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Yvonne 07-15-04 07:46 AM

Aznbl4ckrice Vs. XxXtasy
 
ok
10lines min
16max
no d/r votes
no crew votes
no beef...just spiting ;)
gd luck and god bless :thumbup:

Yvonne 07-15-04 07:48 AM

check in..............forgot to add no feeding and blind spit

Aznbl4ckrice 07-15-04 07:57 AM

aight dawg, i guess i spit first. GL to u also bro. here we go.

Aznbl4ckrice 07-15-04 07:58 AM

I'll start this shit off, like azn man miyagi wax on and wax off/
See this dude wit tha name Xxxtasy, rollin off pillz tellin ppl of
his fav. him and his momma fantasy/
hez a super big fan of the pedophile R.Kelly/
See him doin pelvis thrusts askin the children "Come dance wit me"/
jus like him and his gold showaz upon his face the children pee/
I'm not versin wit offense im doin this as cool and politely/
do my fist of fury on yo azz like the new Bruce Lee/
While at tha split second whip my digi and take a pic, say cheez!/
Creepin up closer see u down by the curb/
Rat tat tat! gun shots of my gat could be hurd/
Lyin hopelessly on the ground bashin ya kneez wit a baseball bat/
Spittin in ya face askin "How ya like that?"/
u mus be trippin ballz off of that Ecstacy/
My switch blade tru ur throat while u lay there bleedin dyin slowly/
Cuttin yo wounds deeper and deep...sorry son...I had ta put u to sleep/

16 lines total.

Rice fo lyfe.

Send the votez...

Aznbl4ckrice 07-15-04 08:36 AM

Aw dawg whered ja go? damn son...u signed off dawg...

Yvonne 07-15-04 08:49 AM

my avatar shows im a girl,but this transsexual too me to be a dawg...
even if i was one,i'll lift him off his boots and rush him till he falls & crawl...
many come and many go,u got only 12 posts,boo u still in time to quit and let go,
cos battleing me aint that easy,i leave MC'z thinking like a bitch running crazy...
me battleing this bitch,is just like the beauty and the beast..
your shits may seem like they the shit,but they sick like ur 1inch dick
i'll make you seem like a pussy from NY..cos i lyrically bust you like a stashed wife..
with the name that you got, i see you i see you as a FA-GG-OT.......
the only thin you do on the site,is ryde dicks & get bitch slapped...
10lines is enuff to make you mouth like kayne's,filled with puff....
this phony aint got a shit to do,stay all day on the pc,and easily get whooped
oh nooo....
i see you dry your tears,cos you like a kid filled with fear...
i just wannna make shit clear that i spit simple for you to win...
so thank me for not being mean,but remember i'm the queen

lmao....wack ass drop @ me

Aznbl4ckrice 07-15-04 09:00 AM

Aight, guezz we need sum votez den. So u sayin u'za gurl Xxxtasy? if ya r my bad...

Yvonne 07-15-04 09:08 AM

lol its iight many mistake me for a guy yo...wdf?.......lol

Aznbl4ckrice 07-15-04 09:15 AM

az i think about it...dis iz hard versin a female not bein sexist or nethin, but damn...my verse woulda been good againzt a male tho ha ha. guezz imma jus go ta bed...fuckin 9 in tha am. i got a fun night tonight. Wuz Fun X. Keep it real. Dis iz $-T4nG...I'm out.

Yvonne 07-15-04 09:20 AM

lol iight peace yo and sweet dreams.....ha ha dream of me putting holes in you.....lol jp....

1

Aznbl4ckrice 07-15-04 05:35 PM

Yo neone goin put votez on diz? dont care if i win or loze jus need votez.

Aznbl4ckrice 07-15-04 08:38 PM

c'mon pplz, give us some votez plz...no haterz, jus plain honesty.

mC.Cm 07-15-04 09:02 PM

okay azn
I'll start this shit off, like azn man miyagi wax on and wax off/
Nice.. Like how you used your asianess lol
hez a super big fan of the pedophile R.Kelly/See him doin pelvis thrusts askin the children "Come dance wit me" jus like him and his gold showaz upon his face the children pee/
This 1 cracked me up lol
Not to many personals cause you thought she was a guy.
7.9

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okay XxX
my avatar shows im a girl,but this transsexual too me to be a dawg...
Didnt like your oppener
many come and many go,u got only 12 posts,boo u still in time to quit and let go,
Nice personal
me battleing this bitch,is just like the beauty and the beast..your shits may seem like they the shit,but they sick like ur 1inch dick
Im thinkin thats a personal cause i heard azns got small dicks no offense an all.
8.0
__________________________________________________ _______________
gave it to XxX for more personals but it aint azn fault he thought she was a guy..

Yvonne 07-16-04 08:57 AM

lmao....iight yo..

votes..........so this bat closes up....please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yvonne 07-17-04 07:45 AM

more votes please................

