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J DOT vs M.F.P.
spit same time, due in 15 min...no later, or default
no crew votes and that other coward shit...just keep it gutter |
oh yea...no feedn
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"M.F.P" stands for "mutha fuckin pussy"//
but you'll never get it, u sweeter then sugar cookies// i'll bake this kat, then put him/her on a plate// like im servin da beef, but aint no sit and wait// i bout to go upside yo head wit da 4 banger// and when folks see ya, they gon call u no brainer// and please dont enter if u is a 'no brainer'// get it, naw u dont, cause u simple minded dawg// i gotta bruise on my hip, which comes from breakin da law// u gotta bruise on yo hip, and it aint from da heater// think im 'tyrese', but no 'baby boy' in my wife beater// 10-12 lines u said, fuk it, everythings a go// cause once i pop i cant stop call me lil pringles// |
no wonder ur names 3 dot, it stands for ass
i'll hit u faster than a fisherman with his bass u lookin for a battle but didn't know u'd end up with the best this ain't monoply so there isn't a community chest Leaving you in a mess, let’s see you react to one of my tests Slap cuffs onto your chest; watch you go under cardiac arrest Im not always like this, im a nice guy at first But if ya mouth open up to fast, U gonna get more "slashes" than a "Newbie verse!" Your loss'll just be another.............. one of my creations Never heard of ya, oblivion best describes your reputation! i can see the future, i got u knocked out ur the lil bitch leaving this battle in cries and pouts |
yo i messed that up here's the real thing
i think u miss spelled ur name wen u signed up it should b 3 dot, which stands for a s s i'll hit u faster than a fisherman with his bass u lookin for a battle but didn't know u'd end up with the best this ain't monoply so there isn't a community chest Leaving you in a mess, let’s see you react to one of my tests Slap cuffs onto your chest; watch you go under cardiac arrest Im not always like this, im a nice guy at first But if ya mouth open up to fast, U gonna get more "slashes" than a "Newbie verse!" Your loss'll just be another.............. one of my creations Never heard of ya, oblivion best describes your reputation! i can see the future, i got u knocked out ur the lil bitch leaving this battle in cries and pouts |
:huh: okay.....
^^ppin for votes ppl, no crew votes, and all that other shit |
yo uppin.................
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yo uppin for votes.......................
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m.f.p had better punchlines jfp was alright but didnt hit it for me
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yo uppin..................
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style M.F.P
flow J DOt sturture J DOt disses Jdot punches M.F.P rhymes both it close but vote goes 2 J dot |
alright i think i beat him but o well
uppin........... |
weak battle, U both need to elivate, J Dot gets this one cuz his was the least kornier of the two. elivate a lot more.
V/J Dot. |
sorry for freeposting, but could U peep out any of the battles in my sig and vote. the one wit BK 2 the future is old along wit JaeBurnz, if U can please vote on these 2 so I can move on wit my battles. thanx.
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i dunno what everyone else is readin here but M.F.P took this on 1 line----
Im not always like this, im a nice guy at first But if ya mouth open up to fast, U gonna get more "slashes" than a "Newbie verse!" - funniest punch in the battle-- You both had ur decent parts and ur weak parts but I think M.F.P is the only one here that showed a stand out line-- Vote.. M.F.P |
Alright...Jdots punches just werent landing. I wasnt really feelin em cuz it took me a while ta understand em. And your lines werent rhymin sometimes too. That opener was kinda tite tho. MFP had some nice lines and harder punches. That noobie slash line was kinda tite. But yea this battle was kinda weak and these punches were kinda boring. But MFP gets it...
Vote-MFP Vote on this: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135031 |
Both Had Punches Dat Hit Hard
But Jdot Had More But Towards Da End He Kinda Lost Me But It Was Good So My Vote Is 4 Jdot |
MY FAULT I 4GOT TO ASK U GUYS 2
VOTE ON MY BATTLES AMAYZE VS FORGOTTEN FLOW' http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031 AMAYZE VS 2HARD2LOSE http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487 AMAYZE VS KOOL COL-B http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136465 THANX |
yo thanx for the input
upin............. |
Im not always like this, im a nice guy at first
But if ya mouth open up to fast, U gonna get more "slashes" than a "Newbie verse!" - { that line fucking rocked this whole battle} MFP cooked and served His opponent Here..... J DOT had some decent shit but not enough for the WIN, NO BEEF GUYS OR HATE VOTE MFP |
Return Tha Favor! Me vs. Thugzy J Dot - One thing i liked bout ya rhymes was the gangsta mentality. Ya shit had that edge but some of ya shit didn't even rhyme. LOL. Good structure, easy to read. Ya closer was whack. Good luck and keep elevatin. 5/10 M.F.P. - Your rhymes need some elevatin too but all of yo shit rhymed. You had a punch or so in there. And a few multi's. Structure could of been better. Overall not a bad verse. 6.5/10 Vote: M.F.P. |
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