sporadic vs. .sin.
 

goodluck kid....

k, droppin my keystyle now......

sporadic's a fuckwhit, spitin trick shit, get whipped quick
only votes this kid gets....is from ridin text-tee's dick
clocks gone tick, your times up before you started
battlin Sin? what u retarded? your loss streak has started
i marked it, your skill couldnt be half ill if it had aids
you could pay professional tutors n still get low grades
sporadic, ull get slapped, your throw back, crack addic
verses are so low, people say "look the whak cat is bak at it"
stay attic, dont even come out of ya house dude, hate 2 be rude
sins skilled n fuken slick, your more slimy then dick lube...
your 18, raps a pipe dream, gettin cream aint in ya scene
ill make ya green, slash ya vocal cords n rip out ya spleen
im mean, ill K.O you, faster then ya premature ejac..
its fact, 0-5, ill rip you so bad, ur not stayin intact
on track, notice the verse i disperse, is shitall in personals
your NOBODY, sporadic, u could die, or get hit with black n blues
u think people care? man your just another win for Sin
another weak MC in the trash bin, with dick imprints on ya chin
ill shake u like tin, verbal tornados, for u whak hoes
sporadic, ill leave you gasping for breath! afta my flows

taking forever.....................................

this is just gettin rediculous man... im never putting an open time limit again. slow cunt.

i'll drop when i come bak from work..have patience herb..not all our shit is pre writtin

pre-writtin? u fuken idiot ur sayin that was pre-writtin.. not all of us are fuken slow ass fagget cunts that read the other persons verse before they spit.

stupid cunt, what do u think a blind spit is? u better fuken watch yourself cunt, u can get D/Qed for that shit.

Battle Many Herbs? Plenty Here on Rb But Not me,
Confusing Claims that I'll Merk ya....
...Then Boasts that he's a Newbie
Pm's me "lets battle" Coz killa cam had your request rejected
coz ur wack, un thearting, pathetic
...and just not even respected
personals? suprising u didnt dig up shit when it was pre writtin
Sin by name criminal like his ancestors
...sent over from great britain!
sit down and calm my lyrics got u irrate bouncing like a kangaroo
Coz ur more gassed up than rolf harris
..when he playing the dig-a-re-do
The only time you'd be dope is when you get chance to smoke blunts
Stupid Ingorant Not worthy of complaing..
...like a bitch i swear u had a CUNT!
I put the words back in my tounge im merking ur ass for fun
your from down under so to win
... u better start sucking someone

explainations :

jonny wilkinson punch..england defeated austraila in the final minute ov extra time or sumthing with a DROP goal in rugby for those that didnt know..and about his ancestors years ago criminals from britain where sent to austrailia..and there was alot sent there..so it is more than likely that he would have ancestor criminal..a dig-a-re-do is a austrailian musical instrument which u blow into

ay bro, none of my shits pre-writtin.. i can see howd ud think that tho cuz i couldnt be fucked researching someone i knew i was gonna beat.. but look, i was tired, it was 3:30 in the morning.. just didnt wanna put up with your shit.. thats why i cracked the shits.. dont take it personally.

uppin for votes.

sporadic... pretty much every bar was stretched as shit.. and your structure was screwed up.. punches were ok, but the only good ones were from feeding..

sin: much better flow and structure than sporadic... Its obvious you could tie in personals if you wanted to.. n your punches hit decent

v/ sin

yo, could you return the favour on one of the battles in my sig??

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lol..again with the herbs..some decent votes plz

sporadic, hate to burst your bubble.. but your a herb.. full stop.

your shit was 'ok'.. but in your 'herbness' you forgot that the battle was a blind spit, and the rules say no feeding.. (u broke these rules straight up, thats called cheating)

and if ya dont mind me adding dude, that took you 3 and a half hours to write. and it wasnt anythin amazing.. u relied on personals way more then punches. thats not how to win battles.

really.. hate to break it to y, but any1 who votes for you is a herb bruh.

peace.

was a blind spit..u just droped b4 me and u kept on complaing about it u HERB! stick ur opnion up ur ass..im not intrested in arguing with ya..so do us a favour and up..and stop swaying the votes saying " anyone thas votes for me is a herb" just up u cunt

sin had a tight verse with hard punches...ur structure was perfect and ur rhymes were tight too....so were you personals....

sporadic...dawg u had punches yeah but ur verse didnt rhyme to my ears...i mean they were kinna invisible to me...and you shud have come harder with more personals and metaz...

v/sin

yo drop an honest vote on my battle with eyedentdy...aint nb voting on that bitch yo...lol...please vote!!!thanx :D

multis-sin
structure-sin
metah-sin
punchline-sin
vote i'm going to sin
hey yo we need votes for...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135151
peace

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right this going to the admin again..shakes head..herbs!!!!

learn to loose dawg shit happens...and i aint no fucking herb so count me outta ur lists on herbs...

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This wasnt a bad battle. What stood out from me though is the personals used in Spor's verse. Though SIns verse was better structured and written.... it lacked personals so could be some pre-written stuff that was thrown together (Not accusing you of pre-writing just saying it could be) Feeding: When you take examples of the first person to spits verse to use them in your own lines.... Couldnt see any of this going on here as the punches were mainly personal.

v/sporadic... though it was close, a battle isnt always judge on flow/structure, mainly on punches and more importantly personals that hit hard.

hmmm i think sporadic one
he had beta structure....
beta personals...

overall he hit harder..

sin...lil info 4 ya personals are very important in a battle....
otherwise your jus spittin punches that u could aim at anyone..
that aint how u battle...

anywayz he one,but i aint gonna vote cos,sin will no doubt say its hate or sumert
dnt worry bout the time limit sporadic...he tried to pull the same shit on me...
guys so dumb..dnt think he realizes if theres no time-limit.....well...they aint!

sin got this easy because his punches were better then spora dick and had the best perfomace out der with his word play that I really like... it was the most entertaining to read plus the flow as nice when sporadics was choppy in some places but also porr in other cases. Vote sin ~master minds~ http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135003

join up sin

ay grenade.. for starters.. both of u cheated when u battled me.. u both said blind spit, then read my verse and made improvements on yours. im not complainin on time for this kid and as for you bro, when i say put an hour time limit in PM then u agree, i wouldof thought it was an hour time limit.. notice how i dropped in under an hour..

im sick of battlin un-talented text-tees.. i mean this guy even fed off my verse. its cheatin.. i can have sporadic D/Qed so easy its not funny. if hes smart hell realise that.

but fuck it, let the votes do the talkin kids.

yeah fair call D/Qing that vote.. i didnt hit up his link because he left no real feedback. uppin for more votes tho.

My vote goes to Sin which had tha overall best lyricz, structure, and punches... Haha tha punches really hit hard... As for Sporadic nice try but you came with it jus a lil too weak punches was somewhat corny and from tha jurassic period... LOL... No offense, and oh yeah btw yo Sporadic its obvious you cheated by feeding... My vote goes to SIN... word up... 1.

FUCK dont have enough posts LOL... Maybe i wont vote hahaha

im back and explained vote earlier.... jus didnt have enough posts... now i do

This battle is one sided, Sportatic you would of had some good punches but your flow and bar structure messed up all your deliveries with them. Sin your punches and multi's had this one wrapped up. Nice use of multi's cuase ya didn't get away from the punch which is nice to see. Sporadic, come up with a better bar style somthing more simpler or not as choppy you were cut'n your bar's in half or somthin I don't really know made them seem stretch. Cause of better punches, flow and multi's Sin takes this.