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Plutonium VS DisasterMaster
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let me slay this man right quick...
if you think this cat is good you must be mistaken called plutonium cuz platinum was already taken if they scored this 1-10 u suck so bad ur un-rateable ur rhymes r so old, they lost hair, n are un-fade-able Rhymes plain wouldn’t be flashy…. even u neon-kit it Rap and sex same for ya…. 1 mins just beyond-limit crack baby, we know your shit is done straight from the lab but still dunno were you from lets stop the polls cuz homies verse has bad reviews they say 'straight from the lab' they mean the 'test tubes' done |
here's my ten............
the disasters you make are so wack it makes you lose faster// you're in a rapbattle kid, you've found the wrong thing to master// i'ma finish you faster than the caller ID showing up on ur telephone// what can you punch me with, draught, tsunami, or maybe a cyclone!??// kid this shit is final, i'ma make your fate worse than fatal// cause any nuclear explosion are far worse then a dribble from volcanoes// bitch you're wasting your time where you could've been practising// cause no matter how close you punch you'd still be reported missing// fuck, your punches keep missing, and i've been through Lost and Found// not hard to find, cause most of ur posts are in the Lyricist Lounge// |
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my vote goes to Plutonium cuz his shit was dope throughout. he had some good punches and some of da wordplay was dope.
da other cat's shit was too basic and i wasnt feelin his structure at all vote: Plutonium |
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opener:P punches:both flow:P structure:P wordplay:none vocab:P personals:both closer:D overall:plutonium |
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ima have to give this to plutonium, ya verse was good, ya had good flow, structure, creative punches and an overall better verse than disaster..more creative punches. disaster:ya had a decent verse, but not strong enough for the win here, ya flow and structure were good tho, just not hard or creative enough...... VOTE:plutonium |
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aight this was a good close battle but it came down 2 the more complex verse and the harder punches Disaster you had a good verse you had good wordplay and ya punches could of hit alot harder but you had a good flow alltogether ya structure was a lil fucked up but you can fix that you had nice vocab and it was a good drop Plu you had a nice drop to good wordplay good complexity and ya punches hit harder than ya comp's and overall you had better structure and better wordplay which made ya flow run alot more smoother and made it look alot better and it was easier to read and ya had better vocab overall you had the better drop my vote~~~~~~~~~~pLUtonium~~~~~~~~~~ |
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ok this battle was horrible
flow both was alright and thats it no good disses puches or anything at all i cant choose cuz id have to guess and i give honest votes you both need to step up |
plutonium gets this with an overall better verse it was close but pluto had better punches n nice wordplay through out his verse it was deff more complex..da other verse was good n prolly would've takin out alot of other mc's but in this battle t goes ta pluto..
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