Battle: DaReTuRn vs Last_Request#1
 

yo sup man
5-12 lines short and simple
no hate/dr/crew votes
you spit first

Aight man lets do this....

They call me last request im one of the best/ my rymes hit u hard like a train hit yo chest/so dont complaine when i put ur game to shame/i dont wanna hear u cry when they vote for me/guys just tell him the truth and let it be/cause once u chose to spit vs me u lose/im like a 5th of vodka with out booze/im sick and fast/and when u spit against me u come in last/so quit give up cause when it comes to rymeing ill just light up/like a fuse with gasoline on the end i light quick and put ur rap game to an external end/



Spit Gl honky..

come on it takes u this long to drop a ryme..ur prolly white want some more time?

Battling me is a mismatch, do u have any last requests
your on the podium now looking worse then johny quest
hillsdale aint shit, just a bunch of country hicks
u dont get no chicks, thats why u just suck dicks
yo im sorry about your dad, do u want to end up like him
6 feet under the ground in a casket with the silver trim
at any time i can relize your pathetic, you aint poetic
i dont need nemore lines, my rhymes are tight respect it

explanations
line 2 he looks like a fat version of johny quest with black hair
line 5 his dad got murdered by his brother and me and last request are like brothers

oright now were uppin for votes lets get this over with

we need votes send em in ladys n gentleman let the best rapper win :)

not even close dareturn had everything over him lol

u could tell everyone that posted in here is new, no disrespect, but i wasnt feeling em, but to give ya'll the honest truth of who won...last request won...his punches, well both punches were not too hot, but they was better then 'turn' or daturn or sumthin...but imma give it up to lastrequest

yo yall new but i gotta go wid last request. his punches hit harder and i could understand it more. Both were not bad but lastrequest hit harder and it flowed alot better. He juss gotta work on his structure though. mY vote goes to last request GOOD JOB

Hey guys thnx for the votes my brother preciates the votes 2 just keep them comin thnx guys

alright lets get the votes comin

Well, yea i agree u can tell that the both of u are new like myself. I wasn't to fond of either of the verses but to choose i choose Dareturn, he had a few punches that were a little better than Request, I ultimately think it was too short of a battle.

Last Request#1 didn't like the style it was weak and need work
dareturn nice flow and style but i don't like that you gotta explain raps

opener: dare
punches: dare
personals: dare
closer:tie
complexty: dare

opener dare
punches dare
personals dare
closer tie
complexty tie

ok but only ok

dareturn is my vote

ok lets close this battle out

Last Request#1

They call me last request im one of the best/
my rymes hit u hard like a train hit yo chest/
->>not terrible 3/10

so dont complaine when i put ur game to shame/
->>i see the internal rhyme but you need a line that rhymes this 2/10

i dont wanna hear u cry when they vote for me/
guys just tell him the truth and let it be/
->>filler but decent 3/10

cause once u chose to spit vs me u lose/
im like a 5th of vodka with out booze/
->>weak 2/10

im sick and fast/
and when u spit against me u come in last/
->>first line is way too short 3/10

so quit give up cause when it comes to rymeing ill just light up/
->>no rhymes in this whatsoever 1/10

like a fuse with gasoline on the end i light quick and put ur rap game to an external end/
->>terrible 0/10

->>total 15/70 21.43%

DaReTuRn

Battling me is a mismatch, do u have any last requests
your on the podium now looking worse then johny quest
->>good first line not feelin the second one 5/10

hillsdale aint shit, just a bunch of country hicks
u dont get no chicks, thats why u just suck dicks
->>nobody from heres heard of hillsdale but good second line 5/10

yo im sorry about your dad, do u want to end up like him
6 feet under the ground in a casket with the silver trim
->>i wouldnt talk about someones dead dad in a battle but you did so i gotta rate it
->>4/10

at any time i can relize your pathetic, you aint poetic
i dont need nemore lines, my rhymes are tight respect it
->>pretty good closer 6/10

->>total 20/40 50.00%


DaReturn took it by a mile...no hate on the low scores I'm rating you compared to the whole board and you both need to elevate. Last Request you need some serious work on your structure and dont get creative with the rhyme scheme till you elevate some. Thats my piece on this battle.

v-DaReturn

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