyme, so it sort of killed it a bit. 5th bar coulda been better on the second line but i got what u were sayin easy.. and the closer was alrite too.

VA, opener was a bit hard to make any sence of.. 2nd bar was ok, but had a pretty weak punchline.. same with the 3rd one, it wasnt much of a punchline, 4th line was better, it had a punchline.. 5th was... ok i spose... nuthin special. the 6th wasnt amazing either.. the closer seemed to be working on technical rhymes more then a good diss.. sometimes trying hard to get a good multi in can really take away from the diss.. the killed with font line was ok.. but i dont get pill is shot..

overall.. Mc Riot took the battle.. with punches mainly..

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I LIKE BOTH METAPHORES BUT I GIVE IT 2
MC RIOT HE GOT ME WIT DAT JIM CAREY LINE
DAT WAS HOT

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its a shame u BIT that line from eminem.

cd - infinite... track - 313 ... em clearly says this line.

^ it didnt bold the line i wanted it to so ....

Im'a run ya brain around the block to jog ya fuckin memory
is the line.

MC Riot definitely comin with harder punches, both about equal on wordplay, but Riot got in more personals than VA. my vote: mC Riot