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D-Tain vs WillNova
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no dick rider votes - Bitches check in then drop dont no show |
check in, yo, i know your not online but drop wen u get on, u did accept in bitch salpped
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definition of tru pain, I spit butane//
the only thing u d-tain is hard dick from UK// see how we play, left in rooms made fo emergencies// and when I talk about pounds, I don't mean english currency// u got words fo me, cut ya tongue, speak broken english// slurr ya language like Mike Tyson, Imma make u famous// too dangerous, flip continuosly like acrobatic gymnastics// then u panic cause of habit, like a flabbergastic faggat// I cause havoc, back out before it's to late// alter ya state, kinad like ya brain when u gettin baked// ......aight do you |
like a boxer with no arms, your punches will be abcent...
dont even have to try, i can take this win by accedent... u spit 10 lines wit no punches, u must be fooling about... coz the rules didnt say no punches, y u rulin them out?... you thought you was hot, till it came to spittin, u froze... u in 5 battles, and and gona keep ripped like tramps clothes... maybe i should let u correct your shit, give u a 10 line extention.. if you was a fukin milloinaire, you still wouldnt PAY attention... i should remind you that wackness is treatable here at RB... its called getting your self banned, try it and see.. |
yo uppin in here peeps,
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D-tain, ya bars was straight.... we need sum votes here.... uppin fo votes
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uppin here pleasewe do need votes
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uppin
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uppin for votes
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i'll give it to d-train, he came harder, his punches hit harder, although i have heard that 'PAY attention' line before...but everything else was tight
willnova, yo shit was tight, i just wasnt feeling it, some shit was HARD, but in the end train came harder and prepared to battle v/d-train |
WILLNOVA: YOUR VERSE WAS KINDA WEAK. THERE WERE NO FOR REAL PUNCHES. NEED TO ELEVATE. WORK ON FLOW & STRUCTURE. ALSO GET HARDER PUNCHES.
D-TAIN: YOU HAD A DECENT VERSE FOR THIS BATTLE. YOU HAD NICE FLOW & STRUCTURE. YOUR PUNCHES WERE MUCH BETTER THAN WILL, SO YOU GOT THIS BATTLE 4 SURE. VOTE= D-TAIN Hit one of my battles back,after all,I did take time 2 read this shit!!! |
Willnova: alrite well when i was readin this i thought this was a self glorification... no real punches in there and it was kinda weak...
D-tain: nice verse i was feelin it... good structure and nice punches i think u got this 1 wit a ko v/d-tain |
I aint gonna vote cuz me and Nova in the same crew but here's my 2 cents on it.
NOVA... Ur lines as far a structer was straight. U had good personals but Ur punches were all over the place on this one. U were too seriouce and kept Ur punches kinda basic. I was feeling Ur verse but at a point U went off key wit Ur style. these things here may point our faults in this battle. Ur flow was a lil off, Im not use to see this from U but ok. Ur openner had a good start but the Butane bit didn't ryme as good as U hoped it to. Ur closer was the worst part of Ur verse. It killed the good moment. I was feeling Ur whole verse and I honestly thoaght U had this nigga tho. Good verse, Use more complex and if U can, comical and complex Punches to uppin ur verse a lil more. dont be so seriouse wit the battle. Ur verse gets a 7 out of 10 D-Train.... Ur structure was ok too. a lil boring at times. U didn't transition too well but Ur flow was good from one line to the next, doesnt sound too good if U read it all together from bar to bar tho. U were feeding off his rymes which isn't always a good thing but U kept it cool and added some comedy to Ur punches. U stretch ur lines a bit but not enouf to get me crazy about it. Ur first line sounds like something I said befor in a battle, U couldv bitten it or made it up, I dont know. but try to be more creative wit how u say shit tho. Use better vocab and wordplay. all in all, Id give Ur verse an 8 out of 10 just cuz of the comical lines. thats all that kept U up on this one. Punches....D Structure.....D Flow.....D Multis....W Open.....W closer......D V/ would honestly go for D-Tain on this one. Yo will, U shouldve wrecked this kid but he came good on this one. sorry. |
aight nigga, good look.... hahahaahaha still uppin fo votes
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aight thanx for the votes, just to let u know, i didnt bie any of them lines, god they may of ben used beor, how many battles actually go on here?? any ways still uppin
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definition of tru pain, I spit butane//
the only thing u d-tain is hard dick from UK// Na..not feeling dis shit..no punch..no flow..2/10 see how we play, left in rooms made fo emergencies// and when I talk about pounds, I don't mean english currency// Meh..weak..wasnt effective at all 2/10 u got words fo me, cut ya tongue, speak broken english// slurr ya language like Mike Tyson, Imma make u famous// (shakes head) do i have to continue breaking down ur shit..played 2/10 too dangerous, flip continuosly like acrobatic gymnastics// then u panic cause of habit, like a flabbergastic faggat// The set was ok..but the punch was weak again..3/10 I cause havoc, back out before it's to late// alter ya state, kinad like ya brain when u gettin baked// lol basic as fuck..weak 2/10 Riiggghtt where to start..the only thing decent again is the flow..everything else was very weak..punches were weak and sumtimes played..bit more creativity in those would be an improvement..vocab was ok..structure was all over the place..keep battling!! peep vets drops and u will learn summit... elevate like a boxer with no arms, your punches will be abcent... dont even have to try, i can take this win by accedent... Weak..spelling mistakes put me off to..2/10 u spit 10 lines wit no punches, u must be fooling about... coz the rules didnt say no punches, y u rulin them out?... Tha was ok!!...the best bar ive seen so far 4.5/10 you thought you was hot, till it came to spittin, u froze... u in 5 battles, and and gona keep ripped like tramps clothes... No punch..played concept really to..more creativity!!! maybe i should let u correct your shit, give u a 10 line extention.. if you was a fukin milloinaire, you still wouldnt PAY attention... Attempt on wordplay..which didnt cum off 4 ya really..not good 3/10 Much the same really as your opponent i think one bar got this one though..which is the one i scored 4.5..but u still need to elevate..flow was aight so was the structure keep at it though bro..we all learners!! v/ d tain- better punches..just!!! Y'all return a vote on one of my battles since i did give u a breakdown and explainations.. |
i'll give it to d-train, he came harder with punches they hit harder, some of his lines were dope.
willnova, yo shit was tight, i just wasnt feeling it, some shit was HARD, but in the end tain came harder |
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