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!

raw killa 07-17-04 01:28 PM

azn i cant really reply 2 urs cuz well u didnt kno dis beggin gurl was actually a gurl but shit woulda been tight if u was battlin a guy n well xxx dude was rite da opener wasnt good but u kno im here 2 give ya tips on ya shit in da future boo but i aint givin u ur flows dat u gotta do ur self rememba practice makes perfect i call dis 1 a draw since azn didnt kno he was battlin a gurl 1 luv peace out

bullethole 07-20-04 03:50 PM

xxtacy u had better punches great structure and flow return da favour http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136023

Yvonne 07-24-04 04:49 PM

^^^damn...cheating aint good son.........
more votes so we close this up............
ima beg 1ce again yo..........pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeee
ugh

Yvonne 07-26-04 07:09 AM

yo wdf?......vote on this bitch mayne its even old.................damn vote vote vote...........holy fuck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
vote goddamnit

MaNiPuLaTiOn 07-26-04 10:05 AM

ok...i hve to vote 4 anz................
simple reason is because xxtasys verse didnt rhyme.......#
not 1 line...............
theres no point sayin anythin else because the whole point is to rhyme.so
regardless of anythin else anz wins

vote-anz

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Yvonne 07-26-04 10:33 AM

^^^ dumb and blind...the fuck u doing on the site when u repeat the same shit all the time.........i aint mad cos u didnt vote for me.......but damn yo u just a stupid lil gurl...mayne!!!!!

uppin honest votes........thanx

D-ICED 07-26-04 10:14 PM

x gets it but she shouldnt have but suns fucking verse made no sense directed at a female and even though x shit was whacked at least she stayed focused on the battle at hand

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Yvonne 07-27-04 06:02 AM

more please.............

uppin

MaNiPuLaTiOn 07-27-04 07:09 AM

yo
 
yo.i dnt wanna beef wit u x.
i wasnt hatin im jus pointin out that ur verse DIDNT rhyme
n the reason i keep sayin that is coz its TRUE!
its your structure thats at fault...ur lines rhyme internally.....
but raw killa rhymed the same way
n all the voters sed it didnt rhyme..it aint jus me.

LOOK DIS IS WOT I MEAN..
many come and many go,u got only 12 posts,boo u still in time to quit and let go,

SHOULD BE

u only got 12 posts, many come and many go
boo u still in time to quit....and let go

UR lines need to b a similar length,n each line needs to end wit the rhymin word/words


now im not tryin ta b funny,jus tryin ta help......thats wot peeps wanna see.
so take the advice or dnt...

Yvonne 07-28-04 10:35 AM

uppin

N.Tavarez 07-28-04 12:43 PM

ima give this to Azn cause he had a better overall verse, his struct made it easier to read,he battled xxx thinkin she was a guy,
xxx shit was hard to get through it didnt flow and at some points it didnt make sense
but truthfully so did Azn's verse so Azn got this but by a hair

NGstuntman 07-28-04 01:51 PM

i'm a give it to xxstacy for the personal points. . .

Yvonne 07-28-04 02:04 PM

thanx............

uppin

BostonLyricist 07-28-04 02:59 PM

this battle was not very good
azn or whateva ya name is...structure was garbage son...terrible..nice wordplay was all you had son..punches wasnt really hitten

xxxtacy mami your punches hit better but nothin to brag on...wordplay was ight..structure was not that good..but you still elevatin


vote .....xxxxtacy

Yvonne 07-29-04 04:26 AM

thanx

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

Yvonne 07-30-04 04:40 AM

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh please vote.............and poll ya vote so this battle closes up..............i beg y'all in the name of GOD & JESUS...please please please................

~Luciano~ 07-30-04 07:16 PM


I'll start this shit off, like azn man miyagi wax on and wax off/
See this dude wit tha name Xxxtasy, rollin off pillz tellin ppl of
his fav. him and his momma fantasy/
5/10
hez a super big fan of the pedophile R.Kelly/
See him doin pelvis thrusts askin the children "Come dance wit me"/
7/10
jus like him and his gold showaz upon his face the children pee/
I'm not versin wit offense im doin this as cool and politely/
6/10
do my fist of fury on yo azz like the new Bruce Lee/
While at tha split second whip my digi and take a pic, say cheez!/
6/10
Creepin up closer see u down by the curb/
Rat tat tat! gun shots of my gat could be hurd/
5/10
Lyin hopelessly on the ground bashin ya kneez wit a baseball bat/
Spittin in ya face askin "How ya like that?"/
6/10
u mus be trippin ballz off of that Ecstacy/
My switch blade tru ur throat while u lay there bleedin dyin slowly/
Cuttin yo wounds deeper and deep...sorry son...I had ta put u to sleep/
6/10

my avatar shows im a girl,but this transsexual too me to be a dawg...
even if i was one,i'll lift him off his boots and rush him till he falls & crawl...
7/10
many come and many go,u got only 12 posts,boo u still in time to quit and let go,
cos battleing me aint that easy,i leave MC'z thinking like a bitch running crazy...
me battleing this bitch,is just like the beauty and the beast..

your shits may seem like they the shit,but they sick like ur 1inch dick
i'll make you seem like a pussy from NY..cos i lyrically bust you like a stashed wife..
with the name that you got, i see you i see you as a FA-GG-OT.......
the only thin you do on the site,is ryde dicks & get bitch slapped...
10lines is enuff to make you mouth like kayne's,filled with puff....
this phony aint got a shit to do,stay all day on the pc,and easily get whooped
oh nooo....
i see you dry your tears,cos you like a kid filled with fear...
i just wannna make shit clear that i spit simple for you to win...
so thank me for not being mean,but remember i'm the queen
^^ this shit dont even rhyme

this came down 2 better punchlines and better wordplay

aznbl4ckrice

Yvonne 07-31-04 03:29 AM

ok

uppin

Hitchcock 07-31-04 01:01 PM

um ima have to give this battle to blckrice cuz xxstasy's verse, half of it didnt even rhyme and it was awkward to read
blckrices' verse wasnt all that hot either but his punches were a lil better
v=blckrice
holla at me
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136408
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136650

Yvonne 07-31-04 01:12 PM

ok........

uppin

Justify 08-01-04 02:24 AM

Both had good punches, although azn's didnt make much sense considerin X is a fem, but its not his fault, XxX had better personals and that is what gave her the win in my opinion..

V/XxXtasy..


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