QBsmaher vs Young Lewis
 

Rules:

10-20 lines
N/Hate
N/DR
N/Crew
N/Biting
N/Feeding
N/Recycling
Bling spit(both go at the same time)
30 minutes to spit...anymore is a DQ

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This kid calls himself the QB smasher...
well I'm the newbie rapper, bringin the Queens Bridge disaster
I'm about to leave u extinct like cavemen, only memories is your name in the pavement
find a replacement, dont find a rhyme a paste it
like battlin garbage men this a line that I wasted
I seek a glitch in QBitch n spit till your knees are split
squash beef with bear knuckles so you can MEAT my fist
ya can't digest my lyrics like spittin chicks,
but it’s a health hazard when you start eating shit
if ya dont come legit, ya gonna be meetin a ditch
my mics like 9's wit extra clips
I'd ask if you were equiped, but you'd think i was talkin bout greetin dicks
whose next, I just banged sets of text
left a pool of blood like cheques in a gang bet
your 12-2 its cool cuz I chain vets to tracks then leave em like train wrecks

This kid calls himself the QB smasher...
well I'm the newbie rapper, bringin the Queens Bridge disaster
I'm about to leave u extinct like cavemen,
only memories is your name in the pavement so find a replacement
dont find a rhyme a paste it
like battlin garbage men this a line that I wasted
I seek a glitch in QBitch n spit till your knees are split
squash beef with bear knuckles so you can MEAT my fist
ya can't digest my lyrics like spittin chicks,
but it’s a health hazard when you start eating shit
if ya dont come legit, ya gonna be meetin a ditch
my mics like 9's wit extra clips
I'd ask if you were equiped, but you'd think i was talkin bout greetin dicks
whose next, I just banged sets of text
left a pool of blood like cheques in a gang bet
your 12-2 its cool cuz I chain vets to tracks then leave em like train wrecks

Lines come of so sick youll think this post was raggin
Look at the red background, must of been a stabbing
Call me good weed, cause hes takin this L to the face
I Mastered "blunt" weaponry, "broke" him like a vase
Rhymes is ill, cant be touched like poison dart frogs
But since you incist, swell, Ill see you in the pete bog
The punches thrown are measured on the rictor scale
Someone left the bag open cause his chips are stale *1
Engine runs on eight cylinders, fuel injec and 2 cams
Ya got it in ya legs?, watch the sprayin overhead mans *2
So sick, I went ahead and started callin ICU my home
No tricks, leave dead and have all ya family in moans
If you were an erector set, you couldnt connect bars
Even if ya drew lines in the constalations of the stars
Try to get me a D.Q, upon review, after reading thru
But get replies, in reguard to, he just better than you

*1(Meaning hes biting)
*2(Fuel injectors = spray, cams = overhead)

Lines come of so sick youll think this post was raggin
Look at the red background, must of been a stabbing
Call me good weed, cause hes takin this L to the face
I Mastered "blunt" weaponry, "broke" him like a vase
Rhymes is ill, cant be touched like poison dart frogs
But since you incist, swell, Ill see you in the pete bog
The punches thrown are measured on the rictor scale
Someone left the bag open cause his chips are stale *1
Engine runs on eight cylinders, fuel injec and 2 cams
Ya got it in ya legs?, watch the sprayin overhead mans *2
So sick, I went ahead and started callin ICU my home
No tricks, leave dead and have all ya family in moans
If you were an erector set, you couldnt connect bars
Even if ya drew lines in the constalations of the stars
Try to get me a D.Q, upon review, after reading thru
But get replies, in reguard to, he just better than you

*1(Meaning hes biting)
*2(Fuel injectors = spray, cams = overhead)

THIS MOTHER FUCKER WASNT LETTIN ME POST....SITE MUSTA BEEN LAGGIN OR SOMETHING!!!

Lines come of so sick youll think this post was raggin
Look at the red background, must of been a stabbing
Call me good weed, cause hes takin this L to the face
I Mastered "blunt" weaponry, "broke" him like a vase
Rhymes is ill, cant be touched like poison dart frogs
But since you incist, swell, Ill see you in the pete bog
The punches thrown are measured on the rictor scale
Someone left the bag open cause his chips are stale *1
Engine runs on eight cylinders, fuel injec and 2 cams
Ya got it in ya legs?, watch the sprayin overhead mans *2
So sick, I went ahead and started callin ICU my home
No tricks, leave dead and have all ya family in moans
If you were an erector set, you couldnt connect bars
Even if ya drew lines in the constalations of the stars
Try to get me a D.Q, upon review, after reading thru
But get replies, in reguard to, he just better than you

*1(Meaning hes biting)
*2(Fuel injectors = spray, cams = overhead)

THIS MOTHER FUCKER WASNT LETTIN ME POST....SITE MUSTA BEEN LAGGIN OR SOMETHING!!!

Lines come of so sick youll think this post was raggin
Look at the red background, must of been a stabbing
Call me good weed, cause hes takin this L to the face
I Mastered "blunt" weaponry, "broke" him like a vase
Rhymes is ill, cant be touched like poison dart frogs
But since you incist, swell, Ill see you in the pete bog
The punches thrown are measured on the rictor scale
Someone left the bag open cause his chips are stale *1
Engine runs on eight cylinders, fuel injec and 2 cams
Ya got it in ya legs?, watch the sprayin overhead mans *2
So sick, I went ahead and started callin ICU my home
No tricks, leave dead and have all ya family in moans
If you were an erector set, you couldnt connect bars
Even if ya drew lines in the constalations of the stars
Try to get me a D.Q, upon review, after reading thru
But get replies, in reguard to, he just better than you

*1(Meaning hes biting)
*2(Fuel injectors = spray, cams = overhead)

THIS MOTHER FUCKER WASNT LETTIN ME POST....SITE MUSTA BEEN LAGGIN OR SOMETHING!!!

Lines come of so sick youll think this post was raggin
Look at the red background, must of been a stabbing
Call me good weed, cause hes takin this L to the face
I Mastered "blunt" weaponry, "broke" him like a vase
Rhymes is ill, cant be touched like poison dart frogs
But since you incist, swell, Ill see you in the pete bog
The punches thrown are measured on the rictor scale
Someone left the bag open cause his chips are stale *1
Engine runs on eight cylinders, fuel injec and 2 cams
Ya got it in ya legs?, watch the sprayin overhead mans *2
So sick, I went ahead and started callin ICU my home
No tricks, leave dead and have all ya family in moans
If you were an erector set, you couldnt connect bars
Even if ya drew lines in the constalations of the stars
Try to get me a D.Q, upon review, after reading thru
But get replies, in reguard to, he just better than you

*1(Meaning hes biting)
*2(Fuel injectors = spray, cams = overhead)

THIS MOTHER FUCKER WASNT LETTIN ME POST....SITE MUSTA BEEN LAGGIN OR SOMETHING!!!

Lines come of so sick youll think this post was raggin
Look at the red background, must of been a stabbing
Call me good weed, cause hes takin this L to the face
I Mastered "blunt" weaponry, "broke" him like a vase
Rhymes is ill, cant be touched like poison dart frogs
But since you incist, swell, Ill see you in the pete bog
The punches thrown are measured on the rictor scale
Someone left the bag open cause his chips are stale *1
Engine runs on eight cylinders, fuel injec and 2 cams
Ya got it in ya legs?, watch the sprayin overhead mans *2
So sick, I went ahead and started callin ICU my home
No tricks, leave dead and have all ya family in moans
If you were an erector set, you couldnt connect bars
Even if ya drew lines in the constalations of the stars
Try to get me a D.Q, upon review, after reading thru
But get replies, in reguard to, he just better than you

*1(Meaning hes biting)
*2(Fuel injectors = spray, cams = overhead)

THIS MOTHER FUCKER WASNT LETTIN ME POST....SITE MUSTA BEEN LAGGIN OR SOMETHING!!! I been tryin to post since 12:32

DAmnnn close battle... I vote for Lewis cuz his flows were better and his punches were better. Multis and metas were both there but again, lewis had better ones.

Punches:lewis
Metas:lewis
Multis:tie
Flow:lewis
Structure:smasher

Vote: lewis

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lets get the votes on.....

young lewis- yo i like ya style of keyin you incorperated a shit load of multies in ya flow you had a couple of punches but i really wasnt feelin em u basically focused on multies ya structure was str8 and ya floe was good.
qbsmasher-ya style was str8 but not better tha young lewis but your punches hit a little harder then his i liked you closer u added a couple of multies and a punch in one i like that but all in all this was a really close battle lewis wouldve had my vote but he aint really throw any punches do that in ya next battle wit all ya multies youd be hott kid but my vote has to go to smasher for his punches

vote-qbsmasher

need some votes here...

Dammmnn this was a pretty close battle i gotsta say. my vote has to go to Lewis tho cuz i was feelin his punches throughout da whole thing and his metas were off da hook. some of his personals were tight too....this was a really dope battle tho, no beef for anyone this shit was tight.

vote: Lewis

this one goes to lewis he had some tight ass flow
i like the structure and the punch line and shit
vote goes to young lewis

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both had a few punches
but lewis's punches hit harder
so i gave him da battle

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peace

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i give it 2 QBSMASHER
because YOUNG LEWIS flow
fell off at da end n plus i think
QB did a better job at da end wit
how he made his punches fit wit da flow
but real close battle
v/QBSMASHER
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yea yea I was feelin dis battle sweet finish QB but u lacked the punches so Lewis won wit punches this is the nicest battle I seen in 2 days. return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982

you both had good struture except qb shit was a little better .qb your vocab was ok as were your punches and young was your equal but you had no personals and thats how young takes the vote with better disses.

ima give this battle to qb smasher, because I think you hit alot harder then Lewis
some verses was too short and some were too long, but the punches made up for that, to get you this win, keep elevatin

Lewis your structure was better but lackin those furious punches, that was needed to win this battle, but keep elvatin

aight 1

oh yea, go ahead and returnn the fav vote honestly !
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tryin to close these battles

good battle yall

Dis battle was ok
too bad I cant vote yet but Il will get back to u when I can

yl wokr on ur structure vocab and personals and multies good flow 5/10
qb work on personals and multies ur verse was much better obviously 7/10